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Aabroo ko aakhir bachaaoge kab tak
Roj roj bahaane banaaoge kab tak
Ek din to pakde jaaoge najar hai tum par
In khote sikko ko aakhir chalaaoge kab tak
Kisee din chupey raaj khul jaayenge
Idhar ki udhar tum lagaaoge kab tak
Vaakif hun tere dost aur dushamano se
In najron se khud ko chipaaoge kab tak
Ye bekhauf saanse kab tak chalengee
Pyaar bina jindgee bitaaoge kab tak
Hamne to jindgee tere naam kar dee
Is ulphat ko aakhir thukraoge kab tak
Bata do jo bhee dil me hai tere
“Mukesh” se dostee nibhaaoge kab tak
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2012, 05:46:25 AM » |
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In nazroN se khud ko chhupaaoge kab tak. bahut shaandaar misraa hai dili daa qubool kare
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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2012, 08:42:10 AM » |
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Bahut khoob , mkv ji . Achhi peshkash pe
mubarakbad pesh hai.
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~Hriday~
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«Reply #3 on: June 13, 2012, 01:26:00 PM » |
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Wow....!!! bahut bahut khoob Mukesh ji... ehsaason ko jod ke shabdon me kya khoob utaaraa hai aapne... bahut khoobsurat rachna ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2012, 05:27:40 PM » |
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very nice composition MKV
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«Reply #5 on: June 13, 2012, 05:33:52 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2012, 06:32:21 PM » |
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Aabroo ko aakhir bachaaoge kab tak
Roj roj bahaane banaaoge kab tak
Ek din to pakde jaaoge najar hai tum par
In khote sikko ko aakhir chalaaoge kab tak
Kisee din chupey raaj khul jaayenge
Idhar ki udhar tum lagaaoge kab tak
Vaakif hun tere dost aur dushamano se
In najron se khud ko chipaaoge kab tak
Ye bekhauf saanse kab tak chalengee
Pyaar bina jindgee bitaaoge kab tak
Hamne to jindgee tere naam kar dee
Is ulphat ko aakhir thukraoge kab tak
Bata do jo bhee dil me hai tere
“Mukesh” se dostee nibhaaoge kab tak
maqta acha hai. per matla to aisa hai jaise koi kisi ki izzat lootne ki dhamki de rahaa hai.iss liye kalaam ki raunaq badhaane ke liye matle ko phir se badal kar likhein to bahut achaa lage ga |
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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2012, 06:07:41 AM » |
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In nazroN se khud ko chhupaaoge kab tak. bahut shaandaar misraa hai dili daa qubool kare
Thanks Sir |
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«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2012, 09:59:07 AM » |
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Bahut khoob , mkv ji . Achhi peshkash pe
mubarakbad pesh hai.
shukriya hasan sir |
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2012, 05:10:23 PM » |
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Wow....!!! bahut bahut khoob Mukesh ji... ehsaason ko jod ke shabdon me kya khoob utaaraa hai aapne... bahut khoobsurat rachna ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
Shukriya Hriday jee YE sab aapki jarranavaajee hai nahi to mai is laayak nahee. |
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«Reply #10 on: June 17, 2012, 05:25:17 PM » |
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI
APNI NAZRON SE BACHAYEGE KAB TAK
INSAAN TO APNE KO KHUDA SE BHI ZIYADA JANTA HAI
KIYONKI SOCHTE WO PAHLE HAI, KHUDA TAK BAAD MEN PAHUCHTA HAI
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2012, 06:26:30 AM » |
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very nice composition MKV
Shukriya Raaja1234 |
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«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2012, 06:57:16 PM » |
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«Reply #14 on: June 24, 2012, 02:53:22 AM » |
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maqta acha hai. per matla to aisa hai jaise koi kisi ki izzat lootne ki dhamki de rahaa hai.iss liye kalaam ki raunaq badhaane ke liye matle ko phir se badal kar likhein to bahut achaa lage ga
Thanks khamosh jee Jhhote logo ko dhyaan me rakhte hue likha tha matla..khair dhyaan rakhunga aapki salaah. |
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on eTI community..
