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Dil ke is dard mein ek raaz chhupa hai shayad
Aankhon mein bas ke koi door hua hai shayad
Ek aatish hai jo bujhti nahi jalti bhi nahi
Dil lagaane se hi ye haal hua hai shayad
Hai to wo door magar phir bhi nazar aata hai
Jo mere paas hai wo mujhse juda hai shayad
Mujhko maloom hai paana use mumkin hi nahi
Aas ka dil mein diya phir bhi jalaa hai shayad
Ae tabeebo main samajhta hun ke kyon ho khamosh
Mera marna hi mere gham ki dawaa hai shayad
Riyaz 'Ashna'
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2010, 01:04:34 PM » |
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beautiful poem Riyaz ji....
likhne pe majbur karde wo kalam hai aapki
itni safai itni kashish hai kalam me aapki
nahin socha tha k iske jawab me kuch kaur kahungi
ungliyan na thami padhke ye nazm aapki...!!!
haan yehi dil k saudagiri ka inaam hota hai
labon pe muskaan aankhon me ashk hota hai
nahin de sakte hum dawa ya dua kisko
har pal bas uski judai me dil aashna hota hai...!!! |
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2010, 04:49:36 PM » |
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Nice creation.........
KoyiN behad kareeb hai, Usko pehchaan gaya huN
Chand roz ka mehmaan huN, Itna jaan gaya huN
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2010, 05:05:56 PM » |
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wah riyaz ji bahut khoob jasbir singh hira_company@yahoo.com |
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2010, 05:07:35 PM » |
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wah wah wah kasak ji.. aap ney bhi bahut hi khoob likha hai ...
jasbir singh
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2010, 06:25:06 AM » |
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Aapka tah-e-dil se shukriya Kasak ji ke aapne meri is koshish ko pasand kiya. Aapki poetry bhi lajawab hai. Bahot achha likha hai aapne. beautiful poem Riyaz ji....
likhne pe majbur karde wo kalam hai aapki
itni safai itni kashish hai kalam me aapki
nahin socha tha k iske jawab me kuch kaur kahungi
ungliyan na thami padhke ye nazm aapki...!!!
haan yehi dil k saudagiri ka inaam hota hai
labon pe muskaan aankhon me ashk hota hai
nahin de sakte hum dawa ya dua kisko
har pal bas uski judai me dil aashna hota hai...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2010, 04:57:22 PM » |
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Parwaaz sahab aapka tah e dil se shukria ke aapne meri kawish ko pasand farmaya. Nice creation.........
KoyiN behad kareeb hai, Usko pehchaan gaya huN
Chand roz ka mehmaan huN, Itna jaan gaya huN
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2010, 03:47:07 AM » |
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Jasbir sahab aapka behad shukriya ke aapne meri creation ko pasand kiya.
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2010, 09:53:33 AM » |
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jnaab riyaaz saheb bahoot khoobsurat "ghazal" bazm ko ata ki hai hr sher umda raha ,ek behetreen kalaam pe dil se hazaro daad.....
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2010, 11:34:16 AM » |
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Dil ke is dard mein ek raaz chhupa hai shayad
Aankhon mein bas ke koi door hua hai shayad
Ek aatish hai jo bujhti nahi jalti bhi nahi
Dil lagaane se hi ye haal hua hai shayad
Hai to wo door magar phir bhi nazar aata hai
Jo mere paas hai wo mujhse juda hai shayad
Mujhko maloom hai paana use mumkin hi nahi
Aas ka dil mein diya phir bhi jalaa hai shayad
Riyaz 'Ashna'
bahut khoob reyaz sb |
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«Reply #12 on: August 09, 2010, 04:54:17 AM » |
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Nazar sahab zarranawazi ka shukriya. Aapko ghazal pasand aai ye jaankar khushi hui. Aainda bhi aapse hausla afazaai ki ummeed rahegi.jnaab riyaaz saheb bahoot khoobsurat "ghazal" bazm ko ata ki hai hr sher umda raha ,ek behetreen kalaam pe dil se hazaro daad.....
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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2010, 05:51:11 AM » |
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KA ji aapka tah e dil se shukriya ke aapne meri kawish ko pasand farmaya. Aapse aainda bhi hausla afazaai ki ummeed rakhunga.
bahut khoob reyaz sb
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