Piyaas

by javedarshad on February 18, 2009, 07:50:46 AM
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Jab ghatain uth ti hain
To zameen ko yaqeen sa ho jata hai
Shayad aaj barsoon ki piyaas
Kuch hi paloon mein bujh jaye gee
Per akser aisa nahin hoota
Kabhi ghatain pahadoon ke gird (chaher janib ya aas paas)
Bahain daal detee hain
Kabhi hawa ke doosh per sawar hooker
Badi hi khamooshi se jaker
Samunder ke neele paani mein
Garq ho jati hain  (doob)
Aur Zameen
Piyaasi ki Piyaasi hi rah jati hai

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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2009, 07:58:38 AM »
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Very nice javed ji Clapping Smiley

Ek baat kehti hu, agar aap kuch sakt urdu almazo ko hindi ya english me likhe to mujh jaise logo ko samajhne me asani hogi Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2009, 09:41:55 AM »
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Bohot hi Khoob....!!
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2009, 09:51:29 AM »
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Chalo AKSER nahi kabhi kabhi to hota hoga
Pyasi zameen ko koi katra to bhigota hoga

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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2009, 09:55:40 AM »
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Bohat Achche Javed Bhai Nice One,.
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2009, 09:56:57 AM »
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Chalo AKSER nahi kabhi kabhi to hota hoga
Pyasi zameen ko koi katra to bhigota hoga

-SG-


Ye Bhi Ho Sakta Hai,.
Zameen Ki Tadap Dekhkar, Aasmaan Rota Hoga,.
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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2009, 10:46:30 AM »
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Shukriya Javed ji Thumbs UP

Nice one Sajid ji
N janasheen ji!
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2009, 07:20:01 PM »
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Salma Saheba Shukria




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«Reply #8 on: February 18, 2009, 08:43:42 PM »
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Tx

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«Reply #9 on: February 18, 2009, 08:50:53 PM »
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Chalo AKSER nahi kabhi kabhi to hota hoga
Pyasi zameen ko koi katra to bhigota hoga

-SG

Na hun seraab hum jabtalak  piya kerte hain
woh hain kamzarf jo qatron pe jiya kerte hain


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«Reply #10 on: February 18, 2009, 08:55:48 PM »
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Shukria janasheen

Janasheen Sb. zameen ke tadapne per aasmaan jab roota hai to,

Jab bhi tadapi hai zameeN a dost
AasmaN   bus khooN hi  roya hai


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«Reply #11 on: February 18, 2009, 09:35:14 PM »
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bhot khob javed sahib,
 
 adawaton kay  azab soraj nay itni  muhlat na di  mohsen
 hum apni jalti zameen kay ser pay koyi bagola hi tan daitay
                                                   mohsen
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2009, 07:41:11 AM »
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Tere wajood ki shuruaat bhi katra thi
Kaun kamzarf hain kaun nahi khuda jane

          -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #13 on: February 19, 2009, 08:30:14 AM »
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Jinko katre aur qatre ka bharam nahin yarab
woh kuin kamzarf ,zarf ki  baat kerte hain


NOTE:--AAP SAB KI LIYE AIK NUKTA SAAF KER DON.
   QATRE--- KA MATLAB BOOND  HAI
   KATRE--KATA GAYA, KATNA , JAISE JAIB KATERNA, DERZI KA KAPDA KATNA, PAN FAROSH(BECHNE WALA)KA CHALIYA KATERNA, YANI SUPARI KAH LAIN MAGER LIKHNA AUR KAHNA AJEEB SA LAGTA HAI

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«Reply #14 on: February 19, 2009, 08:34:40 AM »
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Chitralsony Saheba
shukria bahut hi piyara shair hai

In bagaloon ko  zara bhadak lene do
kal hum bhi sharare pahan ke ayein gay



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