**Qatil ajnabi** by Rahim

by dead heart on February 25, 2010, 08:58:47 PM
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Hmmm iss kalam ke bare main kya kahoun..Kuch hi der pehle likha hai...Hmm ek ajnabi se baat hogayi thi kal jisne jaise ked kar lia mujhe...Unki muskurahat, unka chehra, unki adaein...Hmm bas ked hai Rahim uss ajnabi main...Hmm yeh usko dedicated hai...This is different from the way I write but its just for her...jaisa bhi hai...

Kal jab maine usse kaha ke main tum par likhunga, toh shayad usse yakeen nahin tha...Aj ager tum yeh parr rahi ho, toh lo yeh tumhare liye hai...Yakeen aya?


Itni haseen hai who ke usse lavson main uttar nahin sakta,
Afsos iss’se zada iss baat ka hai ke main usse paa bhi nahin sakta…

Who jab apne nazuk haathon se apni zulfon ko lehrati hai,
Itna pyaara manzar main apne zehan se nikal bhi nahin sakta…

Main jab uski tariff karta hoon toh who sharma jati hai,
Aisi qatil adaein main kisi aur shaks main paa bhi nahin sakta…

Pehli nazar main hi dooba lia tha usne mujhe khud main kuch yun,
Ke uske nashe bhare samander se khud ko bachha bhi nahin sakta…

Kaise kahoun ke kya kya likhna chahta tha uss qatil ajnabi ke bare main,
Bas khwahish hai ‘Rahim’ ki ke uske dil ko ghar bana kar basjaun uss main,
Dukh ke saath kehna parrta hai ke yeh ghar bhi dil ko naseeb nahin hoga,
Koi aur shaks jo basa hua hai,
Afsos yehi hai ke main usse paa nahin sakta…

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2010, 09:02:39 PM »
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Bohot khoob Rahim..I'm sure, 'she' will like it !
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2010, 09:06:37 PM »
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Shukriya di...Umeed toh hum bhi karte hai..
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«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2010, 10:26:44 PM »
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Wah Rahim bhai bahut bahut khoob.very romantic .hmm itna tareef kiya uss ajnabi ka toh usse zaroor pasand aayegi.midblowing creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2010, 10:30:49 PM »
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Shukriya di...Haan umeed hai pasand aye...
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2010, 06:36:06 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   RAHIM JI......

KYUN MERA QATAL KARTA JAA RAHA HAI IK "QATIL AJNABI"
JAB MUJHE MALUM HAI YE NA HOGA MERE NASEEB MEIN KABHI
DEKHTA HUN MEH US "QATIL AJNABHI" KO JABHI
MACHAL UTHTEY HAI MERE ARMAAN WAHIN PE TABHI...
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2010, 09:11:49 PM »
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Bahaut shukriya aur Nice lines Cara jee..
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2010, 05:22:13 AM »
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Aaaye Haye.. Kya Baat hai Rahim Bhaiiiiii.. Lagta hai Ishq Ho Gaya aapko Pahali Nigaah me...  icon_thumleft  Winking

Behad Khubsooort Ehasaas aur Andaaz Pesh Kiye Hain aapne Rahim Bhai.. Har Lafz Se Mohabbat Chalak Rahi Hai.. Bahut Hi Pyaari Peshkash hai... !!  Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2010, 05:49:59 AM »
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Awww .. IT is Too lovely Dedication Bro.. Tumne tho Aapne Dil ka Haal Byaan kar diya... Chahat na bhi ho tho jarur yea pad kar uss chahat ka ehsaas tho ho hi jayega usko...

Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Bhai ! Keep it Up !
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dead heart
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«Reply #9 on: February 27, 2010, 11:00:03 AM »
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Shukriya shukriya Divya di aur Vikas bhaijan...
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simi16
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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2010, 11:14:51 PM »
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waah waah kya baat hai!!! really nice Usual Smile
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dead heart
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«Reply #11 on: March 03, 2010, 10:48:15 AM »
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Shukriya Simi jee..!
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simi16
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«Reply #12 on: March 03, 2010, 09:25:57 PM »
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oiiii jee... :s aise mat pukaro... :s look so old lol :D
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«Reply #13 on: March 03, 2010, 09:29:38 PM »
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Oh ok...toh kaise pukarein??? Simi 'jee'
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2010, 07:03:05 PM »
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Shukriya Shukriya Shihab Bhai...Allah apko bhi khush rakhe!
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