**Pyaasa rehgaya main** by Rahim

by dead heart on July 30, 2009, 10:32:18 PM
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Mere pyaase rehne ka sabab meri taqdeer ya naseeb ka kharab hona nahin tha Rahim,
Bewaquf main hi tha jo sharabion ke mohaule main pani mangta firr raha tha...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2009, 10:40:00 PM »
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Wow mindblowing creation Rahim ji,bahut khoob. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2009, 10:52:06 PM »
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Shukriya Madhuwesh jee...
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«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2009, 02:44:39 AM »
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Beautiful.

Bahut khoob Rahim Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2009, 05:11:31 AM »
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wah kya baat hai......rahim ji......

tere pyaase rahne ka sabab, tera taqdeer ya naseeb ka kharab hona hi tha rahim,
warna itni akal sharabi main bhi hoti hai,pyaase ko paani dene ka woh bhi karte hai karam.
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«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2009, 12:42:40 PM »
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Wah Kya baat hai Rahim Mere Dost.. Lajawab Alfaaz Likhe hain Dear.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


Cara ji aapne Bhi Kamaal Likha hai.. Applause


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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2009, 03:46:55 PM »
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Kaun kehta hain hote nahi pyaase sharabi

Kayem rahe pyaas hum isiliye rehte hain sharabi...
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2009, 06:43:28 PM »
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Shukriya Angel di, Vikas bhaijan aur Cara jee...

Apne bahaut acha likha hai Cara jee...
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«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2009, 05:44:44 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Rahim Bro... bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #9 on: August 01, 2009, 06:09:52 PM »
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Shukriya Divya di...
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