ONly for Not so perfect SHaayars... like me

by Friend_4uall on April 16, 2005, 09:22:06 AM
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«Reply #30 on: April 25, 2005, 04:07:31 PM »
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shaam se aankh mein nammi si hai
aaj phir aap ki kami si hai
shaam se aankh mein nami si hai

dafan karr do humme ke sans mille
nabaj kuch derr se thami si hai
aaj phir aap ki kammi si hai

waqt rehta nahin kahi tikk karr
iski aadat bhi aadami si hai
iss ki aadat bhi aadami si hai
aaj phir aap ki kammi si hai

koi rishta nahin raha phir bhi ek tasvir lajmi si hai
shaam se aankh mein nammi si hai
aaj phir aap ki kammi si hai

singer is Jagjit Singh, Shayer is Gulzar

Hope this Helps...
Apnaa_koi
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«Reply #31 on: April 25, 2005, 04:38:05 PM »
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Yeah !! its is a beautiful Ghazal !!!!

Aaj phir shaam laayi hai tanhaayi
Aaj phir yaadon ne sataya hai teri
Aaj phir hum baithe kisi intezar me
Aaj phir laut ke nahin aaya hai koi
Aaj phir dil ne kuch khwahish ki thi
Aaj phir askhon ki lagi hai jharhi
Aaj phir socha ki keh den dil ki baat
Aaj phir qadam ruk gaye yoon hi !!!!!!!!
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«Reply #32 on: May 02, 2005, 05:17:41 PM »
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Thanks Nidhi...................actually your appreciation words prompted me to think and think and finally write a sher.............thank you.......you are really wonderful.... and a good friend...


most welcome frnd,i m coming after a little long time  :wink:  and cud see ur wonderful work,really improving and every other poem of urs has more and more perfection. Talat ne bhi bohat khoob saath diya hai,excellent work talat,very nice written  :D .

"Dost hote hain saath nibhane ke liye......,
 dost hote hain tanhaiyaan mitane ke liye..,
 agar dost maana hai to dosti nibhana....,
 dosti hai hi dost k liye kuch kar jaane ke liye."
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«Reply #33 on: May 03, 2005, 07:45:48 AM »
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Thanks Nidhi...........And Talat...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #34 on: May 03, 2005, 07:50:22 AM »
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Kisi ki yaad mein kabhi na royen
Ye to chaaaha humne hameshaa..

Koi tinkaa gir kar
Aankh bhar aaye to hum kya karen...............

Frnd
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«Reply #35 on: May 03, 2005, 07:52:24 AM »
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Aarzoo sabhi ke dil mein hoti hai...
isme aarzoo ka kyaa kasoor...

Koi aarzoo humare dil mein na aaye
To hum kya karen....................
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«Reply #36 on: May 03, 2005, 07:58:19 AM »
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hey........wow friend,good good:D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #37 on: May 03, 2005, 09:15:12 AM »
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Dil na kisi ka toote
ye tamanna hai hamari...........

Kisi kaa dil sheeshe se bhi naazuk nikle
to hum kyaa karen
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«Reply #38 on: May 04, 2005, 06:14:00 AM »
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Thanks Nidhi n Friend... Nice ones Friend ...Nidhi your encouragement has made him almost a perfect shayar!!!!

Humne to hansna hi chaha tha sada
Hanste hanste aankhen bheeg jaayen
to hum kya karen.............................

Humne to phoolon se bharna chaha tha daaman apna
Jo sirf kaante hi haathon main aayen
to hum kya karen.............................

Nasheman sajaya tha band palkon ke peeche
Ek hawa ka jhonka use ujaad jaaye
to hum kya karen.............................
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«Reply #39 on: May 04, 2005, 06:17:14 AM »
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TUmhe ham hansaayenge sadaa....
Ye wada hai humaraa humse....
Tumhe kisi ke aansu dekhkar hansi aaye
to hum kyaa karen.................
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«Reply #40 on: May 04, 2005, 06:19:25 AM »
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Phool to tum khud ho.....paak daaman hai tumhara...
Koi humein kaantaa kehkar bulaaye to
Hum kyaa karein....
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«Reply #41 on: May 04, 2005, 06:21:15 AM »
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Band palkon ke peeche sirf Khwaab dekhe jaate hain...
kisi khwaab ki taabir na ho...
to hum kyaa karein..............
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«Reply #42 on: May 04, 2005, 06:25:05 AM »
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aap sab bahut hi acha likh rahe hai yaar really too good specially last one by freind

hum dene tujhe khusi umar bhar
tujhe khusi mile dil thodke tuh hum kya kare
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«Reply #43 on: May 04, 2005, 06:25:34 AM »
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koi apna mile mil kar bichad jaaye
kismat main likhi ho judaai sada
to hum kya karen......................

socha tha bhula denge yaadain saari
dil usko hi humesha yaad kiye jaaye
to hum kya karen......................

waada kiya hai muskuraate rehenge
gar  muskurat aansu bhi saath laaye
to hum kya karen......................
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«Reply #44 on: May 04, 2005, 06:28:14 AM »
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Jo apnaa hota hai.......wo milta hai..milke bichadta nahi...
koi paraya kahkar humein bhoolaana chahe
to hum kyaa karein...
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