pahla..pahla..pyaar.ky

by kameeney on September 08, 2010, 09:31:15 PM
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                        zindagi meri khushbu bana gaya koi.!
                        pyaar ki manzil mujhe dikha gaya koi.!!

                        wajood apna khaali khaali sa tha,
                        dil mein mere samaa gaya koi,

                        mehfil-e-bazm mein khamosh the labb mere,
                        ghazal ek mujhe bataa gaya koi,

                        ada-e-husn leti hai jaan aksar,
                        nazar se mujhe apna banaa gaya koi,

                        bhoole gaa kaise waqt wo tu kameeney...!!
                        ki tujh se tujh ko churaa gaya koi...............!!


                                      love9
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2010, 09:37:02 PM »
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Phela phela pyar hai
pheli pheli baar hai

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Wat u say
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2010, 09:44:53 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob likha hai aaapne K ji....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2010, 09:58:24 PM »
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K Jee aadaab!

janab itna khoob likhte hai aap aur aapne aisa ID rakha hai... aur usko sher meiN bhi use kiya hume hasi aayi sorry ....

Aapki creation achchi lagi hume..... Daad
Sabhi sher achche hai......

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye....Usual Smile

And ho sake to K jee apna ID change kar dijiye.... yeh humari rai hai.... gar aap munaseeb samjheN to change kara lijiye
     
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«Reply #4 on: September 09, 2010, 03:05:01 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI     KAMEENEY JI....


TANHA ZINDAGI MEIN YAAR MIL GAYA KOI
MERA PAHLA PAHLA PYAAR BAN GAYA KOI..
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«Reply #5 on: September 09, 2010, 04:00:48 AM »
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teri isi adaa pe k ji
humko to pyaar aayaa......

mastam mast gazal kji  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aur mujhe sabse achcha yehi laga k aapne apna id itne khudsuart way me isme use kiya hai...

ye khubsurat khata hum bhi karna chahenge apne reply me iss gaal k liye...jante hain aap aitraaz nahin karenge..isly puch nahin rahe bata rahe hain...
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«Reply #6 on: September 09, 2010, 09:27:01 AM »
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Awesome creation k ji.... Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause


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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 04:21:06 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on September 08, 2010, 09:37:02 PM
Phela phela pyar hai
pheli pheli baar hai

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Wat u say


THANK U NEEL JI
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2010, 04:21:51 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 08, 2010, 09:44:53 PM
Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob likha hai aaapne K ji....!!!

THANK U KLASKER JI
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 04:23:25 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 08, 2010, 09:58:24 PM
K Jee aadaab!

janab itna khoob likhte hai aap aur aapne aisa ID rakha hai... aur usko sher meiN bhi use kiya hume hasi aayi sorry ....

Aapki creation achchi lagi hume..... Daad
Sabhi sher achche hai......

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye....Usual Smile

And ho sake to K jee apna ID change kar dijiye.... yeh humari rai hai.... gar aap munaseeb samjheN to change kara lijiye
     


SHUKRIYA PARWAAZ SAHAB....JAB AADAT SUDHAR JAAYE GI...NAAM BHI BADAL JAAYE GAA
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2010, 04:24:11 PM »
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Quote from: cara on September 09, 2010, 03:05:01 AM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI     KAMEENEY JI....


TANHA ZINDAGI MEIN YAAR MIL GAYA KOI
MERA PAHLA PAHLA PYAAR BAN GAYA KOI..

BAHUT KHOOB CARA JI
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2010, 04:25:42 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on September 09, 2010, 04:00:48 AM
teri isi adaa pe k ji
humko to pyaar aayaa......

mastam mast gazal kji  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
aur mujhe sabse achcha yehi laga k aapne apna id itne khudsuart way me isme use kiya hai...

ye khubsurat khata hum bhi karna chahenge apne reply me iss gaal k liye...jante hain aap aitraaz nahin karenge..isly puch nahin rahe bata rahe hain...



DHANYAWAAD MADAM JI....REPLY KARO NA PHIR....KAAHE KI DERI HAI
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«Reply #12 on: September 15, 2010, 04:28:15 PM »
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Quote from: thinkhattk on September 09, 2010, 09:27:01 AM
Awesome creation k ji.... Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause



THANK U DEAR



NOTE ON UR QUOTE AS SAID IN THE AVATAR.....

           HOW CAN I LUV MYSELF

           IF SOMEONE IZ MORE LOVABLE THAN ME.......!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: September 15, 2010, 04:29:01 PM »
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wonderful kameeney ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: September 15, 2010, 04:34:18 PM »
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Quote from: kameeney on September 08, 2010, 09:31:15 PM
                        zindagi meri khushbu bana gaya koi.!
                        pyaar ki manzil mujhe dikha gaya koi.!!

                        wajood apna khaali khaali sa tha,
                        dil mein mere samaa gaya koi,

                        mehfil-e-bazm mein khamosh the labb mere,
                        ghazal ek mujhe bataa gaya koi,

                        ada-e-husn leti hai jaan aksar,
                        nazar se mujhe apna banaa gaya koi,

                        bhoole gaa kaise waqt wo tu kameeney...!!
                        ki tujh se tujh ko churaa gaya koi...............!!


                                      love9

Bahut khoob
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