Pehli mhbt ka ehsas...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on March 13, 2011, 05:59:43 PM
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Mhbt ki jab shuruwat hoti hai,
tou ik nayi disha mein dil chalta jata hai,

viranio se hat kar khushi milne lagti hai,
aur tanhai ka suraj dhire dhire dhalta jata hai,

chah kar bhi kuch na keh paane ki kash-m-kash,
ander hi ander armano ka diya jalta jata hai,

uske tasavvur mein khoya hua pagal dil,
khud hi behek k khud hi sambhalta jata hai,

bar bar unka didar karne ko unse baat karne ko,
har jazbaat machalta jata hai,

hatheli pe likhke unke naam ko use labo se chhukar,
ankho ka dariya pighalta jata hai,

hone lagte hai sabse begaane bhul jate hai sare gum,
sine mein mhbt ka ehsas jab palta jata hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2011, 07:33:12 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 13, 2011, 05:59:43 PM
Mhbt ki jab shuruwat hoti hai,
tou ik nayi disha mein dil chalta jata hai,

viranio se hat kar khushi milne lagti hai,
aur tanhai ka suraj dhire dhire dhalta jata hai,

chah kar bhi kuch na keh paane ki kash-m-kash,
ander hi ander armano ka diya jalta jata hai,

uske tasavvur mein khoya hua pagal dil,
khud hi behek k khud hi sambhalta jata hai,

bar bar unka didar karne ko unse baat karne ko,
har jazbaat machalta jata hai,

hatheli pe likhke unke naam ko use labo se chhukar,
ankho ka dariya pighalta jata hai,

hone lagte hai sabse begaane bhul jate hai sare gum,
sine mein mhbt ka ehsas jab palta jata hai.........

Very Impressive Creation ..... broken ji !

Very Touching Lines ... !

dil se daad ... !  Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley Applause Clapping Smiley

aise hi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2011, 09:29:36 PM »
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Wow Geet ji,very touching n romantic creation,bahut baddiya likhti hai aap,keep it up.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2011, 04:10:15 AM »
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bahut khub geetji.... bahut hi umda...

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2011, 04:47:35 AM »
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touching one geet ji......mast mast mastam.........
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«Reply #5 on: March 14, 2011, 09:52:06 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya naresh ji,madhu ji,manjumann ji aur utkarsh ji...
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«Reply #6 on: March 14, 2011, 10:34:03 AM »
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Mast kavita Geet-di.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

ander hi ander armano ka diya jalta jata hai,
bar bar unka didar karne ko unse baat karne ko,
har jazbaat machalta jata hai,

hatheli pe likhke unke naam ko use labo se chhukar,
ankho ka dariya pighalta jata hai,
sine mein mhbt ka ehsas jab palta jata hai.........

Mast lines hain Geet-di.....


Quote from: brokenbyluv on March 13, 2011, 05:59:43 PM


Mhbt ki jab shuruwat hoti hai,
tou ik nayi disha mein dil chalta jata hai,

viranio se hat kar khushi milne lagti hai,
aur tanhai ka suraj dhire dhire dhalta jata hai,

chah kar bhi kuch na keh paane ki kash-m-kash,
ander hi ander armano ka diya jalta jata hai,

uske tasavvur mein khoya hua pagal dil,
khud hi behek k khud hi sambhalta jata hai,

bar bar unka didar karne ko unse baat karne ko,
har jazbaat machalta jata hai,

hatheli pe likhke unke naam ko use labo se chhukar,
ankho ka dariya pighalta jata hai,

hone lagte hai sabse begaane bhul jate hai sare gum,
sine mein mhbt ka ehsas jab palta jata hai.........
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«Reply #7 on: March 14, 2011, 10:36:35 AM »
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beautiful Poetic Expressions geetji..

bahut bahut vadhiya.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: March 14, 2011, 10:46:42 AM »
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Thnx Sweetu n khwaish ji..
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«Reply #9 on: March 14, 2011, 10:51:02 AM »
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ehle pyaar ki mithi si gudgudati feelings likhi hain tumne geet......bht pyre ehsaas rumaniyat bhare...bht khubsurat peshkash re.
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«Reply #10 on: March 14, 2011, 11:01:18 AM »
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Shukriya kasak ji...
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bht khoob geet ji...
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Bahut shukriya priya ji...
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Shukriya shihab ji...
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