Poetry contest for the month of Feb 2015

by @Kaash on January 30, 2015, 07:01:27 PM
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Friends,

Rules and categories are same. The contest is from 31/01/2015 - 26/02/2015
I am listing all the rules and categories:
Poetry contest for the month of Feb 2015

1. Members adhik se adhik do kalaam/creation post kar sakte hain.
Members ghazal,nazam,ashaar,muktak,kaavya kuch bhi post kar sakte hain.

2. Members doosron ke kalaam par apni raay bhi zahir karenge isi thread par.Jo members sirf hindi me post karen unse request hai ki wo roman english me bhi post karen jisse padhne waalon ke saath jury ko bhi sahuliyat ho.

3. Members jo is competition se bahar rahna chahte hain wo bhi yahan post kar sakte hain bus ye baat mention kar den apni post ke saath.

4. Jo members ya moderators competition me participate nahi karenge wo jury honge aur yahan sabhi ke kalaamon par apni raay denge ya phir mujhe pm bhi kar sakte hain lekin unhe bhi apni rachnaayen post karni hongi.

5.  Main baaki jury members ke saath milke jury members aur baaki membraan jo apni raay zahir karenge post kiye gaye kalaamon ke babat unki raay ko compile karunga. In case main nahi bhi rahun as might get busy in work and may not be able to come on net to bhi ise jaari rakhen aur jury members( members + mod) apni apni raay ke mutaabik winners ko chose karen and announce karen. Iske liye koi bhi jury member lead kar sakta hai.

6. Doston, don't expect any sign logo from the site kyunki ye competition ham sabhi milkar kar rahe hain.

7. Jo winners honge ham unki posts ko Yodiary ke yaani site ke behtar kalaam me shamil karenge aur iske ilaawa bhi jo hoga ham wo samay aane par batayenge.

8. Ek baat zarur gaur me rakhen ki jo bhi log participate karenge wo doosron ki posts par bhi apni raay/daad zahir karenge jisse na sirf post kiya gaye kalaamon ke babat balki unke remark ke banisbat unke khud ke attitude ke baare me jury ko pata chal sakega jo ki result me count karega.

9.  Competition is from 31/01/2015 to 26/02/2015.

10. Competition ke results kuchh categories me announce kiye jayenge

a. Best male poetry (1,2,3)
b. Best female poetry(1,2,3)
c. Readers choice
d. Master piece
e. Welcome medal for the old member who participated after a long time.
f. Welcome medal for the new member who has joined the site recently.
g. Most consistent member



13. Competition ka result 28 Feb ko announce hoga.

14. Iske alaawa bhi agar koi naye rules shamil kiye jaayenge to yahin amend kiye jayenge.

to doston, tayyar ho jaaiye apne behtar kalaamon ko post karne ke liye

all the best!


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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2015, 08:18:56 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2015, 04:48:41 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2015, 08:15:50 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2015, 06:28:16 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2015, 07:34:04 AM »
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iss competition ke lie shukriya kaashji....
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2015, 08:33:07 AM »
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zindagi ke imtihaan mein hum bhi kitaab e rasmein parhna chahtey hain
                jo de jaye sukoon dil ko har sawaal Ka jawaab likhna chahtey hain
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«Reply #8 on: February 02, 2015, 12:49:51 PM »
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Nice poem dinesh ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2015, 06:36:10 AM »
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Dear Saahill aapne jo pm me question poochha hai wo important hai isliye main uska answer yahin de raha hun jisse aur membraan ko bhi sahuliyat ho contest ke babat.Halanki upar rules and regulations me ye mention hai.

Aapne poochha ek member kitni post contest me kar sakta hai to uska answer hai only two. It means from 31-01-2015 to 26-02-2015 a contestant can post only two poems.
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2015, 08:49:03 PM »
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Post by @Kaash
Form of poetry - Nazm
Title of the poem - Kaavya
Mode - Non competition

Kya hai kaavya
aksar sochta rahta hun
kaise koi shayri yun hi
kagaz pe likh jaati hai
kya hai kaavya
kaise ye aatmik srot ka kendr
ban jati hai
shayad tab jab kalpanaon ki
buniyaad sachhaai ko padh paati hai
aur phir use waisa hi likh paane
ka saahas kar paati hai
kaise amar ho jaati hai koi kavita
kya yun hi apne mann ki bhadaas nikaalke
ya apne dar ko shabdon ka hathiyaar banake
kya shohrat ka aadhaar leke
ya aham ka bukhaar leke
nahi shayri in bachkaani aur kaayraana
cheezon se bahut pare ki baat hai
jahan tasavvur ki paakezgi ki mehek
likhne waale ko likhne me hi jannat ka ehsaas kara jati hai
shayri ek andaaz hai, ek kala hai
ek dua hai, ek sada hai
ek safar hai, ek bandagi hai
jisme likhne waala khud ko khoke hi
khud ko paaya jaata hai
is hakeekat se rubaru hota hai
is hakeekat ko tasleem karta hai
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«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2015, 03:14:28 AM »
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Kaash Sahib January contest mein main ne 3 items post kiye theh. ek item sher thaa dosraa rubai. aur teesraa geet thaa. Kyaa inh mein se teesraa item jo Geet thaa accept nahin kiyaa gayaa thaa?
Mujhe bataane kee kripaa keejiye.
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2015, 06:43:55 PM »
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Yes! you are right, the third poem was not counted there.
Thanks!
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