-----/// Pehle jaisi baat na rahi /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on May 16, 2012, 01:12:15 PM
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chaahte to hum aaj bhi hai kisi ko jaan se badh ke,
par shaayad us chaahat me pehle jaisi baat na rahi,
mil lete hain kai chehron se mehfilon me hum aksar,
shayad ab pehli jaisi haseen koi mulaaquaat na rahi,

yun to safar me zindagi ke kai log mile kai bichhde,
maanga tha jinka saath kabhi wo mere saath na rahi,
har raat khwaabon me chehra kisi ka hota tha kabhi,
raat khwaab me mere aajaayen wo haseen raat na rahi,

mahal khadaa kiya tha humne apne armaano ka ret se,
toofaan me wo dheh gaya, baaki koi bhi baat na rahi,
maangte the kabhi kisi ko apni duwaaon me hum aksar,
par kaise bataaun ki wo surat mujhe ab yaad na rahi...

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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2012, 01:26:31 PM »
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bahut bahut Khoob Hriday ji

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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2012, 01:34:55 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2012, 03:33:38 PM »
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Very nyc  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2012, 07:22:34 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Khwaish ji....!!!

bahut bahut Khoob Hriday ji

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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2012, 09:05:50 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2012, 03:20:26 AM »
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bahut khub rahimji
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2012, 03:26:50 AM »
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BOHUT KHUB DEAR VERY NICE
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2012, 11:25:16 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Saini ji....!!!

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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2012, 09:32:48 PM »
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Nice Hridayji!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 24, 2012, 07:09:38 PM »
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thanks a lot Jazbaat ji....!!!

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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2012, 06:03:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Akash ji....!!!

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«Reply #12 on: May 25, 2012, 06:04:06 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Mann ji...!!!

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bahut khub
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«Reply #13 on: May 25, 2012, 06:04:39 PM »
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thank you Sir....!!!

BOHUT KHUB DEAR VERY NICE
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2012, 06:05:21 PM »
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Thanks a lot Quateel ji.....!!!

Nice Hridayji!!!!
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