Shikha bahut hi sundar paigam diya hai realy good.
Thanks for reading and commenting..
shikha...
is ghazal ka har sher dus dus baar padha.....ye tay karna mere liye mushkil hai ki kounsa sher behtar hai...har sher bheetar tak jhinjhod deta hai wazud ko.....ek ke baad ek chot karta hai seedhe dil par.......
......ye yakeenan behtreen peshkashon me se ek hai...jinhe yo par mai bahoot pasand karta hun.
mere shabdon ka bhandaar khali ho jayega...par mai iski prashansa nahi kar paungaa.......
ek behad umda...............rachna hai.........
kamal likha gaya hai sab kuch.........ek ek shabd tarasha hua aur poori tarah lay-baddh ye rachna....beshak aapko....yo ka sirmour bana deti hai.........
Sanjeev, these are one of the bestest words I have read about my poetry.. Though, it was not that much appreciable, but still I feel on top of the world.. Thanks a lot for this much encouragement..
mahiya ji,
aaj shukruguzaar hu mein sabse pehle waqt ka--kyonki sami samay pur yahan vicharan kur raha thaa tabhee pahuch saka itni sashakt kavita se rubaru hone.
shabdon ka sahi chayan aur hakeeqat ke kitni kareeb he yeh kavita!aap daad kabool farmaye...is behtareen kavita ke liye.
celmira ji,
aapne bhee khoob saath diya he.aapka prayas aur peshkush pukhta he,isey nazarandaaz nahi kar sakta koi bhee.dhnyawaad.
Prateek
Ye ek bahut badi baat hoti hai jab koi shabdon aur khayaalon ka dhani, aapke likhe ko encourage karta hai.. Bahut bahut Shukriya
Prateek, aapne hamara likha hua padha aur us par apne comments diye..
bahoot khoob Mahiya and Celmira....bahoot he acha likha hai... Mahiya apki pahli kavita.. jaise shabd he khatam ho gaye hai ki app ki is kavita ki parshansa main kaya kahu... bahoot acha likhati hai app.. aise he likjte rahe.. 
Aapke khoobsurat shabdon ke liye bahut bahut Shukriya
Sarthika..
Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! har ek line, har ek shabd kuch keh raha hai..aapne bahut hi khoobsurat kavita likhi hai mahiya..
iss kavita ki Main kitni bhi tareef karoon, kam pad jaayegi..
bahut hi khoobsurat paigam diya hai aapne..Great work!!!!
Ek chhoti si koshish par aapke comments mile, bahut achha laga.. Shukriya
Khwaish.. 
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