ONly for Not so perfect SHaayars... like me

by Friend_4uall on April 16, 2005, 09:22:06 AM
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Sabhi to acche hai is duniyaa mein
bataao phir bura kaun hai......................

Bhook to sabhi ko lagti hai....
bataao phir koi bhukaa kyun hai....................

Pyar to hai dilon ka ehsaas............
bataao phir pyaar mein koi bewafaa kyun hai...............

Ilm to sabhi haasil karlete hain ...acchaa ya bura
bataao phir is duniyaa mein jahaalat kyun hai...............

Rishtey.. dost to sabhi ke hote hi hain .....
Bataao phir is duniyaa mein koi tanhaa kyun hai..................
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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2005, 09:46:31 AM »
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Phool hai, shama hai, qumaar bhi hai..........
ek tere aane se charo taraf bahaar hi hai...........

Dil hai, jaan hai, wafaa bhi hai..........
tu jo kahe ek baar....khabar kaa nishaan bhi hai..
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2005, 11:21:07 AM »
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arre nice one friend ji aise hi likhte rahiega!!

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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2005, 12:16:55 PM »
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Thank you meena jee...........mujhe maaloom hai ke ye sher kuch khaas nahi hai...........phir bhi himmat afzaaee ka shukriyaa............................
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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2005, 04:53:40 PM »
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likhne wale ko kabhi apna sher accha nahi lagta :lol:

lekin accha likha hai friend,do keep writing,its an order from a friend glasses2
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2005, 05:05:43 PM »
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wah nidhi ji........
aap aise hi hausala afzai karte rahiyea/..............
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«Reply #6 on: April 17, 2005, 06:38:59 AM »
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likhne wale ko kabhi apna sher accha nahi lagta :lol:

lekin accha likha hai friend,do keep writing,its an order from a friend glasses2


Everything for FRiends and always........................................... Thanks....
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2005, 06:43:05 AM »
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nice  friend...............good going...................:lol:
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2005, 07:08:18 AM »
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Ek aur sher suniye........badi mushkil aur soch soch kar likha hai...oh GOD..

Yaad tumhari aati hai, ek meetha sa dard laati hai
dard humein kuch aisa accha lagne laga..........
hamesha rahe aisi chahat dil mein jaag jaati hai..

Aisa hi kuch haal raha to humein lagta hai darr...
tumhari yaad se kahin pyaar na ho jaaye..

Saamne tum khadi hogi...........
phir bhi is dil mein tumhari yaad aajaaye...........

Thankyou...Frnd :D
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2005, 01:14:53 PM »
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Ek aur sher suniye........badi mushkil aur soch soch kar likha hai...oh GOD..

Yaad tumhari aati hai, ek meetha sa dard laati hai
dard humein kuch aisa accha lagne laga..........
hamesha rahe aisi chahat dil mein jaag jaati hai..

Aisa hi kuch haal raha to humein lagta hai darr...
tumhari yaad se kahin pyaar na ho jaaye..

Saamne tum khadi hogi...........
phir bhi is dil mein tumhari yaad aajaaye...........

Thankyou...Frnd :D
wonderful,u r improving day by day :lol:
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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2005, 01:18:51 PM »
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Thanks Nidhi...................actually your appreciation words prompted me to think and think and finally write a sher.............thank you.......you are really wonderful.... and a good friend...
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«Reply #11 on: April 17, 2005, 07:13:35 PM »
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wowwwww v nice frend ......really nice yaa........................
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«Reply #12 on: April 21, 2005, 06:53:47 AM »
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Sabhi to acche hai is duniyaa mein
bataao phir bura kaun hai......................

Bhook to sabhi ko lagti hai....
bataao phir koi bhukaa kyun hai....................

Pyar to hai dilon ka ehsaas............
bataao phir pyaar mein koi bewafaa kyun hai...............

Ilm to sabhi haasil karlete hain ...acchaa ya bura
bataao phir is duniyaa mein jahaalat kyun hai...............

Rishtey.. dost to sabhi ke hote hi hain .....
Bataao phir is duniyaa mein koi tanhaa kyun hai..................


Wah !! Friend..Nice questions !!!!! happy9

Sabhi achche hote hain dunya lekin
Jazbaat me aa ke bure ban jaate hain

Bhook sabhi ko lagti hai dunya main lekin
Kuch pet ke liye, kuch dil bharne ko khate hain

Pyaar sab ke dilon ka ehsaas hai lekin
Ana pyaar main bewafai ban jati hai

Ilm to sab hi haasil karte hain jahan me lekin
Jahil na apne ilm ka sahi istimaal karte hain

Rishte...dost sab ko hi mila karte hain lekin
Un rishto ko khone ka darr tanha kar deta hai !!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 21, 2005, 06:56:49 AM »
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Phool hai, shama hai, qumaar bhi hai..........
ek tere aane se charo taraf bahaar hi hai...........

Dil hai, jaan hai, wafaa bhi hai..........
tu jo kahe ek baar....khabar kaa nishaan bhi hai..


Waah !! achcha likha hai na !!!

Phool hai shama hai, qumaar bhi hai
Par tu jo nahin to khizaan yeh bahar hai !!

Dil hai, jaan hai, wafaa bhi hai..........
Koi in ko lutaane ko tayyar bhi hai !!!!!!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2005, 07:00:03 AM »
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Ek aur sher suniye........badi mushkil aur soch soch kar likha hai...oh GOD..

Yaad tumhari aati hai, ek meetha sa dard laati hai
dard humein kuch aisa accha lagne laga..........
hamesha rahe aisi chahat dil mein jaag jaati hai..

Aisa hi kuch haal raha to humein lagta hai darr...
tumhari yaad se kahin pyaar na ho jaaye..

Saamne tum khadi hogi...........
phir bhi is dil mein tumhari yaad aajaaye...........

Thankyou...Frnd :D


Bohot khoob !!! jazbaat chalak rahe hain har lafz main !!!!

yaadain tumhaari meetha dard de jaati hain
satati hain humen magar phir hi hansati hain !!!!

Aisa hua hai haal ab kuch is dil-e-beemar ka
tere bin mehfil main bhi tanhaayi nazar aati hai!!!!!!![/b]
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