Phoolon Ke Saath Reh-Rehkar Kaante Bhi Mehakte Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on November 16, 2010, 10:30:40 AM
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Mera Naam Apne Labon Par Sajaakar Rakhna
Door Ho Bhi jaau To Mujhe Apna Banaakar Rakhna

Hai Mumkin Bhi Yeh Ke Faasle Aur Bhi badh Jaye Apne Darmiyan
Par Pyaar Ke Iss Laau Ko Humesha Se Dil mein Apne jalaakar Rakhna

Waise To Dard Ke Basti Ka Main Baashinda Hoon!!!!
Par Apne Dil Mein Kabhi Mera Bhi Pata Rakhna

Phoolon Ke Saath Reh-Rehkar Kaante Bhi Mehakne Lagte Hai
Ek Guzaarish Hai!!! Kabhi Khud Ko Naa Mujhe Juda Rakhna

"Khwaish" Woh Khwaab Dekhta Hai Jo Ek Din Tootega Zaroor!!!
Iss Toote Hue Khwaab Ko bhi Apne palkon Par Sajaakar Rakhna

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2010, 10:37:05 AM »
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   Achhe khayalaat pesh kiy hai Khwaish ji aapne. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2010, 10:39:31 AM »
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wah kya baat hai..bahut bahut khoob...

dher sari daad!
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«Reply #3 on: November 16, 2010, 10:42:27 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoob khwaish bro....
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«Reply #4 on: November 16, 2010, 10:59:11 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai khwaish ji...
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«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2010, 11:51:26 AM »
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   Achhe khayalaat pesh kiy hai Khwaish ji aapne. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: November 16, 2010, 01:44:45 PM »
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Nice poem Khwaish ji.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Koshishein bahut kee pyaar kee laau ko jalaaye rakhne kee
Par jamaane k reewaajo ki aandhi ne bujha dala sab zazbaaton ko


Quote from: khwaish on November 16, 2010, 10:30:40 AM
Mera Naam Apne Labon Par Sajaakar Rakhna
Door Ho Bhi jaau To Mujhe Apna Banaakar Rakhna

Hai Mumkin Bhi Yeh Ke Faasle Aur Bhi badh Jaye Apne Darmiyan
Par Pyaar Ke Iss Laau Ko Humesha Se Dil mein Apne jalaakar Rakhna

Waise To Dard Ke Basti Ka Main Baashinda Hoon!!!!
Par Apne Dil Mein Kabhi Mera Bhi Pata Rakhna

Phoolon Ke Saath Reh-Rehkar Kaante Bhi Mehakne Lagte Hai
Ek Guzaarish Hai!!! Kabhi Khud Ko Naa Mujhe Juda Rakhna

"Khwaish" Woh Khwaab Dekhta Hai Jo Ek Din Tootega Zaroor!!!
Iss Toote Hue Khwaab Ko bhi Apne palkon Par Sajaakar Rakhna

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #7 on: November 16, 2010, 04:10:36 PM »
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Behtareeeeeeeen KHWAISH ji... likhte rahiye.....Is kalaam ke liye Khoooooooob saari DAAAAAAAAAD...

sheeshoN se keh do na kare mohabbat pattharoN se
warna toot hi jayeNge ek din ye bataa kar rakhna
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«Reply #8 on: November 16, 2010, 04:50:55 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 16, 2010, 10:39:31 AM
wah kya baat hai..bahut bahut khoob...

dher sari daad!

Teh Dillll Se Shukriya Mere Bhai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: November 16, 2010, 05:57:43 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 16, 2010, 10:30:40 AM
Mera Naam Apne Labon Par Sajaakar Rakhna
Door Ho Bhi jaau To Mujhe Apna Banaakar Rakhna

Hai Mumkin Bhi Yeh Ke Faasle Aur Bhi badh Jaye Apne Darmiyan
Par Pyaar Ke Iss Laau Ko Humesha Se Dil mein Apne jalaakar Rakhna

Waise To Dard Ke Basti Ka Main Baashinda Hoon!!!!
Par Apne Dil Mein Kabhi Mera Bhi Pata Rakhna

Phoolon Ke Saath Reh-Rehkar Kaante Bhi Mehakne Lagte Hai
Ek Guzaarish Hai!!! Kabhi Khud Ko Naa Mujhe Juda Rakhna

"Khwaish" Woh Khwaab Dekhta Hai Jo Ek Din Tootega Zaroor!!!
Iss Toote Hue Khwaab Ko bhi Apne palkon Par Sajaakar Rakhna

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

khoobsurat aehsaas k saath likhi gayi ye kavita aur bhi khubsurat hai......bahut khoob khwaish ji......aankhiri line dil mein utar si gayi hai...
issi line par likha hai.......

Palkon par baste hai jo khwaab, pura hona unka ek khwaab hi toh hai
Tutne ka yakeen hai,phr bhi aankhon mein sajaaya hai
Yu toh Khuch bhi nahi hai ye  , sirf khwaab pura hone ki aas hi toh hai
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«Reply #10 on: November 16, 2010, 06:21:50 PM »
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hhhmmmmm..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: November 16, 2010, 08:12:00 PM »
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"Khwaish woh khwab dekhta hai jo tootega zaroor.."
Puri nazm main, ek yeh line badi gehrai tak uttar gayi..
Bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob Khwaish Dost..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: November 16, 2010, 08:23:37 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Khwaish ji,mindblowing creation,lovely lines by Koyal sis ,Irshad ji and Nikhaar sis.excellent,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on November 16, 2010, 10:59:11 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai khwaish ji...

Tuada Tehh Dilll To Shukarguzaar Hai Geetji..

Humesha Inj Saath Dende reha karo.. icon_flower
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Quote from: bekarar on November 16, 2010, 10:42:27 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot khoob khwaish bro....

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mere Bhai..

Bas Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega.. icon_flower
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