Poetry competition for the month of Jan 2015

by @Kaash on January 18, 2015, 11:42:49 AM
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Poetry competition for the month of Jan 2015

Doston bahut dino se yahan koi poetry competition nahi hua takreeban chaar saalon se,
aaj naye saal ke mauke par main aap sabhi ka saath paake ek koshish kar raha hun is ummeed ke saath ki poore saal is tarah ki cheezen kayam rahen.

Is competition ke liye kuch rules samajh len:

1. Members adhik se adhik do kalaam/creation post kar sakte hain.Members ghazal,nazam,ashaar,muktak,kaavya kuch bhi post kar sakte hain.

2. Members doosron ke kalaam par apni raay bhi zahir karenge isi thread par.Jo members sirf hindi me post karen unse request hai ki wo roman english me bhi post karen jisse padhne waalon ke saath jury ko bhi sahuliyat ho.

3. Members jo is competition se bahar rahna chahte hain wo bhi yahan post kar sakte hain bus ye baat mention kar den apni post ke saath.

4. I request Admin and Moderators to please provide their views if they have any and also to participate in this competition as we all are basically a member to the site and this competition is for everyone and by everyone.

5. Members jo is competition me participate karenge wo haar-jeet ki baat ko alag rakhkar post karen yaani unhe jo bhi result ho wo maanya hoga is feeling ke saath shirkat karen aur wo is competition ko apne fun ke muzaayre ke taur par len ya baaki saathi kalakaaron ke saath ek get together ke taur par.

6. Jo members ya moderators competition me participate nahi karenge wo jury honge aur yahan sabhi ke kalaamon par apni raay denge ya phir mujhe pm bhi kar sakte hain lekin unhe bhi apni rachnaayen post karni hongi.

7.  Main baaki jury members ke saath milke jury members aur baaki membraan jo apni raay zahir karenge post kiye gaye kalaamon ke babat unki raay ko compile karunga. In case main nahi bhi rahun as might get busy in work and may not be able to come on net to bhi ise jaari rakhen aur jury members( members + mod) apni apni raay ke mutaabik winners ko chose karen and announce karen. Iske liye koi bhi jury member lead kar sakta hai.

8. Doston, don't expect any sign logo from the site kyunki ye competition ham sabhi milkar kar rahe hain.

9. Jo winners honge ham unki posts ko Yodiary ke yaani site ke behtar kalaam me shamil karenge aur iske ilaawa bhi jo hoga ham wo samay aane par batayenge.

10. Ek baat zarur gaur me rakhen ki jo bhi log participate karenge wo doosron ki posts par bhi apni raay/daad zahir karenge jisse na sirf post kiya gaye kalaamon ke babat balki unke remark ke banisbat unke khud ke attitude ke baare me jury ko pata chal sakega jo ki result me count karega.

11.  Competition is from 18/01/2015 to 29/01/2015.

12. Is competition ke results kuchh categories me announce kiye jayenge

a. Best male poetry (1,2,3)
b. Best female poetry(1,2,3)
c. Readers choice
d. Master piece
e. Welcome medal for the old member who participated after a long time.
f. Welcome medal for the new member who has joined the site recently.
g. Most consistent member



13. Competition ka result 31st Jan ko announce hoga.

14. Iske alaawa bhi agar koi naye rules shamil kiye jaayenge to yahin amend kiye jayenge.

to doston, tayyar ho jaaiye apne behtar kalaamon ko post karne ke liye

all the best!








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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2015, 03:18:10 PM »
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Post by Kaash
form of poetry - Ghazal
Title - Aadmi
Mode - Non-competition


Daraakar nahi dar dar ke jeeta hai aadmi
Jeekar nahi mar mar kar marta hai aadmi

Waqt  tha to  waqt ko kabhi samjha hi nahi
Baad muddat gaye lamhen khojta  hai aadmi

Apno me,  paraayon me  apnapan dhoondhta
Jaane kyun khud se hi jalta rahta hai aadmi

Ghar me chhat na thi to pareshaan rahta tha
chhat hui jab to aasmaan chahta hai aadmi

'Kaash' ne to koshish kari bas bagiya lagaane ki
apne jeewan ka khud baaghbaa hota hai aadmi
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2015, 05:23:02 PM »
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hey, no one participated?? kya ye vichaar ghalat tha?
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2015, 09:18:28 AM »
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lijiye kaashji.... ham aagaye apni RAchna leke....

Post by - Mann
Form of Poetry - Geet
Tital - Ai pathik tu bas chala chal.....
Mode - Competition

ye geet yo par ham pahle bhi post kar chuke hain.....

Yai pathik tu bas chala chal, rain ho ya ho sabera.
Ye jagat tara nahin hai, Dundta kyun kar basera.
Yai pathik tu bas chala chal.....

