Phoolon Ke Saath Reh-Rehkar Kaante Bhi Mehakte Hai "Khwaish"

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«Reply #15 on: November 19, 2010, 07:23:13 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on November 16, 2010, 10:59:11 AM
Bahut khoob likha hai khwaish ji...

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«Reply #16 on: November 19, 2010, 07:50:20 AM »
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mera naam apne labon pe saja kar rakna..
ja nai rakhta !!!
duur reh kar bhi apna bana kar rakna...
ja nai rakta!!!
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mujhe duniya ki nazron se chuppa ke rakhna,
kahin mai bhag na jau duur tumse,
zanziren baandh ke rakhna...
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maza aa gaya Khwahish ji.Usual Smile
bas dil ke ujde chaman me hariyali cha gai!!!
kashti me bethte hi baadh aa gai..
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«Reply #17 on: November 21, 2010, 07:03:23 AM »
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waah khwaish ji. dard ki baati se kya ummeed ki lau jalaayee hai. bahaut khoob !
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«Reply #18 on: November 22, 2010, 11:13:03 AM »
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«Reply #19 on: November 22, 2010, 11:15:04 AM »
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Quote from: rohit sharma on November 22, 2010, 11:13:03 AM
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«Reply #20 on: November 22, 2010, 11:47:26 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on November 17, 2010, 01:08:59 PM
Wah Wah Kya Baat Hai Khwaish Bhai
Khoobsurat Khayalon Aur Jazbaton Se Saji
Yeh Peshkash  Bahut Achhi Rahi Bhai.
Khashkar Yeh Line To Mujhe Behad Pasand Aayi
Kya Hi Khoobsurati Se Piroya Hai Shabdon Ko Wah Wah
Maza Aa Gaya Parhkar...Bahut Khub

Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #21 on: November 22, 2010, 12:15:22 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on November 16, 2010, 01:44:45 PM
Nice poem Khwaish ji.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Koshishein bahut kee pyaar kee laau ko jalaaye rakhne kee
Par jamaane k reewaajo ki aandhi ne bujha dala sab zazbaaton ko




Kya Baat Hai!!! Bahut bahut Khoob Koyal Ji..

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«Reply #22 on: November 22, 2010, 02:46:39 PM »
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Quote from: irshad ahmed siddiqui on November 16, 2010, 04:10:36 PM
Behtareeeeeeeen KHWAISH ji... likhte rahiye.....Is kalaam ke liye Khoooooooob saari DAAAAAAAAAD...

sheeshoN se keh do na kare mohabbat pattharoN se
warna toot hi jayeNge ek din ye bataa kar rakhna


Waah Waah!!! kya Baat Hai Irshad Ji..

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«Reply #23 on: December 07, 2010, 12:06:38 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 16, 2010, 10:30:40 AM
Mera Naam Apne Labon Par Sajaakar Rakhna
Door Ho Bhi jaau To Mujhe Apna Banaakar Rakhna

Hai Mumkin Bhi Yeh Ke Faasle Aur Bhi badh Jaye Apne Darmiyan
Par Pyaar Ke Iss Laau Ko Humesha Se Dil mein Apne jalaakar Rakhna

Waise To Dard Ke Basti Ka Main Baashinda Hoon!!!!
Par Apne Dil Mein Kabhi Mera Bhi Pata Rakhna

Phoolon Ke Saath Reh-Rehkar Kaante Bhi Mehakne Lagte Hai
Ek Guzaarish Hai!!! Kabhi Khud Ko Naa Mujhe Juda Rakhna

"Khwaish" Woh Khwaab Dekhta Hai Jo Ek Din Tootega Zaroor!!!
Iss Toote Hue Khwaab Ko bhi Apne palkon Par Sajaakar Rakhna

                    ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

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«Reply #24 on: December 17, 2010, 11:09:41 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on November 16, 2010, 05:57:43 PM

khoobsurat aehsaas k saath likhi gayi ye kavita aur bhi khubsurat hai......bahut khoob khwaish ji......aankhiri line dil mein utar si gayi hai...
issi line par likha hai.......

Palkon par baste hai jo khwaab, pura hona unka ek khwaab hi toh hai
Tutne ka yakeen hai,phr bhi aankhon mein sajaaya hai
Yu toh Khuch bhi nahi hai ye  , sirf khwaab pura hone ki aas hi toh hai



Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja,Aap Likhe Aur Humare Dil Ko Naa Chu jaaye, Ho Hi nahi Sakta..Bahut Ache..

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Quote from: ANAAM on November 16, 2010, 06:21:50 PM
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«Reply #26 on: April 11, 2011, 04:32:22 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on November 16, 2010, 08:12:00 PM
"Khwaish woh khwab dekhta hai jo tootega zaroor.."
Puri nazm main, ek yeh line badi gehrai tak uttar gayi..
Bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob Khwaish Dost..
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