PATANG

by pawan16 on May 18, 2012, 08:45:06 PM
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JAISE MERI ASMA ME PATANG UDI,
MERE SAMNE  MUSKILE AKAR KHADI,
KATANE KE LIYE  PATANGE MUJHSE LADI,
MERI HAUSLE KI YE PATANG AAGE BADI,
INME AUR MUJH ME HAZAR BAR THANI,
MERI ,MERE DOR SE PECHAAN BANI,
JAB MERI HI PATANG ASMA ME DEKHI,
PECHAANE SAB , JAB BHI MERE SE DOR BANDI,
YE TO EK KISSA SUNA RAHA HU DOST,
VARNA YE DOR RASTE ME HAZAR RUPO ME MILI,
HAR EK LAMHE HAR RASTE ME ISSE HI MERI PECHAAN BANI..PAWAN
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2012, 09:12:23 PM »
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Waah waah bhai Pawan, bahut bahut khoob. Bahut bahut daad-o-mubarakbaad meri taraf se. Bas aise hi likhte raho.
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2012, 12:44:13 AM »
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