Surya ki tarha chamkana, aur us sa hi hai jalna.
Sab andhere dur karna, jis dagar se bhi nikalna.
Dekhna ke darr ke tujhse, haar jayega andhera.
Yai pathik tu bas chala chal.......

Baarishon ki rimjhime ho, ya ke ho tufan path par.
Ruk na jana tu kahin bhi, raah main chalte chalte thak kar.
Kya hua ke chha raha hai, barasne baadal ghanera.
Yai pathik tu bas chala chal.......

Ye jo teri zindgi hai, jeele is ko  panchhion si.
Mat bana bandhan koi, mat kar ise tu bandion si.
Kyon banana chahta tu, apne lie preet ka ghera.
Yai pathik tu bas chala chal.......

Jodta hai tu jo ye "mann", apne lie sajja saaj.
Kal ka kya aaye na aaye, jeena hai bas jeele aaj,
Aa hi jayega tere sang, dekhna ek din ujera.
Yai pathik tu bas chala chal.......
Yai pathik tu bas chala chal......

mann
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2015, 03:26:09 PM »
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Sabse pehle aapka shukriya dear Mann jo aapne is chhoti si koshish ko saraha aur mere is competition karaane ke jazbaat ko sahi samjha.
Also thanks for asking some rules in PM jinhe main sabhi ke saamne share karna chahunga kyunki wo important points hain.

a) participants can post their old poetry as well.
b) the poems can be half or full I mean even if somebody posts ashaar then also it will be counted in the competition.

jahan tak is poem ki baat hai to yahin kahunga ki aapne pathik ke manobhaavon ka apni rachna me bahut achha chitran kiya, this is really a great poem.
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2015, 06:18:24 AM »
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form of poetry - sher
Mode - Non-competition

Kitaabezindagi to kuchh panno ne aise nikhaar di
kisine mohabbat pe waar di, kisine nafrat me guzaar di
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2015, 11:18:39 AM »
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Post by - Mann
Form of Poetry - sher
Mode - Competition


khanzaron ko manj-dho rakhne laga,
usko meri yaad fir aane lagi......
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2015, 02:57:35 PM »
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Form of poetry - Sher
Mode - competition

REHNE DO ZUBAN KO SAB AAYAN HAI AISE HEE...
TUMHAARI NIGAHEN KEH RAHI HAIN WAISE BHI!

Surindar.N                                       "MohanN"
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2015, 06:49:47 PM »
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Post by - "MohanN"
Form of Poetry - Rubai
Mode - Competition

TEZ KHRAAMEE MOHABBAT NAA POOCHH...
AANKH KEE TEER ANDAAZEE NAA POOCH'
ISHQ KEE BEGAANAA RAWEE KE NISSAR...
HUSN KAA ANDAAZ-E-ITAAB NAA POOCH!!

Surindar.N                      "MohanN"
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2015, 07:09:59 PM »
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Post by - Mann
Form of Poetry - sher
Mode - Competition


khanzaron ko manj-dho rakhne laga,
usko meri yaad fir aane lagi......


Mann dear bahut hi umda sher, that's really awesome
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2015, 08:40:58 PM »
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Post by - "MohanN"
Form of poetry - Sher
Mode - competition

REHNE DO ZUBAN KO SAB AAYAN HAI AISE HEE...
TUMHAARI NIGAHEN KEH RAHI HAIN WAISE BHI!

Surindar.N                                       "MohanN"

Dear Surindar.N, bahut hi badhiya sher, achhi tukbandi hai  Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2015, 08:44:57 PM »
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Post by - "MohanN"
Form of Poetry - Rubai
Mode - Competition

TEZ KHRAAMEE MOHABBAT NAA POOCHH...
AANKH KEE TEER ANDAAZEE NAA POOCH'
ISHQ KEE BEGAANAA RAWEE KE NISSAR...
KUSN KAA ANDAAZ-E-ITAAB NAA POOCH!!

Surindar.N                      "MohanN"


bahut khoob likha hai aapne Surindar.N ehsaas-e-ishq-o-husn par, I think last line me kusn ki jagah husn hai,
anyways behatreen rubaai
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2015, 08:50:38 PM »
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Dear friends,
please re-read the rules and ask me if there is any confusion. Also, note that giving views to the every posted creation/poetry in this thread is Mandatory.
Aapko apne kalaam ke ilaawa posts kiye gaye har kalaam/post par apni raay zaahir karni hai.

Shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: January 24, 2015, 04:59:44 AM »
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bahut hi khub sher kaha surindarnji....
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«Reply #14 on: January 24, 2015, 05:06:12 AM »
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kaashji bahut khub ghazal kahi hai aapne... aur sher bhi khub.....

aapka bahut bahut shukriya hamare sher ko pasand karne k lie....
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