-----/// Pehchaan baaki hai ///----- Hriday

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aajaao , ki    ab  bhi   mujh me  thodi  si  jaan  baaki hai
tumhaaraa diya  huwaa  abhi  'hriday'  naam   baaki  hai

ab  aajaao , aake  khatam  karo , ye  lamhaa judaai  kaa
zindagi  chhoti   hai ,  aur   bahut  se  kaam  baaki  hain

tumko   saath  leke   ab   taye  karnaa  hai  safar  baaki
zindagi  ke ,  ab   bhi  bahut   se  imtehaan  baaki  hain

baaki   hain   thodi  dhadkanein ,  thodi   si   saans  hai
lene ko tumhe baahon me ye  dil  pareshaan  baaki  hai

abhi  to  din   niklaa   hai , yakeen   hai   ki  tum  aaoge
chaand   to   niklaa  nahi , abhi  poori shaam  baaki  hai

tumse main duur  hoon, magar  dil  tumhaare  paas  hai
aashiq  kehlaataa  hoon ,  meri yeh  pehchaan baaki hai

kab tak  tadpaaoge , kab tak mujhe tum yun sataaoge
ye aashiq  tumpe  karne  ko  ye jaan  qurbaan baaki hai

aake mujhe chhu  lo  tum aur baahon me bhar lo mujhe
humpe  tumhaaraa  karne ko , abhi ye ehsaan baaki hai


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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2013, 11:26:17 AM »
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aajaao , ki ab bhi hum me thodi si jaan baaki hai
tumhaaraa diya huwaa abhi 'hriday' naam baaki hai

wah wah kya baat hai... bahut khoob likha aapne hriday jee Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2013, 11:34:37 AM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause
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wah wah
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaah...... bahut bahut khooob....
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2013, 12:30:36 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob!!!!!

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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2013, 12:42:35 PM »
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waah wwaahh wwaahhh
behad khoobsorat likha hai hriday g
har bar ki trah aapki kawita padke eik alag he sukoon milta hai

behaad khoosoorat
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2013, 01:29:55 PM »
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very good ji.....
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Wooooooooow! great composition hriday jee
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«Reply #13 on: January 26, 2013, 08:51:37 AM »
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Hriday Jee Aadaab!



Janab bade hi khoob khayaal aur umdaa ahsaas bayaaN kiye hai aapne...
Sabhi asharoN ke ahsaas o khayaal behad achche lage hume... Usual Smile


Is kalaam par humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile





Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 25, 2013, 11:17:55 AM


aajaao , ki    ab  bhi   hum  me  thodi  si  jaan  baaki hai
tumhaaraa diya  huwaa  abhi  'hriday'  naam   baaki  hai

ab  aajaao , aake  khatam  karo , ye  lamhaa judaai  kaa
zindagi  chhoti   hai ,  aur   bahut  se  kaam  baaki  hain

tumko   saath  leke   ab   taye  karnaa  hai  safar  baaki
zindagi  ke ,  ab   bhi  bahut   se  imtehaan  baaki  hain

baaki   hain   thodi  dhadkanein ,  thodi   si   saans  hai
lene ko tumhe baahon me ye  dil  pareshaan  baaki  hai

abhi  to  din   niklaa   hai , yakeen   hai   ki  tum  aaoge
chaand   to   niklaa  nahi , abhi  poori shaam  baaki  hai

tumse main duur  hoon, magar  dil  tumhaare  paas  hai
aashiq  kehlaataa  hoon ,  meri yeh  pehchaan baaki hai

kab tak  tadpaaoge , kab tak mujhe tum yun sataaoge
ye aashiq  tumpe  karne  ko  ye jaan  qurbaan baaki hai

aake mujhe chhu  lo  tum aur baahon me bhar lo mujhe
humpe  tumhaaraa  karne ko , abhi ye ehsaan baaki hai


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«Reply #14 on: January 26, 2013, 09:17:48 AM »
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aajaao , ki    ab  bhi   hum  me  thodi  si  jaan  baaki hai
tumhaaraa diya  huwaa  abhi  'hriday'  naam   baaki  hai

ab  aajaao , aake  khatam  karo , ye  lamhaa judaai  kaa
zindagi  chhoti   hai ,  aur   bahut  se  kaam  baaki  hain

tumko   saath  leke   ab   taye  karnaa  hai  safar  baaki
zindagi  ke ,  ab   bhi  bahut   se  imtehaan  baaki  hain

baaki   hain   thodi  dhadkanein ,  thodi   si   saans  hai
lene ko tumhe baahon me ye  dil  pareshaan  baaki  hai

abhi  to  din   niklaa   hai , yakeen   hai   ki  tum  aaoge
chaand   to   niklaa  nahi , abhi  poori shaam  baaki  hai

tumse main duur  hoon, magar  dil  tumhaare  paas  hai
aashiq  kehlaataa  hoon ,  meri yeh  pehchaan baaki hai

kab tak  tadpaaoge , kab tak mujhe tum yun sataaoge
ye aashiq  tumpe  karne  ko  ye jaan  qurbaan baaki hai

aake mujhe chhu  lo  tum aur baahon me bhar lo mujhe
humpe  tumhaaraa  karne ko , abhi ye ehsaan baaki hai


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