Pal-Pal mein Apni Pehchaan Badal Jaati Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on July 06, 2010, 12:35:19 PM
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Goonj Mere Gehre Khayalo Ki Mujhse Takraati Hai
Zinda Hai Yahan Har Shaks!!!
Kyonki Zindagi khud Jeena Seekhati Hai...

Hoon To Mitti ka Putla Par Saansein Leta Hoon Abhi,
Hai haqeeqat Yehi ke Apni Hasti,
Aakhir Mein Mitti Mein Hi Mil Jaati Hai...

Kisi Ka Humsafar Hoon Aur Kisi Ke liye Hoon Sirf Ek Ajnabi!!!
Ajeeb hai yeh Duniya Pal-Pal Mein Apni pehchaan Badal Jaati Hai

Veeraniyon Ka Khauff Main Bhi Rakhta Hoon Dil Mein
Tanhaiyon Mein Apni Awaaz Deewaron Se Takraati Hai

Mujhse Mil sako To jaan Paaoge Ke "Khwaish " Kaun Hai???
varna Ek Shayar Ki Tasveer Sirf Uski Shayari Mein Hi Nazar Aati Hai...

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2010, 03:37:51 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahooot umda bro..............aur akhiri sher to kamal hai, daad kabool karen
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2010, 04:24:45 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahooot umda bro..............aur akhiri sher to kamal hai, daad kabool karen

Sanjeev Bhai, Aapka Comment dekhkar, Dil Nihaal Ho gaya..

Bahut bahut hukriya Mere Bhai..Bas Yuhi Saath Dete rahiyega..Aaka Pyaar Bhara Thaapda mil jaaye to aur kya chaahiye humein.. icon_flower
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2010, 05:43:07 PM »
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Awesome bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut khooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooob khwish ji jitni taarif karu kam hai..bahut hi badhiya likha hai apne khaskar ki last line is just too gud... Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2010, 03:08:36 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2010, 07:19:50 AM »
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Awesome bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut khooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooob khwish ji jitni taarif karu kam hai..bahut hi badhiya likha hai apne khaskar ki last line is just too gud... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Geetji, Pasand Farmaane ke liye Aapka Teh Dil Se shukriya..

Aapke inn Comments Ke Badualat Se hi Himmat Jod Paata Hoon Kuch Likhne Ki...

Bas..Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2010, 02:12:31 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 07, 2010, 07:19:50 AM
Geetji, Pasand Farmaane ke liye Aapka Teh Dil Se shukriya..

Aapke inn Comments Ke Badualat Se hi Himmat Jod Paata Hoon Kuch Likhne Ki...

Bas..Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega.. icon_flower

Ji zarur...
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2010, 02:27:27 PM »
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Khawaishji bada jaandaar hai kalaam aapka.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Teri shayri mai tera aksh dekha hai
Tan ki khoobsurti mai kya rakha hai
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2010, 03:42:14 PM »
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Bahaut khubsoorat likha hai Dost apne..Yun hi likte rahiye...bahaut bahaut sunder... Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2010, 04:14:44 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kapilji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2010, 12:55:53 PM »
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Ji zarur...

Shukriya Geetji icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2010, 10:07:26 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 07, 2010, 03:08:36 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!!

Pasand Farmane Ke Liye Teh Dil Se Shukriya Kapil Ji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2010, 10:13:18 AM »
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khwaishji bahut umda,dil chunewala aur gehrai se likha hai aapne.bahut khoob
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hoon to mitti ka putla par takraata hun chattano se.
kyonki nzindagi hi takraane ka hausla deti hai.

Quote from: khwaish on July 06, 2010, 12:35:19 PM
Goonj Mere Gehre Khayalo Ki Mujhse Takraati Hai
Zinda Hai Yahan Har Shaks!!!
Kyonki Zindagi khud Jeena Seekhati Hai...

Hoon To Mitti ka Putla Par Saansein Leta Hoon Abhi,
Hai haqeeqat Yehi ke Apni Hasti,
Aakhir Mein Mitti Mein Hi Mil Jaati Hai...

Kisi Ka Humsafar Hoon Aur Kisi Ke liye Hoon Sirf Ek Ajnabi!!!
Ajeeb hai yeh Duniya Pal-Pal Mein Apni pehchaan Badal Jaati Hai

Veeraniyon Ka Khauff Main Bhi Rakhta Hoon Dil Mein
Tanhaiyon Mein Apni Awaaz Deewaron Se Takraati Hai

Mujhse Mil sako To jaan Paaoge Ke "Khwaish " Kaun Hai???
varna Ek Shayar Ki Tasveer Sirf Uski Shayari Mein Hi Nazar Aati Hai...

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2010, 10:15:32 AM »
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dil me kahin gehre utar gai aapki ye nazm khwaish ji.......
bht hi sidhe saade tarike se keh gaye aap apne dil ki baat......
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Khawaishji bada jaandaar hai kalaam aapka.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Teri shayri mai tera aksh dekha hai
Tan ki khoobsurti mai kya rakha hai

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