Paana use mumkin hi nahi

by riyaz106 on August 05, 2010, 12:55:01 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 09, 2010, 06:59:17 AM »
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Khwaish Bhai aapka tah-e-dil se shukriya ke aapne meri is koshish ko pasand farmaya. Aapka ye hausla afzaai ka jazba bhi tareef ke qabil hai. Phir se shukriya.

Dar asl shuru ke do sher maine ek Yoindian(Kasak Dil ki) ki poem se mutassir hokar likhe the aur reply mein post kiye the. Phir isme do sher aur add kar diye aur nai thread mein puri poem post kar di. Aapne mera wo reply parha hoga isliye aapko aisa laga.
Quote from: khwaish on August 09, 2010, 06:22:29 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Riyaz Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shayad Aapne Yeh ghazal Ko Dobara Post Kiya  Usual Smile

Bahut Ache.
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«Reply #16 on: August 09, 2010, 10:44:49 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Riyaz bhai,bahut gaherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne,wonderful lines by Kasak ji ad Parwaaz ji.keep it up. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: August 09, 2010, 12:44:27 PM »
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Shihab Bhai aapka tah e dil se shukriya ke aapne meri is kawish ko psand kiya. Allah aapko bhi khush rakhe.
Quote from: Shihab on August 09, 2010, 10:14:35 AM
Bhai Riyaz Aadab...
Umeed Karta Hun Aap Khairiyat Se Honge...!
Aur Bhai Maafi Chahta Hun Meri Kamzor Nazron Ne
Itne Derr Se Dekha....
Bahut Hi Achchi Peshkash Hai Bhai Humesha Ki Tarah.

ALLAH Pak Aapko Humesha Khush Rakhe Ameen.


~Shihab~
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«Reply #18 on: August 09, 2010, 01:34:30 PM »
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Madhu-di aapka behad behad shukrguzar hun ke aapne meri koshish ko saraha.
Quote from: madhuwesh on August 09, 2010, 10:44:49 AM
Wah bahut khoob Riyaz bhai,bahut gaherai aur khoobsurti se likha aapne,wonderful lines by Kasak ji ad Parwaaz ji.keep it up. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: August 09, 2010, 01:43:18 PM »
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RIYAZ JEE BAHUT KHOOB!BAS EK OR SHER KEE KAMEE MAHSOOS HO RAHEE HAI.
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«Reply #20 on: August 10, 2010, 02:50:05 AM »
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Mamta ji aapka behad shukriya. Aapki baat sahi hai ke ek sher ki kami hai. Kabhi sher bante chale jate hain aur kabhi chahkar bhi nahi. Aapki tajveez ke baad sochta raha aur ek sher ho gaya--

Ae tabeebo main samajhta hun ke kyon ho khamosh
Mera marna hi mere gham ki dawaa hai shayad
Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 09, 2010, 01:43:18 PM
RIYAZ JEE BAHUT KHOOB!BAS EK OR SHER KEE KAMEE MAHSOOS HO RAHEE HAI.
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«Reply #21 on: August 10, 2010, 04:16:55 AM »
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RIYAZ JEE BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA!AAPNE MERI BAAT PAR GOUR KARKE APNI TAKHLEEK KO GAZAL HONE KA HAQ ADAA KIYA.AAP KA YE SHER BHI DIL PAR APNA ASAR CHOD GAYA.......BAHUT KHOOB!
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«Reply #22 on: August 10, 2010, 11:10:29 AM »
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Behad shukriya Mamta ji.
Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 10, 2010, 04:16:55 AM
RIYAZ JEE BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA!AAPNE MERI BAAT PAR GOUR KARKE APNI TAKHLEEK KO GAZAL HONE KA HAQ ADAA KIYA.AAP KA YE SHER BHI DIL PAR APNA ASAR CHOD GAYA.......BAHUT KHOOB!
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«Reply #23 on: August 13, 2010, 10:19:14 PM »
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Riyaz sahab aadab ,,

Takhir ke liye mazrath ,, Apki Tareef me kya kaha jaye sahab ..wah wah ..Eak nahi balke hazarah dad apki Is Rawan dawan ghazal pe .. Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


Dua go

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #24 on: August 14, 2010, 12:00:00 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on August 05, 2010, 12:55:01 PM
Dil ke is dard mein ek raaz chhupa hai shayad
Aankhon mein bas ke koi door hua hai shayad
Ek aatish hai jo bujhti nahi jalti bhi nahi
Dil lagaane se hi ye haal hua hai shayad
Hai to wo door magar phir bhi nazar aata hai
Jo mere paas hai wo mujhse juda hai shayad
Mujhko maloom hai paana use mumkin hi nahi
Aas ka dil mein diya phir bhi jalaa hai shayad

Ae tabeebo main samajhta hun ke kyon ho khamosh
Mera marna hi mere gham ki dawaa hai shayad

Riyaz 'Ashna'

Bahut umda lekhni hai Riyaz Ji
Yun hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #25 on: August 17, 2010, 07:18:26 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on August 05, 2010, 12:55:01 PM
Dil ke is dard mein ek raaz chhupa hai shayad
Aankhon mein bas ke koi door hua hai shayad
Ek aatish hai jo bujhti nahi jalti bhi nahi
Dil lagaane se hi ye haal hua hai shayad
Hai to wo door magar phir bhi nazar aata hai
Jo mere paas hai wo mujhse juda hai shayad
Mujhko maloom hai paana use mumkin hi nahi
Aas ka dil mein diya phir bhi jalaa hai shayad

Ae tabeebo main samajhta hun ke kyon ho khamosh
Mera marna hi mere gham ki dawaa hai shayad

Riyaz 'Ashna'
Bahut khoob Riyaz Sahab, Behad umda peshkash, shaandaar Ghazal.....
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«Reply #26 on: August 17, 2010, 07:45:39 PM »
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Wah Riyaaz Sahaab behad khoob peshkash .....
Dilfareb ahsaas aur umda bayani....
Dil ko chu gaye aapke ashaar...
Dil se daad hazir hai......

Khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.....
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«Reply #27 on: August 17, 2010, 07:50:37 PM »
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Waah Bohat Achchi Ghazal Hai Riyaz Bhai,.
Very touching
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«Reply #28 on: August 18, 2010, 10:16:13 AM »
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Abdul Qadeer sahab aapka behad behad shukriya ke aapne meri ghaza ko pasand farmaya.
Quote from: Qadeer.Toopchi on August 13, 2010, 10:19:14 PM
Riyaz sahab aadab ,,

Takhir ke liye mazrath ,, Apki Tareef me kya kaha jaye sahab ..wah wah ..Eak nahi balke hazarah dad apki Is Rawan dawan ghazal pe .. Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..


Dua go

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«Reply #29 on: August 18, 2010, 10:17:59 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji ghazal ko pasand farmaya aapne. Zarra nawazi hai aapki.
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 14, 2010, 12:00:00 AM
Bahut umda lekhni hai Riyaz Ji
Yun hi likhte rahiye
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