PARINDAA UDAAN PAR HAI.............................SAINI

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Parindaa udaan par hai.
Shikaaree machaan par hai.

Chalo pyaar phir se karleN.
Umariyaa dhalaan par hai.

Diyaa qarz jabse usne.
Nazar bas makaan par hai.

Nikmmaa hai bhai ghar meN.
Bahan to dukaan par hai.

Bane baat ab to jo bhee.
Tumhaare emaan par hai.

Mere dard kaa mudaawaa.
KaheeN aasmaan par hai.

Ye ‘saini’ kahaaN gayaa ab.
Sabhee kee zabaan par hai.

Dr. Surendra Saini

परिंदा उड़ान पर है ।
शिकारी मचान पर है ॥

चलो प्यार फिर से कर लें ।
उमरिया ढलान पर है ॥

दिया क़र्ज़ जब से उसने ।
नज़र बस मकान पर है ॥

निकम्मा है भाई घर में ।
बहन तों दुकान पर है ॥

बने बात अब तो जो भी ।
तुम्हारे ईमान पर है ।

मेरे दर्द का मुदावा ।
कहीं आसमान पर है ॥

ये 'सैनी ' कहाँ गया अब ।
सभी की ज़बान पर है ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी
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«Reply #1 on: September 02, 2013, 04:57:30 PM »
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bahut khoob saini ji, dhero daad
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«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2013, 05:02:30 PM »
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waah waah sir bohat hi khoob,....bohat bohat bohat c daad,...
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2013, 05:17:31 PM »
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Bahut khoob , Saini saheb

Diya jab se qarz us ne
Nazar bus makaan par hai
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«Reply #4 on: September 02, 2013, 05:27:14 PM »
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waah waah behad khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne sir ji.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #5 on: September 02, 2013, 06:21:32 PM »
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Diyaa qarz jabse usne.
Nazar bas makaan par hai.

Nikmmaa hai bhai ghar meN.
Bahan to dukaan par hai.

waah waah Dr,sahab zabardast kalaam ,
bohut khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2013, 06:49:40 PM »
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bahut khoob, dhero daad Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2013, 06:57:43 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut hi achchi peshkash rahi.. sabhi ashaar bahut hi gehre khayalon se saje hue hai... hazaron hazaron dili daaaaaaaaaad..
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«Reply #8 on: September 02, 2013, 07:13:02 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 02, 2013, 04:47:01 PM
Parindaa udaan par hai.
Shikaaree machaan par hai.

AUR MAIn kahaa hu

Chalo pyaar phir se karleN.
Umariyaa dhalaan par hai.

he he he.... Bahut khooob..... Zabardast

Diyaa qarz jabse usne.
Nazar bas makaan par hai.

Waah kyaa kah diyaa... Bilkul aesa hi karte hai ye duniyaa waale

Nikmmaa hai bhai ghar meN.
Bahan to dukaan par hai.

Ab rulaane ka erada kar liya hai kyaa..... Etne zabardast .. Zabardast sher

Bane baat ab to jo bhee.
Tumhaare emaan par hai.

nice

Mere dard kaa mudaawaa.
KaheeN aasmaan par hai.

Ye ‘saini’ kahaaN gayaa ab.
Sabhee kee zabaan par hai.

Dr. Surendra Saini



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«Reply #9 on: September 02, 2013, 07:36:37 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaah Sir bahut achhi ghazal hai, khususann shuru ke donoN sher bahut pasand aaye.
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2013, 08:43:42 PM »
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Bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2013, 08:49:15 PM »
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Dr. Sahab bahot khooob, mazah bhi hai seekh bhi hai...
bas waaaah hi waaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2013, 08:58:50 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 02, 2013, 04:47:01 PM
परिंदा उड़ान पर है ।
शिकारी मचान पर है ॥

चलो प्यार फिर से कर लें ।
उमरिया ढलान पर है ॥

दिया क़र्ज़ जब से उसने ।
नज़र बस मकान पर है ॥

निकम्मा है भाई घर में ।
बहन तों दुकान पर है ॥

बने बात अब तो जो भी ।
तुम्हारे ईमान पर है ।

मेरे दर्द का मुदावा ।
कहीं आसमान पर है ॥

ये 'सैनी ' कहाँ गया अब ।
सभी की ज़बान पर है ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी



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«Reply #13 on: September 02, 2013, 10:43:21 PM »
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Chalo pyaar phir se karleN.
Umariyaa dhalaan par hai.

Mujhe ye sher khoob pasand aaya.
choti behr me khoobsurat ghazal hai Sir
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«Reply #14 on: September 02, 2013, 10:59:46 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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