Poetry competition for the month of Jan 2015

by @Kaash on January 18, 2015, 11:42:49 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 24, 2015, 06:42:59 AM »
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Dear Mann,

Shukriya aapka, poetry competition to abhi chal hi raha hai aur uske results ke babat to samay aane par hi pata chal payega.

Lekin, main aapse poochhna chahta tha ki yadi aapki pehli post
ki gayi poem ko kabhi kisi book me shalim kiya jaaye to use aap isi user name ke antargat dena chahenge athwa apne real name se.
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«Reply #16 on: January 24, 2015, 06:24:22 PM »
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Manjusha Mann,
Aapka dhanywaad jo aapne PM me mujhse share kiya ki is naam se hi aap likhte hain.

Anyways, all the best for the competition!
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«Reply #17 on: January 25, 2015, 10:27:46 AM »
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Doston,

Abhi jo regular members hain YoIndia par unhe main yahan likh raha hun agar kisi ka naam na likh paaya to wo ya koi aur isi thread me mention kar de.

Sk Saini
Laaiba
Kasak
Mann.mann
Nakul
Adil
Surindarn
Hriday
Ravinder
Shireen
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Sheba
Ram Krishan Rastogi
Vampi Khan
Khawish
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Parwaaz
Iftkhar
Hasan
Rishi
Adab
Saru
Ambu

Inme se jo bhi is poetry contest me participate karenge unki list alag hogi aur jo nahi karenge unki raay ke mutaabik ham unanimously winners declare karenge.

Thanks!
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«Reply #18 on: January 26, 2015, 05:08:43 PM »
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aisa lag raha hai ki is contest ka vijeta main hun kyunki maine hi ise shuru kiya  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard shayad isiliye log kum participate kar rahe hain Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Are doston maine to non competition me pehle hi post kar dia hai!!

Ya phir log isliye participate nahi kar rahe ki winners ko site ka tag nahi milega  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

lekin kya hum ise sirf ek achhe start ke taur par nahi khel sakte  


waise maine is babat admin se baat ki thi i mean pm bheja tha lekin unka jawaab sunke pata chala ki isthati gambheer hai
ye hai unka jawaab



Dear admin I am sharing yr views/problems to other members. I wish it can be sorted out.

Due to situations here, I am not give time to  Yoindia Shayariadab at all, have not even seen your thread about poetry contest. Due to occupied schedule, I can not give time to  Yoindia Shayariadab anymore.

I am in talk with some guys to invest on Yoindia Shayariadab to rework and improve it. Once settled, I guess things will change.

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Bhaia kauno jeete ya na jeete lekin ham to ek shart jo khud se lagaye the wo jeet gaye aur wo ye ki admin sahab badle nahi aur naa hi unki samasya badli hai and we all have to understand this..

Well, I must say that we have to understand the problem of our admin and do something.
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«Reply #19 on: January 28, 2015, 05:01:26 AM »
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Post by - "Prakrati"
Form of poetry - Kavita
Mode - competition



"Zindgi ke saat panno par.."

Zindgi ke in saat panno par
Ek chhota sa shabd kho gaya.
“Bachpan” ne dhundha pahle panne par,
“Shuruaat” ne dhundha dusre panne par,
Dono hue nakam,
Fir....
“Darr” ne kaha kyon na ham miljul kar dhundhe,
Aur kaam shuru hua,
Par chhathe panne tak pahunchne par,
Sab thak gaye.
Lekin...
“Mehnat” apne dost “Sahas” ko lekar
Saatven panne par pahunchi,
Un dono ne
Sabse pahle dhundh lia
Us shabad ko jo bahut zaruri hai
Aur wo shabad hai
“Maut” ek yesa shabad,
Jo tab likha jata hai
Jab...
“Zindagi” ka “Ant” hota hai.

Parakrati
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«Reply #20 on: January 28, 2015, 05:26:44 AM »
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Post by - "surindarn"
Form of poetry - Kavita
Mode - Competition.

