Premi

by Meena on May 08, 2005, 01:52:24 PM
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Kali chadar odhe, has raha tha asman,
Suraj ko chupa liya, iska tha usko abhiman,

Bijliyan nach rahi thi, badal garaj rahe te,
Kuch kehe rahi hai kudrat hume, kuch aisa hua guman,

Darti hai pyasi, tadap rahi hai jiske liye,
Bej diya usne barish ke haath pyar ka paigam,

Hota hai yuh milan darti aur gagan ka yaha,
Aise premi bhi kabhi dekhe hai, jo hote nahin badnam!
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«Reply #1 on: May 08, 2005, 04:16:27 PM »
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Kali chadar odhe, has raha tha asman,
Suraj ko chupa liya, iska tha usko abhiman,

Bijliyan nach rahi thi, badal garaj rahe te,
Kuch kehe rahi hai kudrat hume, kuch aisa hua guman,

Darti hai pyasi, tadap rahi hai jiske liye,
Bej diya usne barish ke haath pyar ka paigam,

Hota hai yuh milan darti aur gagan ka yaha,
Aise premi bhi kabhi dekhe hai, jo hote nahin badnam!


hey  meenu..........kya baat  hai ........bahot acchi  feelings  tumne ismein rakhi  hai......... bahot acche mere dost.........keep  it  up............
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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2005, 04:19:29 PM »
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wonderfull Meena.......hello to u ...................................
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«Reply #3 on: May 08, 2005, 04:20:58 PM »
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Kali chadar odhe, has raha tha asman,
Suraj ko chupa liya, iska tha usko abhiman,

Bijliyan nach rahi thi, badal garaj rahe te,
Kuch kehe rahi hai kudrat hume, kuch aisa hua guman,

Darti hai pyasi, tadap rahi hai jiske liye,
Bej diya usne barish ke haath pyar ka paigam,

Hota hai yuh milan darti aur gagan ka yaha,
Aise premi bhi kabhi dekhe hai, jo hote nahin badnam!


hey  meenu..........kya baat  hai ........bahot acchi  feelings  tumne ismein rakhi  hai......... bahot acche mere dost.........keep  it  up............


thanx waheed, tum jo meri post parte ho aur pasand karte ho! :D
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«Reply #4 on: May 08, 2005, 04:22:03 PM »
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wonderfull Meena.......hello to you ...................................


shukriya nikki!  :D
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2005, 04:32:26 PM »
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Kali chadar odhe, has raha tha asman,
Suraj ko chupa liya, iska tha usko abhiman,

Bijliyan nach rahi thi, badal garaj rahe te,
Kuch kehe rahi hai kudrat hume, kuch aisa hua guman,

Darti hai pyasi, tadap rahi hai jiske liye,
Bej diya usne barish ke haath pyar ka paigam,

Hota hai yuh milan darti aur gagan ka yaha,
Aise premi bhi kabhi dekhe hai, jo hote nahin badnam!


hey  meenu..........kya baat  hai ........bahot acchi  feelings  tumne ismein rakhi  hai......... bahot acche mere dost.........keep  it  up............


thanx waheed, tum jo meri post parte ho aur pasand karte ho! :D


ur  always  welcome  meena..........mujhe bahot acchi lagti hai tumahri poem......main  kya karoon..........
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2005, 05:50:15 PM »
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Kali chadar odhe, has raha tha asman,
Suraj ko chupa liya, iska tha usko abhiman,

Bijliyan nach rahi thi, badal garaj rahe te,
Kuch kehe rahi hai kudrat hume, kuch aisa hua guman,

Darti hai pyasi, tadap rahi hai jiske liye,
Bej diya usne barish ke haath pyar ka paigam,

Hota hai yuh milan darti aur gagan ka yaha,
Aise premi bhi kabhi dekhe hai, jo hote nahin badnam!


very nice meena Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2005, 05:51:26 AM »
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Kali chadar odhe, has raha tha asman,
Suraj ko chupa liya, iska tha usko abhiman,

Bijliyan nach rahi thi, badal garaj rahe te,
Kuch kehe rahi hai kudrat hume, kuch aisa hua guman,

Darti hai pyasi, tadap rahi hai jiske liye,
Bej diya usne barish ke haath pyar ka paigam,

Hota hai yuh milan darti aur gagan ka yaha,
Aise premi bhi kabhi dekhe hai, jo hote nahin badnam!



Meena jeee very nice....................very very nice.............Aapne to kuch haqeeqat bayaan kar di......................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2005, 06:32:36 AM »
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Its a very nice piece of work Meena ..... Too good !!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 09, 2005, 10:19:54 AM »
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toooooooo goooody goody Meena sissss...............last line naa sachhi bahut pyaari.....
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«Reply #10 on: May 09, 2005, 04:17:46 PM »
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shukriya nidhi,.... friend,.... talat... and dolly.....!!

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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2005, 01:32:43 AM »
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HUMNE TUMKO APNI YAADO MEIN BASA LIYA HAI
TUMHARE TABASSUM KO APNI AANKHON MEIN CHUPA DIYA HAI
BHUK PYAAS KUCH YAAD NAHI AB
TUMKO BHOOL KE HUMNE KHUD SAAZA DIYA HAI  

APNE GHAM KO SABH SE CHUPAKAR RAKHA HAI
WO TERE GULABI RUMAAL KO
TERE ODHNA SAMAJHKAR DIL SE LAGA RAKHA HAI
AANK SE AASO KABHI BHI CHALAK PADTEY HAI

ISLIYE AANKHON PAR HUMNE AB CHASMA LAGA RAKHA HAI

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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2005, 03:42:42 PM »
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HUMNE TUMKO APNI YAADO MEIN BASA LIYA HAI
TUMHARE TABASSUM KO APNI AANKHON MEIN CHUPA DIYA HAI
BHUK PYAAS KUCH YAAD NAHI AB
TUMKO BHOOL KE HUMNE KHUD SAAZA DIYA HAI  

APNE GHAM KO SABH SE CHUPAKAR RAKHA HAI
WO TERE GULABI RUMAAL KO
TERE ODHNA SAMAJHKAR DIL SE LAGA RAKHA HAI
AANK SE AASO KABHI BHI CHALAK PADTEY HAI

ISLIYE AANKHON PAR HUMNE AB CHASMA LAGA RAKHA HAI

nm


nice navedd!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2005, 07:10:23 PM »
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Kali chadar odhe, has raha tha asman,
Suraj ko chupa liya, iska tha usko abhiman,

Bijliyan nach rahi thi, badal garaj rahe te,
Kuch kehe rahi hai kudrat hume, kuch aisa hua guman,

Darti hai pyasi, tadap rahi hai jiske liye,
Bej diya usne barish ke haath pyar ka paigam,

Hota hai yuh milan darti aur gagan ka yaha,
Aise premi bhi kabhi dekhe hai, jo hote nahin badnam!


Waah...Fabulous! Meena ji

Befikr so rahi hogi wo orkar chaadar makhmal ke
Hum gouzaar rahe hein raat karwat badal badal ke

Amanush...

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«Reply #14 on: May 20, 2005, 01:35:08 PM »
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shukriya ji shukriya!!!!! :D  apne bhi bohot pyara likha hai!!!!!!!!!

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