pash-o-pesh...........A.B

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                        chaaha   aksar   use  aarzoo  ki   tarah...,
                        dekha     hamesha ek  justjoo  ki  tarah...,

                        ghulta  rahaa   khyaalo.n  ki  fiza  mein...,
                        subh-o-shaam   wo   khusboo   ki   tarah...,

                        athkheliyaa.n baadlo.n ki chaand pe aise...,
                        ho  jaise  rukhsaar  pe gesuo.n ki tarah...,

                        ho   baat  jab  bhi  mehfil  mein  kabhi...,
                        rahi  uski  shakhsiyat  mauzoo  ki tarah...,

                        isi pasho-pesh mein bechain jiyein kaise...,
                        nikal  gayi  zindagi  guftagoo  ki tarah...,

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«Reply #1 on: April 16, 2013, 07:52:50 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 16, 2013, 08:00:23 PM »
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Bahut khoob adilji. bahut khoob likha hai aapne. har sher khoobsurat hai. dheron daad.
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«Reply #3 on: April 16, 2013, 08:16:38 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab...!


Kya baat hai janab waaH bahut khoob, badi hi gehri aur umdaa fikra rahi aapki is kalaam meiN.... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aur maqte ke liye toH bus kia kaheN janab laa jawaab raha ...
Likhate rahiye.. aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

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«Reply #4 on: April 16, 2013, 08:42:35 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 16, 2013, 10:17:48 PM »
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athkheliyaa.n baadlo.n ki chaand pe aise...,                         ho  jaise  rukhsaar  pe gesuo.n ki tarah...,

bahut badhiya adil bhai
is khoobsurat ghazal par...dil daad qubool karen
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«Reply #6 on: April 16, 2013, 10:37:40 PM »
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khubsurat ghazal hai. khas taur se3rd sher bahut achha laga. mubarakbad.
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«Reply #7 on: April 17, 2013, 12:24:27 AM »
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  chaaha   aksar   use  aarzoo  ki   tarah...,
  dekha     hamesha ek  justjoo  ki  tarah...,                       
  ghulta  rahaa   khyaalo.n  ki  fiza  mein...,                         
  subh-o-shaam   wo   khusboo   ki   tarah...,                         
  athkheliyaa.n baadlo.n ki chaand pe aise...,                         
  ho  jaise  rukhsaar  pe gesuo.n ki tarah...,                       
  ho   baat  jab  bhi  mehfil  mein  kabhi...,                       
  rahi  uski  shakhsiyat  mauzoo  ki tarah...,                       
  isi pasho-pesh mein bechain jiyein kaise...,                         
  nikal  gayi  zindagi  guftagoo  ki tarah...,

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Wah,Wah Really nice.
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«Reply #8 on: April 17, 2013, 12:50:09 AM »
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adil bechain ji aapne to sach me bechain kar diya, bahut khubsurat ! dheron daad!
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2013, 02:28:48 AM »
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waaaahhhh
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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2013, 02:42:36 AM »
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                        chaaha   aksar   use  aarzoo  ki   tarah...,
                        dekha     hamesha ek  justjoo  ki  tarah...,

                        ghulta  rahaa   khyaalo.n  ki  fiza  mein...,
                        subh-o-shaam   wo   khusboo   ki   tarah...,

                        athkheliyaa.n baadlo.n ki chaand pe aise...,
                        ho  jaise  rukhsaar  pe gesuo.n ki tarah...,

                        ho   baat  jab  bhi  mehfil  mein  kabhi...,
                        rahi  uski  shakhsiyat  mauzoo  ki tarah...,

                        isi pasho-pesh mein bechain jiyein kaise...,
                        nikal  gayi  zindagi  guftagoo  ki tarah...,



bahut khoob.......!
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«Reply #11 on: April 17, 2013, 02:50:56 AM »
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nice.
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«Reply #12 on: April 18, 2013, 08:55:47 PM »
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adil  jee  bahut  acha  likha  apne ,  MAUZOO  shabd  ka  matlab  pata  ni mujhe ...  Agar  aap  iska  arth  bata den  to  samajhane  me  aasani  rahegi.
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shukriya jo mere khayalaat pe hansi aayi
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«Reply #14 on: April 27, 2013, 09:24:10 PM »
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Bahut khoob adilji. bahut khoob likha hai aapne. har sher khoobsurat hai. dheron daad.


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