pledge............(ambu)

by ambalika sharma on April 12, 2016, 10:58:25 AM

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ambalika sharma

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PLEDGE

Round and round I see the way,
Round and round someone always just say,
Definitely is a light there,
So far but surely a sight there..

I don’t know if it is true,
I don’t know if I can go through,
Round and round an impatience always stays..

Round and round someone always say,
There is a flight there,
So far, definitely a touchable height there..

Round and round I looked within,
Don’t know from where but atleast to begin,
I pledge to rise, I pledge to move,
I pledge I have my strengths to prove..


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Re: pledge............(ambu)

«Reply #1 on: April 12, 2016, 11:52:31 AM »

NICE....CLAP CLAP CLAP.....


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Re: pledge............(ambu)

«Reply #2 on: April 12, 2016, 12:26:02 PM »

Quote from: ambalika sharma on April 12, 2016, 10:58:25 AM

PLEDGE

Round and round I see the way,
Round and round someone always just say,
Definitely is a light there,
So far but surely a sight there..

I don’t know whether it is true,
I don’t know whether I can go through,
Round and round an impatience always stays..

Round and round someone always say,
There is a flight there,
So far, definitely a touchable height there..

Round and round I looked within,
Don’t know from where but atleast to begin,
I pledge to rise, I pledge to move,
I pledge I have my strengths to prove..


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ambalika sharma

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Re: pledge............(ambu)

«Reply #3 on: April 12, 2016, 04:31:56 PM »

Quote from: poojachakarvarti@gmail.co on April 12, 2016, 11:52:31 AM

NICE....CLAP CLAP CLAP.....

thanks for reading


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ambalika sharma

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Re: pledge............(ambu)

«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2016, 04:33:00 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on April 12, 2016, 12:26:02 PM

thankx for reading


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Re: pledge............(ambu)

«Reply #5 on: April 12, 2016, 07:57:04 PM »

Gorgeous w/ RAU. ( Mr. Adil has aleady asked you to correct spellings of word whether, I personally feel it will be better to change the word itself to if instead.)
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ambalika sharma

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Re: pledge............(ambu)

«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2016, 12:01:54 AM »

Quote from: surindarn on April 12, 2016, 07:57:04 PM

Gorgeous w/ RAU. ( Mr. Adil has aleady asked you to correct spellings of word whether, I personally feel it will be better to change the word itself to if instead.)
icon_salut

ohhh.i just forgot.thanku