pass rakh ly(gul)

by gulzargul on October 20, 2008, 12:46:21 PM
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in ghataaon ko yaa rab apny paas rakh ly
youn piyaason ko na tersa paani dikha ker
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«Reply #1 on: October 20, 2008, 12:51:54 PM »
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Nice gul ji.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2008, 01:00:38 PM »
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thanks honey ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2008, 01:24:32 PM »
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BARQ GIRTI HAIN TO GIR JAYE MERI BALA SE LEKIN
SHABO ROZ MERE GHAR PE MACHALTI Q HAIN

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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2008, 01:32:16 PM »
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Quote from: gulzargul on October 20, 2008, 12:46:21 PM
in ghataaon ko yaa rab apny paas rakh ly
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wah wah bhai gul..bahoot khoob hote hain aapke ye two liners  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2008, 01:33:28 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 20, 2008, 01:24:32 PM
BARQ GIRTI HAIN TO GIR JAYE MERI BALA SE LEKIN
SHABO ROZ MERE GHAR PE MACHALTI Q HAIN

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kamal jawab hai ghayel yaar maza aa gaya
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«Reply #6 on: October 20, 2008, 02:56:19 PM »
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Quote from: gulzargul on October 20, 2008, 12:46:21 PM
in ghataaon ko yaa rab apny paas rakh ly
youn piyaason ko na tersa paani dikha ker

Bohot Khoob Gul Ji  Applause

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 20, 2008, 01:24:32 PM
BARQ GIRTI HAIN TO GIR JAYE MERI BALA SE LEKIN
SHABO ROZ MERE GHAR PE MACHALTI Q HAIN

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An equally good reply Sajid Ji Applause

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Mere khyaal main ye poetry Khumar-e-Ishq se zyada Misc. Poetry section main zayada theek rahegi. Moving it there.
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«Reply #7 on: October 20, 2008, 10:53:26 PM »
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Quote from: gulzargul on October 20, 2008, 12:46:21 PM
in ghataaon ko yaa rab apny paas rakh ly
youn piyaason ko na tersa paani dikha ker

Subhan allah bohot khoob, zabardast shear he.
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«Reply #8 on: October 21, 2008, 07:29:13 AM »
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Quote from: gulzargul on October 20, 2008, 12:46:21 PM
in ghataaon ko yaa rab apny paas rakh ly
youn piyaason ko na tersa paani dikha ker

Bahut Khoob Gul Ji

In ghataaon ko yeh rab jara barasne de
Hum taraste huon ko jara pyaas bujhane de
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«Reply #9 on: October 21, 2008, 11:08:33 AM »
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rajesh ji syyid ji cemira ji bekarar ji honey ji aap sab ka buht shukriya aor achi replies den aap sab ny

gul
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«Reply #10 on: October 21, 2008, 09:48:53 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 21, 2008, 07:29:13 AM
Bahut Khoob Gul Ji

In ghataaon ko yeh rab jara barasne de
Hum taraste huon ko jara pyaas bujhane de


Nice lines Rajesh
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«Reply #11 on: January 03, 2010, 04:37:12 PM »
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thanks all
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