*Pattar Ko Pigalana Seekh*

by Roja on April 27, 2008, 12:47:38 PM
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punam
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«Reply #15 on: May 12, 2008, 02:56:20 PM »
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kya bolun di kuch samjh me nahi aa raha..bahot hi acha likha hai aap ne....

syed ji 4 line me bahot kuch kehe gaye..bahot khoob...
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«Reply #16 on: May 12, 2008, 04:14:23 PM »
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Quote from: punam on May 12, 2008, 02:56:20 PM
kya bolun di kuch samjh me nahi aa raha..bahot hi acha likha hai aap ne....

syed ji 4 line me bahot kuch kehe gaye..bahot khoob...

Thanks a lot Punam jee kuchh cheezen jitni chhoti hon achhi lagti hain. Aapne samjha iske liye buhat buhat shukriya.
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«Reply #17 on: May 12, 2008, 05:13:31 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 12, 2008, 02:48:30 PM
Udas Hasti Ko Meri....

Udas hasti ko mere khushi mehsoos nahi hoti
Zinda rehti hu lekin zindagi mehsoos nahi hoti
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Kaja ki bahon main ab tak meri guzri hai tanhayi
"Roja" jawani aise main tanha kabhi mehsoos nahi hoti

Sitamgar ban gaya hai tu apne hi naseeb par, -
Taaqat-e-guftaar bhi hai apni mayusi par, -
Sar jhuka kar chal par khud ko na mitta, -
Apne tareeq ko lekar chal raah-e-raast par. -

Goshanasheenon ki anjuman men kho na jana, -
Zeest kitni bhi dushwaar tu kham na khana, -
Mayusi jaati nahin teri par justaju to kar, -
Aashiyan ujde ko tu ab naye dhang se bana. -

(Syed Naami)

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Khamoshi achhi hai.
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #18 on: May 12, 2008, 08:01:58 PM »
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roja ji,khwaish ji,harsh ji,syeednaami ji----sabne bahut umda likha hein yahan..aanand ki anubhuti he,shukriya.

Prateek
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Roja
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«Reply #19 on: May 13, 2008, 02:28:06 AM »
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Thanks a lot for appreciating dear Pooja di,... Punam and Prateek Mardia ji
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Roja
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«Reply #20 on: May 13, 2008, 02:33:51 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 12, 2008, 05:13:31 PM
Sitamgar ban gaya hai tu apne hi naseeb par, -
Taaqat-e-guftaar bhi hai apni mayusi par, -
Sar jhuka kar chal par khud ko na mitta, -
Apne tareeq ko lekar chal raah-e-raast par. -

Goshanasheenon ki anjuman men kho na jana, -
Zeest kitni bhi dushwaar tu kham na khana, -
Mayusi jaati nahin teri par justaju to kar, -
Aashiyan ujde ko tu ab naye dhang se bana. -

(Syed Naami)

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Khamoshi achhi hai.

Anjaam Ke Liye

Do pal ki yeh hayaath hai anjaam ke liye
Dalthi huyi ye raat hai anjaam ke liye

Dil ki hazaron kwayishe honton se kya kahe
Dil ki adhuri baat hai anjaam ke liye

Math aa meri jawani ke jalte chirag mein
Sulge huye jajbaat hai anjaam ke liye

Halath pe mere sawan ki maut ro rahi
Do aankhon mein barsaat hai anjaam ke liye

Na aah hai na shikwa hai na kisee se gila
Her sheh pe apni maath hai anjaam ke liye

Tanha ro rahi hu mai aur jee rahi
Tanhayi ka ab saath hai anjaam ke liye
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«Reply #21 on: May 13, 2008, 02:52:17 AM »
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Need not to say "worry"
have to say "just bury"
When I see a one man show --
Better I step to go.

A life is not a play
Many die and many yet to stay
But who don't have an aim --
should rot in their game.

Provided the chance is fair
Still you running in despair
Leave it now or be prepaired --
Yet you have to be dared.

(Syed Naami)

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Silence is Better.
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Roja
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«Reply #22 on: May 13, 2008, 02:58:56 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 13, 2008, 02:52:17 AM
Need not to say "worry"
have to say "just bury"
When I see a one man show --
Better I step to go.

A life is not a play
Many die and many yet to stay
But who don't have an aim --
should rot in their game.

Provided the chance is fair
Still you running in despair
Leave it now or be prepaired --
Yet you have to be dared.

(Syed Naami)

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Silence is Better.

Jiska anth-karan shudda hai
Uske mann mein hi Paramatma hai
Mat karo shanthi ki baathein
Shanthi mein hi chupa yudh hai..
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«Reply #23 on: May 13, 2008, 03:13:59 AM »
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Jinhen teer lagti hain baaten, -
Nirnay lena woh kya jaanen, -
Nishabd meri zubaan achhi, -
log in alfaaz se ghayal na hojayen. -

(Syed Naami)

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Silence does hurt huh!!
 
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punam
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«Reply #24 on: May 13, 2008, 04:35:27 AM »
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Roja di ..and syed ji bahot hi acha likh rahe ho dono...keep it up..
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«Reply #25 on: May 13, 2008, 05:16:45 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 12, 2008, 02:40:10 AM
Zamane ka Dastur

Is zamane ka dastur hai yeh chad gaye toh utarna padega
Kyu muqaddar ko tum koste ho, jo likha hai woh berna padega

Maut milti nahi mangne se nasamaj maut kyu mangta hai
Zindagi ek khudayi ka dhar hai waqt pe khali karna padega

Gir gayi bijliyan aashiyan pe khaak ker dala sara nasheman
Sochti hai chaman mein bahare paav kis simth (सिम्त)dharna (धरना) padega

Maine mana ki tum hai musafir justju hai tujhe apne ghar ki
Chalte chalte agar tum thake toh raste main teherna padega

Char din ki ye zindagani baad iske hai her cheez faani.
Merne wale toh merte hai lekin jeene wale ko merna padega

Tum ho insaan to insaan jaisa kuch toh dunia mein karke dikhao
Haq na maro kisii aadmi ka haq se tumko bhi darna padega

Hay Shahenshah ke gam se bada hai mere dil ke tabahi ka aalam
Pyar main ek bhikari ke sadke Tajmahel-sa nikharna padega

"Roja" magrur hai zalim zamana bhool ke isse na dil ko lagana
Verna ek roj khud dillagi mein is jahan se guzarna padega

Bahut Bahut Khoob..bahut hi acha likha hai aapne roja. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #26 on: May 13, 2008, 05:47:16 AM »
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Roja dear,, ,,Syed Bohat hi khoob likha hai aapne..Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #27 on: May 13, 2008, 01:27:40 PM »
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Thank you very much Punam, Khwaish ji, and Honey dear.
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syednaami
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«Reply #28 on: May 13, 2008, 01:34:27 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 13, 2008, 05:47:16 AM
Roja dear,, ,,Syed Bohat hi khoob likha hai aapne..Usual Smile

Thanks Honeyrose jee, aap appreciation buhat kam karte ho, par karte ho to buhat badi karte ho. Thanks a lot.
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«Reply #29 on: May 13, 2008, 03:29:40 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on May 13, 2008, 03:13:59 AM
Jinhen teer lagti hain baaten, -
Nirnay lena woh kya jaanen, -
Nishabd meri zubaan achhi, -
log in alfaaz se ghayal na hojayen. -

(Syed Naami)

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Silence does hurt huh!!
 

Fir agli mulaqat hone tak
Chalo shikhwe gile kahi dhur kare
Na sataungi tumko mayusi mein
Itna toh mai khudgarz nahi
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