Phool aisaa koi khilaa denaa.......Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on May 29, 2011, 05:34:00 PM
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Yaad kee fasl ko jalaa denaa
ho sake to mujhe bhulaa denaa

gham se patthar huaa hai dil meraa
pyaar se tum use rulaa denaa

hichakee le le ke shaam royee hai
raat thapkee se tum sulaa denaa

kitanaa tejaab pee gayee aaNkheN
jaam shabnam kaa tum pilaa denaa

dil khizaaN se bahaar ho jaaye
phool aisaa koi khilaa denaa

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2011, 05:52:11 PM »
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Nice poerty Mamta-di......sab sher apne aap mai achhe bane hain......

Padh ke mast mazaa aayee hai mujh ko
Kalam ko apnee tum ek chummmaa denaa

Phool ek kya Lo pura gule-gulishtaan le aayee hoon
Pasand aaye wo phool tum apne dil mai sajjaa lenaa


Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 29, 2011, 05:34:00 PM
Yaad kee fasl ko jalaa denaa
ho sake to mujhe bhulaa denaa

gham se patthar huaa hai dil meraa
pyaar se tum use rulaa denaa

hichakee le le ke shaam royee hai
raat thapkee se tum sulaa denaa

kitanaa tejaab pee gayee aaNkheN
jaam shabnam kaa tum pilaa denaa

dil khizaaN se bahaar ho jaaye
phool aisaa koi khilaa denaa

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2011, 05:57:11 PM »
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Ha ha ha  ha Koyal! kahaaN theeN ab tak? hum tumhe bahut yaad karte the....
mousam e bahaar aa ke guzar gayaa
bulbul e baagh magar khaamosh hee rahaa
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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2011, 06:17:16 PM »
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wah.
Bahut khub. Bahut umdah.
Lajawaab gazal.
Har ek sher ke ashar pe dil wah wah kar raha tha.
Har ek sher pe daad.
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«Reply #4 on: May 30, 2011, 04:47:05 AM »
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Mamta Ji,

Kya baat hai..Waah..waah.waah.
Chhoti bahr men bahut khoobsoorat ghazal..

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«Reply #5 on: May 30, 2011, 05:57:00 AM »
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Humare housaloN ko parwaaz ataa karne kaa behad shukriyaa Imdad jee!
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«Reply #6 on: May 30, 2011, 06:14:37 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on May 29, 2011, 05:34:00 PM
Yaad kee fasl ko jalaa denaa
ho sake to mujhe bhulaa denaa

gham se patthar huaa hai dil meraa
pyaar se tum use rulaa denaa

hichakee le le ke shaam royee hai
raat thapkee se tum sulaa denaa

kitanaa tejaab pee gayee aaNkheN
jaam shabnam kaa tum pilaa denaa

dil khizaaN se bahaar ho jaaye
phool aisaa koi khilaa denaa

Mamta Bajpai

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«Reply #7 on: May 30, 2011, 08:07:12 AM »
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saada zubaan..umda kalaam! mamtaji bahut si daad.
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«Reply #8 on: May 30, 2011, 08:09:45 AM »
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wah wah... bahut khub mamtaji..... khub....

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«Reply #9 on: May 30, 2011, 08:22:18 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khooob Mamta ji..

"Gham Se Pathar Hua Hai Dil Mera
Pyaar Se Tum Usse Rula Dena"

"Hichki Le le Ke shaam Royi Hai
Raat Thapkee Se Tum Sula Dena"

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bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaaso Se Bharpoor..Bahut Ache.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: May 30, 2011, 08:47:58 AM »
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gazal ko pasand karne or saraahane kaa behad shukriyaa Imdaad jee!

aap ne jo signature sher bhee behad bhaaye...... dilii daad kubool farmaayeN.
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«Reply #11 on: May 30, 2011, 09:13:45 AM »
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bht khub ji…
misc. section ki ustad ho aap mamta ji
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«Reply #12 on: May 30, 2011, 02:22:12 PM »
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very nice mamta di...
sply 2 & 3rd one...
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2011, 06:35:58 PM »
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Bahut umda mamta ji.........
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«Reply #14 on: May 31, 2011, 05:16:43 AM »
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Signature pasand karne ke liye Shukriya Mamta ji. Mujhe to lag raha tha ke pata nahi kisi ko pasand ayega ya nahi.
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