Piyaas

by javedarshad on February 18, 2009, 07:50:46 AM
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #15 on: February 19, 2009, 08:56:10 AM »
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Chalo javed khuda aapko achca rakhe ab aap english word ke K aur Q ki bhi barikiyaan seekh gaye. Aainda main aapki aur aap meri post me koi comment nahi dege.

Aapse koi shikayat ya narazgi nahi hain, aap ek behtareen shayer hain bas main apni aukaat me rehna chahta hu.

Khuda Hafiz
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javedarshad
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«Reply #16 on: February 19, 2009, 09:13:20 AM »
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Nawazish hai aap ki Muhtaram

meri kahan yeh auqat ke kisi ke auqat bataun,
 janbe wala tanz ka pather na aata na badgumani hooti,

waise aap jis tarah bolte hain waise hi tahreer kerte hian, ab badqismati se main ahle qalam ki serzameen mein paida hua hun zinabiljabr dekha nahin jata is liye khud ko rook nahin saka tha werna hazaroon ashar roz ruswaye zamana hoote hain nachhez ko takleef to hooti hai bas kafe afsoos malne ke siva kia chara, main ma'azrat khuah hun ager koi takleef pahunchi ho .

shukria

Khuda Hafiz
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javedarshad
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«Reply #17 on: February 21, 2009, 10:05:36 PM »
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Apne lahu ka jaam pilaya tha abhi to zamane ko
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #18 on: February 21, 2009, 10:19:48 PM »
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Kabhi pilate hain to khabi peeten hain
Yeh sharaab ke hi sahare hum jeete hain
Yeh peene aur pilane walon badnaam karti hai
Par zindagi ka piyaas bujha hi deti hai
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javedarshad
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«Reply #19 on: February 22, 2009, 05:59:57 AM »
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bahut khoob Harish ji

yeh sach kaha hai ke sharab zindagee ko hi bujha dete hai piyasse hi mubarra ker dete hai

shukria


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Roja
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«Reply #20 on: February 22, 2009, 06:07:31 AM »
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Kabhi pilate hain to khabi peeten hain
Yeh sharaab ke hi sahare hum jeete hain
Yeh peene aur pilane walon badnaam karti hai
Par zindagi ka piyaas bujha hi deti hai


Very Good..  Applause Rajesh Harish Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #21 on: February 28, 2009, 11:23:33 AM »
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Thanks Javed Ji
N also Roja Ji
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javedarshad
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«Reply #22 on: March 01, 2009, 08:48:49 AM »
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thanks


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