QAIS JI NE KUCHH LIKHA THAA.....bansi

by BANSI DHAMEJA on July 24, 2012, 04:13:49 PM
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Title: Bansi Bhai Jawab Hazir Hai ............... Qais
Post by: Qais on July 02, 2012, 07:48:20 AM
Bansi Dhameja ji ne meri kavita 'Kabhi Paas Mere Bhi Aaya Karo' ki reply mein ek kavita likhi thhi . Jawab bhi kavita mein hai.Sub mitron se request hai ki post per awashya parhein.Shayed enjoy karein .Qais

QAIS JI NE KUCHH LIKHA THAA
MAINE US PE KUCHH LIKHA THAA
QAIS JI KO ACHHA LAGAA THAA
DOSTON KO PARHANA CHAHA THAA
KUCHH DOST NA PARH PAYE THE TAB
MAIN ARZ KARTA HOON PARHEN AB
PESH KAR RAHA HOON DONO EK SAATH
AUR PARHNE KA MAZAA UTHAYEN SAATH SAATH

Title: Kabhi paas mere bhi aaya karo --------- ( Qais )
Post by: Qais on June 05, 2012, 10:09:55 AM
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Kabhi    paas    mere    bhi    aaya    karo  ,
Adaayein    mujhe    bhi     dikhaya    karo


Hain    Maasoom  , Mazloom  , Aashiq    sabhi  ,
Haseeno !   na   zulm   in  pe  dhaya    karo
  

Bahut   jhoote    waade   hain    Netaaon   ke  ,
Na   jhhaanse    mein   inke   tum  aaya  karo


Hain   kutte   wahaan  ke   bade   Bad - tameez  ,
Kabhi    us    gali    se    na    jaaya   karo


Bahut   theek   kahte   thhe   Abba   ye   "Qais" ,
Haseenon    ko    Munh    mat   lagaaya    karo

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l Re: Kabhi paas mere bhi aaya karo --------- ( Qais )
Post by: BANSI DHAMEJA on June 26, 2012, 08:17:51 AM
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 Applause Applause :clap:Bahut achha khaka banaya hai aapne QAIS ji . Thorhee si ijazat chahoonga kuchh kahne kekliye . Arz hai

JO ABAA  KAHTE THE WO ABAA JANE
TUM TO HASEENE KO BULAYA KARO

AGAR ABAA KE KAHNE PE CHLOGE TUM
KISI HASEENA SE NATA NA JORH PAOGE TUM
 
DO PRINDON KO SATH BAITHE HUYE
MAN HI MAN MEN LALCHAOGE TUM

ZARA SOCHO ‘qais’TAB KIYA HOGA
JO ‘bansi’ KI BAAT PE GAUR NA KAROGE TUM
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2012, 04:18:35 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2012, 04:19:37 PM »
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bahut khub bansi ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2012, 04:48:10 PM »
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Saini ji aur Saudagar ji
sochta hoon kiya likhoon kiya na likhoon
kin alfaz se shukriya adaa main karoon
jab bhi aap hausila afzahi karte hain to
mujhe samjh nahin ata main kiya likhoon
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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2012, 04:54:36 PM »
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Bansi ji khoob..
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2012, 05:01:46 PM »
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bahut bahut maza aaya padkar  Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2012, 05:36:31 PM »
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acha laga aap ki rachana padh ker....
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MKV JI SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2012, 03:57:33 AM »
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SUMAN JI , GAYTRI JI APKO ACHHA LAGA
HEY PARH KE MUJHE BAHUT ACHHA LAGA
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