*** Priya***

by kritika sharma on January 21, 2011, 01:00:49 PM
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Ek Ladki thi akeli "PRIYA"
anjani si wo thi pahli
har bure shaqs se wo ladti thi
par dil hi dil me is bedard
duniya se darti
sapno pe yakeen  wo rakhti thi
koi le ishq ka naam to wo
khud ko pathar kehkar raste badalti thi
longo ke dard ko apna samjhti thi
Apni duaon me duniya ko shaamil karti thi
Duniya ko Jine ka matalab sikhaya karti thi
Aanshun chhipa kar longo ke liye muskuraya karti thi
Ek Ladki thi aesi jo sirf auron ki khushiyon ke liye jiya karti thi !!
**Missing my self**
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2011, 02:29:13 PM »
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aisa kya hogaya Priya ji aapko... aise to aap ab bhi ho na Huh?

Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2011, 03:00:16 PM »
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Kritika ji ---khud ko miss mai bhi karta hun sad5
"
mera wo gambhir chehra
jis par rahta tha hardum gam ka pehra
      wo logon ka mujhe dekhkar rukh badalna
      takraye kabhi to muh ferna
yaad aate hain wo pal bahut
na dost na saathi bas akela tanha tha bahut
    aansuo ka peena chuppchap
    dard me jeena din raat
really wo bhi kya din the
jab har kisi ki aah me hum the
""
gamo me jeena aur khushiyon se dur rahna yar really
M missing Myself so much sad5
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2011, 03:09:56 PM »
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hmmm nice story........like it
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2011, 03:45:51 PM »
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thanks intzaar ji
 hum ab bhi wahi hai ..par ab waqt nahi milta hai utna !!
thanks nirala ji and thanks matrix ji !
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2011, 04:44:55 PM »
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bahut khubsurat Kritika ji.
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2011, 07:41:58 PM »
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khud ko khone ka itna gum hai to
kyu tu yu gumnaam ho gayi
na khone deti apni nanhi si jaan ko yu
bekar me hi tum pareshan ho gayi....

sambhal jaati waqt rahte PRIYA
to yu aaj APRIYA na ban jaati...
kisi ko baaho me samet leti duniya to
duniya ki bheed me na kho paati....
                        anyatha na le ise ye is apriya ki chhoti si prastuti hai..
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2011, 09:03:07 PM »
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Bahut Khub Kritika Ji Nice Story About Your Self

Khus Rahiye Aur U Hi Likhte Rahiye

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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2011, 06:05:26 AM »
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iss ladki se kahin kahin meri bhi saansein judi hain
behad khubsurat peshkash kritika......
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2011, 06:35:38 AM »
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veru nice kritika
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2011, 07:12:13 AM »
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   Aapki Writing me freshness ki jhalak hai,very nice Kritika ji, Yun hi likhein or hamesha khush rahein. icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: July 06, 2011, 08:36:39 AM »
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Ek Ladki thi akeli "PRIYA"
anjani si wo thi pahli
har bure shaqs se wo ladti thi
par dil hi dil me is bedard
duniya se darti
sapno pe yakeen  wo rakhti thi
koi le ishq ka naam to wo
khud ko pathar kehkar raste badalti thi
longo ke dard ko apna samjhti thi
Apni duaon me duniya ko shaamil karti thi
Duniya ko Jine ka matalab sikhaya karti thi
Aanshun chhipa kar longo ke liye muskuraya karti thi
Ek Ladki thi aesi jo sirf auron ki khushiyon ke liye jiya karti thi !!
**Missing my self**
tearyeyed



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«Reply #12 on: July 06, 2011, 09:27:01 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai kritika zi !
aapko badhai iss behtareen peshkash pe Usual Smile
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