PAHECHAAN...........................................................AB

by adil bechain on April 08, 2009, 11:24:18 AM

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«Reply #15 on: July 29, 2009, 12:56:10 PM »

Good work, though you need to fix grammar and pattern of poetry.
Anyway, well done, keep writing.


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Re: PAHECHAAN...........................................................AB

«Reply #16 on: August 03, 2009, 01:04:47 PM »

Quote from: MHussain on July 29, 2009, 12:56:10 PM

Good work, though you need to fix grammar and pattern of poetry.
Anyway, well done, keep writing.

THANK U SIR FOR UOOR KIND ADVICE


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