-----/// Parindaa ///------Hriday

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ghoslon  mein   aankh  naa  khuli ho
seekhey woh udne  kaa  hunar kaise

jo   jagah   hi  naa  ho kuch karne ki
parindaa  failaaye   apne   par  kaise

jis  ped  par  banaayaa   ghoslaa  ho
woh  kat  jaaye  to  ho  basar  kaise

jo  chidiyaa   bhatak   gayi   raah  se
laut   kar   jaaye   apne   ghar  kaise


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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2013, 08:57:55 PM »
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Waah waah waah Hriday ji.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. pahele do sher bahut pasand aaye.. kuch hattkar likha hai aapne is baar... excellent hai.. dheron dheron daaaaaad..
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2013, 09:22:31 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2013, 09:34:27 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2013, 11:43:05 PM »
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ghoslon  mein   aankh  naa  khuli ho
seekhey woh udne  kaa  hunar kaise

jo   jagah   hi  naa  ho kuch karne ki
parindaa  failaaye   apne   par  kaise

jis  ped  par  banaayaa   ghoslaa  ho
woh  kat  jaaye  to  ho  basar  kaise

jo  chidiyaa   bhatak   gayi   raah  se
laut   kar   jaaye   apne   ghar  kaise


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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2013, 11:49:40 PM »
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jo  chidiyaa   bhatak   gayi   raah  se
laut   kar   jaaye   apne   ghar  kaise

Ye sher dil ko choo gaya
bade pate ki baat kahee aapne..kya aaj tak chidia kabhi is baat ko samajh paayi hai..
Kabhee naheen ..pankhoN ka aasra jo hai
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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2013, 12:49:15 AM »
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jis  ped  par  banaayaa   ghoslaa  ho
woh  kat  jaaye  to  ho  basar  kaise
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«Reply #7 on: October 02, 2013, 01:10:52 AM »
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Bahut Umda.
jis  ped  par  banaayaa   ghoslaa  ho
woh  kat  jaaye  to  ho  basar  kaise

jo  chidiyaa   bhatak   gayi   raah  se
laut   kar   jaaye   apne   ghar  kaise
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2013, 03:08:33 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2013, 03:28:48 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: October 02, 2013, 03:34:16 AM »
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ghoslon  mein   aankh  naa  khuli ho
seekhey woh udne  kaa  hunar kaise
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jo   jagah   hi  naa  ho kuch karne ki
parindaa  failaaye   apne   par  kaise
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jis  ped  par  banaayaa   ghoslaa  ho
woh  kat  jaaye  to  ho  basar  kaise
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
jo  chidiyaa   bhatak   gayi   raah  se
laut   kar   jaaye   apne   ghar  kaise
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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bahut chubhta hua sa masla chhupe hue andaaz mein wah wah wah........!
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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2013, 04:38:28 PM »
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Bahaut achchhe khayaal aur bayaan Hriday ji
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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2013, 04:55:12 PM »
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ghoslon  mein   aankh  naa  khuli ho
seekhey woh udne  kaa  hunar kaise

jo   jagah   hi  naa  ho kuch karne ki
parindaa  failaaye   apne   par  kaise

jis  ped  par  banaayaa   ghoslaa  ho
woh  kat  jaaye  to  ho  basar  kaise

jo  chidiyaa   bhatak   gayi   raah  se
laut   kar   jaaye   apne   ghar  kaise


*****HRIDAY*****




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«Reply #13 on: October 03, 2013, 10:17:41 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaaa Aqsh ji....!!!

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Waah waah waah Hriday ji.. bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. pahele do sher bahut pasand aaye.. kuch hattkar likha hai aapne is baar... excellent hai.. dheron dheron daaaaaad..
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«Reply #14 on: October 05, 2013, 04:47:43 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

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