qah-qahe( laugh)------------MARHOOM BAHAYAAT

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                        Qah - qahe  jaa   kar   waapas  aa   gaye!
                        udaasiyo.n  se  takraa kar waapas aa gaye!

                        thaa meraa, paas kaise unn tak  pahunchaa!
                        khawaab  mere  chakraa kar waapas aa gaye!

                        dosti  mohabbat bhhari dekhi naa gai unse!
                        aag dushmani ki bhharkaa kar waapas aa gaye!

                        karei.n kyon nadaamat ghalti per apni aur!
                        paintre gunaah ke sikhaa kar waapas aa gaye!

                        zid jo pakdi khaar ne abki to naa poochiye!
                        saare chaman ko mehkaa kar waapas aa gaye!

                        sataayaa teergi ne ji bhhar MARHOOM ko aur!
                        ujaale  chiraag  jalaa  kar waapas aa gaye!
                       
                       
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«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2015, 05:24:19 PM »
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   dosti  mohabbat bhhari dekhi naa gai unse!
                        aag dushmani ki( bhadkaa)kar waapas aa gaye

behad umda peshkash sir ji daaaaaddddd
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«Reply #2 on: May 30, 2015, 06:00:12 PM »
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   dosti  mohabbat bhhari dekhi naa gai unse!
                        aag dushmani ki( bhadkaa)kar waapas aa gaye

behad umda peshkash sir ji daaaaaddddd


thank you sir, bhharkaa or bhhadkaa is not a very big deal but if i write zazbaat in stead of jazbaat is a mistake qah-qahe or kah-kahe no problem but writing jaroori instead of zaroori is a mistake.
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«Reply #3 on: May 30, 2015, 08:02:54 PM »
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                        Qah - qahe  jaa   kar   waapas  aa   gaye!
                        udaasiyo.n  se  takraa kar waapas aa gaye!

                        thaa meraa, paas kaise unn tak  pahunchaa!
                        khawaab  mere  chakraa kar waapas aa gaye!

                        dosti  mohabbat bhhari dekhi naa gai unse!
                        aag dushmani ki bhharkaa kar waapas aa gaye!

                        karei.n kyon nadaamat ghalti per apni aur!
                        paintre gunaah ke sikhaa kar waapas aa gaye!

                        zid jo pakdi khaar ne abki to naa poochiye!
                        saare chaman ko mehkaa kar waapas aa gaye!

                        sataayaa teergi ne ji bhhar MARHOOM ko aur!
                        ujaale  chiraag  jalaa  kar waapas aa gaye!

                        
                        

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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2015, 12:43:29 AM »
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ek rau ke saath dher saaaree daad
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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2015, 03:33:32 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2015, 09:35:18 AM »
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Awesome.
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«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2015, 12:46:41 PM »
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Beautiful.
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«Reply #8 on: May 31, 2015, 04:13:45 PM »
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                       waah waah waah Janaab kyaa baat hai, bahut hee khoobsurat peshkash hai dherooooooN daad Rau ke saath.
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«Reply #9 on: May 31, 2015, 04:14:25 PM »
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ek rau ke saath dher saaaree daad

thank you,sir
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«Reply #10 on: May 31, 2015, 04:14:56 PM »
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waah waah


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«Reply #11 on: June 03, 2015, 03:34:58 PM »
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Awesome.

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