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dolly
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Phool Mujhe Barsaane Do
Pyaar Ke Nagme Gaane Do
Phool Mujhe Barsaane Do
Aman Ke Nagme Gaane Do
Darpan To Swach Hai Lekin
Aankho.N Ki Dhool Hataane Do
Laakho.N Panchi Bhooke Hai.N
Mere Haatho.N Mei.N Daane Do
Koi Dur Khada Rota Dikhta
Hans Kar Usko Hansaane Do
Koi Gair Nahee Iss Mehfil Mein
Dilo.N Ke Taar Milaane Do
Asar Kitna Duaao.N Mei.N Hai
Khudi Ko Aaj Aazmaane Do
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2012, 12:29:12 PM » |
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Superbbbbbbbbbbb. Bahut Khoob Dolly Jee. Ek behtareen peshkash, bahut bahut Mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2012, 12:34:21 PM » |
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Sister es poem me aapne jo jajbat jahir kiye h unki jitni tareef ki jaye kam h.
Aaj kal aese jajabat ki India me bahut jarorat...
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Aapki ye post mujhe bahoot pasand aayi esliye meri daad kabool kijiye...
Or es post ko parkar me apne aapko aapka ak rau brane se nahi rook pa raha....
Wese rukkar karunga bhi kya bra hi deta hu...
Esi tarah likhti rahe...
Hamesha hansti rahe muskurati rahe
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dolly
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2012, 12:41:18 PM » |
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Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Superbbbbbbbbbbb. Bahut Khoob Dolly Jee. Ek behtareen peshkash, bahut bahut Mubarakbaad.
Thank uu so muchhh Iftikharjiii...:)shukriya apka..  |
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2012, 12:46:37 PM » |
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Sister es poem me aapne jo jajbat jahir kiye h unki jitni tareef ki jaye kam h.
Aaj kal aese jajabat ki India me bahut jarorat...
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Aapki ye post mujhe bahoot pasand aayi esliye meri daad kabool kijiye...
Or es post ko parkar me apne aapko aapka ak rau brane se nahi rook pa raha....
Wese rukkar karunga bhi kya bra hi deta hu...
Esi tarah likhti rahe...
Hamesha hansti rahe muskurati rahe
Thank u dear masoom.....:)thnx a lott.... ....for rau also..... |
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2012, 12:54:26 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Dolly jee aman ke nagme gaane do..khoobsurat ehsaas.  |
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2012, 01:01:35 PM » |
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Phool Mujhe Barsaane Do
Pyaar Ke Nagme Gaane Do
Phool Mujhe Barsaane Do
Aman Ke Nagme Gaane Do
Darpan To Swach Hai Lekin
Aankho.N Ki Dhool Hataane Do
Laakho.N Panchi Bhooke Hai.N
Mere Haatho.N Mei.N Daane Do
Koi Dur Khada Rota Dikhta
Hans Kar Usko Hansaane Do
Koi Gair Nahee Iss Mehfil Mein
Dilo.N Ke Taar Milaane Do
Asar Kitna Duaao.N Mei.N Hai
Khudi Ko Aaj Aazmaane Do
BAhut umda peskash dolly ji dheroN daad |
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2012, 01:07:04 PM » |
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bahut bahut sunder mujhe bahut khushee hui padh kar bahut bahut aasheewaad aur badhaai
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2012, 03:53:07 PM » |
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bahut beautiful.
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2012, 02:25:50 AM » |
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namaskar Maate-- ! darpan-- lakhoN panchi-- koi duur khada-- ! ye 3 aashaar behad se bhi jada ache lage mujhe ek achi aur bht hi achi kalaam par dili daad-- khus rahen muskurate rahe |
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«Reply #12 on: May 02, 2012, 02:39:02 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Dolly jee aman ke nagme gaane do..khoobsurat ehsaas. Thanku mkvjiii:)bahut bahut shukriya apka... |
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«Reply #13 on: May 02, 2012, 03:28:35 PM » |
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BAhut umda peskash dolly ji dheroN daad
Bahut bahut shukriya pankajjii... |
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