GEET

Saavan kee rut phir hai aayee…                                                                                                   
Har.su haryaalee hai chaayee!

Ek laash phir jaag uthee hai…
Pyaar mein naach uthee hai!

Aayaa hai laut saajan pyaaraa
Gaataa hai premee dil haaraa!

Saavan kee rut phir hai aayee…
Har.su haryaalee hai chaayee!

Musaraten aaj phir jawan hain…
Hasraten bhi phir rawan hain!

Saaraa jag lagtaa hai apnaa saa…
Apnaa man lagtaa hai apnaa saa!

Bulbul bhi hai cheh.chahaayee
Har.su haryaalee hai chaayee!

Dil phir se baag baag huaa hai…
Har.ek sapnaa sakaar huaa hai!

Jo dab ke reh gaayee thee hook…
Phir banee hai koyel kee kook!

Koyel aaj phir se hai gaayee…
Har.su haryaalee hai chaayee!

Surindar.N          "MohanN"



                                                                                                                                      


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«Reply #21 on: January 28, 2015, 07:09:18 PM »
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Quote from: prakrati on January 28, 2015, 05:01:26 AM
Post by - "Prakrati"
Form of poetry - Kavita
Mode - competition



"Zindgi ke saat panno par.."

Zindgi ke in saat panno par
Ek chhota sa shabd kho gaya.
“Bachpan” ne dhundha pahle panne par,
“Shuruaat” ne dhundha dusre panne par,
Dono hue nakam,
Fir....
“Darr” ne kaha kyon na ham miljul kar dhundhe,
Aur kaam shuru hua,
Par chhathe panne tak pahunchne par,
Sab thak gaye.
Lekin...
“Mehnat” apne dost “Sahas” ko lekar
Saatven panne par pahunchi,
Un dono ne
Sabse pahle dhundh lia
Us shabad ko jo bahut zaruri hai
Aur wo shabad hai
“Maut” ek yesa shabad,
Jo tab likha jata hai
Jab...
“Zindagi” ka “Ant” hota hai.

Parakrati


Waah, behad khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Prakrati, bahut umda tareeke se aapne zindagi aur maut dono ko bayaan kiya hai
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«Reply #22 on: January 28, 2015, 07:30:50 PM »
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Dear Surindarn, you have already submitted your two posts for the competition and now your third poem will not be counted in this competition.
You can post your new poem in Feb poetry contest which will start from tomorrow.
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«Reply #23 on: January 30, 2015, 12:14:06 PM »
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This is my writing for poetry contest jan 2015,,,

mujhey maslehat ka fareb de,
meri saadgi ko chhalla Gaya.

mujhey beech raah Mein chor kar,
mera raahbar hi chalaa Gaya..
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«Reply #24 on: February 01, 2015, 06:08:00 AM »
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kash  ji ap ki tarif jitni ki jaye kam hai ap ko dil mubarkbad dena chahta hoon aur ap ka post maine phele read nahi kiya tha par abi read kr rha hoon aur khushi ho rahi hai ki koi toh hai yoindia mein jo positive response wali activity krwa rha hai realy salute for you !!!!   
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«Reply #25 on: February 02, 2015, 07:20:48 AM »
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zindagi ke imtihaan mein hum bhi kitaab e rasmein parhna chahtey hain
           jo de jaye sukoon dil ko har sawaal Ka jawaab likhna chahtey hain
             
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«Reply #26 on: February 02, 2015, 07:24:48 AM »
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 Applause Applause

khub saahilji.......
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«Reply #27 on: February 02, 2015, 07:28:51 AM »
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mere lafhzon ko parhkar apne shayari Ka naam de diya
           meri koshish ko apne ek naya mukaam de diya
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«Reply #28 on: February 09, 2015, 04:53:51 AM »
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thanks...... kaashji
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