Pal jo zindagi mein aate hai, jaate hai.............................Nikhaar

by Nikhaar on October 09, 2011, 05:26:08 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 14, 2011, 03:41:00 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 10, 2011, 10:19:47 AM
Nikhaar ji
aadaab
Bahut behatrin tarike se pesh kiya hai apne. Dil se nikli daad kubool kare.
Teh dil se shukriya mkv ji
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«Reply #16 on: October 14, 2011, 03:49:48 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on October 10, 2011, 12:35:58 PM
bht khoob nikhar ji...
shukriya aapka
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«Reply #17 on: October 14, 2011, 03:56:45 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on October 10, 2011, 01:53:44 AM
bahoot ache Nikhaar ji --

Parwaaz ji ne bhi sahi kaha
kya sirf dard bhare pal hi aate hain zindgi me!!

aksar hum khushiyon ke paloN ko bhul jaate hain--

nazariya badalne se kbi kbi zindgi badal jati hai Usual Smile

aapki iss khoob khayalat aur nagme par
dil se daad Usual Smile

muskurate rahie
khus rahie
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Hausla afzaai k liye bahut bahut shukriya aapka...aur khoob kha aapne nazariya badlane se kabhi kabhi zindagi badal jaati hai...aapki iss nasihat ko dhyan rakhege. Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: October 14, 2011, 04:02:30 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on October 14, 2011, 03:56:45 PM
Hausla afzaai k liye bahut bahut shukriya aapka...aur khoob kha aapne nazariya badlane se kabhi kabhi zindagi badal jaati hai...aapki iss nasihat ko dhyan rakhege. Usual Smile
Nihaar ji--
humne koi nasihat nahi di--
ye to ek sach hai jo hum mante hain bas Usual Smile

thanx Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: October 14, 2011, 04:06:56 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on October 10, 2011, 04:50:46 PM

Bahut Bahut khoob Nikhar Ji...

Parwaaz sahab aur Rahim Bhai aap logo ne bhi kya khoob ish nazm me jaan daal di aur ise poora kiya..

bahut khoob sabhi k liye...
khush rahe...  Applause Applause Applause Applause

aapka bahut bahut shukriya Touhid ji.
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«Reply #20 on: October 14, 2011, 04:10:43 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on October 14, 2011, 04:02:30 PM
Nihaar ji--
humne koi nasihat nahi di--
ye to ek sach hai jo hum mante hain bas Usual Smile

thanx Usual Smile
ji nahi mera wo matlab nahi tha....mean aapki seekh ko yaad rakhege....khuch galat kha ho toh maafi chahti hu
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«Reply #21 on: October 14, 2011, 04:18:07 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on October 14, 2011, 04:10:43 PM
ji nahi mera wo matlab nahi tha....mean aapki seekh ko yaad rakhege....khuch galat kha ho toh maafi chahti hu
offo--
maafi,galat,bura,acha,mera vo mtlab nhi tha, aisa nhi kaha,wesa nhi kaha---etc etc Shabd sarfira ki dictionary me nhi hain Usual Smile

so --dear mind it--

aap bhi bht sochti hain shayd tongue3

muskurate rahie
khus rahie
Usual Smile aise Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: October 14, 2011, 04:24:19 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on October 14, 2011, 04:18:07 PM
offo--
maafi,galat,bura,acha,mera vo mtlab nhi tha, aisa nhi kaha,wesa nhi kaha---etc etc Shabd sarfira ki dictionary me nhi hain Usual Smile

so --dear mind it--

aap bhi bht sochti hain shayd tongue3

muskurate rahie
khus rahie
Usual Smile aise Usual Smile
DOH  wave
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«Reply #23 on: October 29, 2011, 08:34:57 PM »
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bahut acche se aapne sach samjha diya
itna easily ki padhte padhte life flash back hone lagi Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: October 29, 2011, 08:36:49 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: October 31, 2011, 03:39:08 PM »
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Quote from: injured.warrior on October 29, 2011, 08:34:57 PM
bahut acche se aapne sach samjha diya
itna easily ki padhte padhte life flash back hone lagi Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: injured.warrior on October 29, 2011, 08:36:49 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Itni saari taaliyon k liye dher saara shukriya aapka....iss se behtar taarif kya ho sakti hai k likhe huye alfaaz hamein hamari yaadon mein le jaaye...aur yaadein khoobsurat ho toh kya kehne....shukriya Injured ji
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«Reply #26 on: November 30, 2011, 11:57:15 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on October 09, 2011, 05:26:08 PM
Kaafi waqt baad aaj khuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...aur iss koshish ko kamyaabi bhi mil jaayegi gar aap sab mera saath de...mai iss kavita ko ant nahi de paayi...ummid hai aap sab inn palon ko pura karne mein mera saath zarur dege... Usual Smile


Khuch pal jo zindagi mein aate hai , jaate hai
Reh-rehkar hamien apni har pal ye yaad dilate hai  Applause

Wo pal jinme insaan toot jaaye  Applause
Wo pal jinme zindagi bhi chhut_ti nazar aaye  Applause
Lekar ashq aankhon mein aise mein,hum kha tak jaate hai  Applause Applause
Tanhayi ko apna kar zindagi ka shok manate hai  sad7
Khuch pal zindagi mein aate hai, jaate hai

Wo pal yaad jinhe na dil rakhna chahe  Applause
Wo pal rooh tak ko jo zakhmi kar jaaye  Applause
Apne aks se bhi phir hum ghabraate hai  Applause Applause Applause
Ye pal jab zindagi ka kadwa sach kehlaate hai  Applause Applause
Khuch pal zindagi mein aate hai, jaate hai

Uss pal mein jaakar kaise ho ek nayi shuruaat
Jis pal ne kiya ho har pal vishwaasghaat  sad7 sad7
Suna hai pal aksar apni gaatha dohraate hai
Zindagi ko puraani raahon par le jaate hai
Khuch pal zindagi mein aate hai, jaate hai

Shayad behtar hai aise mein, uss pal se door ho jana  Applause
Aur man mein ek nayi aas jagana  Applause
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Nicely written by u.

vaqt ke thapedo se apni naiya ko paar lagaana
par kaise bhool payenge chahte jo bhool jana
bada mushkil hai un yaado se peecha chudana
jindgi jinke karan ban gai hai afsaana
chain se hi baith sake hai kya koi thikaaana
apne dil ki baato ko kisi se kya bataana
dena hoga javaab dil ko,ab nahi hai ghabrana
dil ka ek kona tujhe, ab bhi chahe apnana

just a try...difficult to finish...
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«Reply #27 on: November 30, 2011, 03:06:57 PM »
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dher saara shukraaana mkv ji....aur bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne...har lafj dil ko bhaa gya...aur bilkul sahi kha aapne...really dificult to finish...khuch palon ko bhulna , unhe ek anzaam tak pahuchana bahut mushkil hota hai
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