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by ALONE BAD on March 29, 2007, 02:29:02 PM
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Ek dujae sae sabki juda hoti hain raahen
Kabhi-kabhi zindagi sae bhi khafa hoti hain raahen

Har raah kee manzil hoti hai kehtae hain sabhi
Na jaane kitno ko manzil tak pahoochati hain raahen

Chaltae rehna karam hai musafir ka yaaroon
Kya pata usae kahan le jaati hain raahen

Safar zindagi ka khatam hona hai ek din
Manziloon ki chaah main suni reh jaati hain raahen


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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2007, 03:12:11 PM »
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nice work AB ji.......yu hi likhte rahiyega.........
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«Reply #2 on: March 29, 2007, 10:12:39 PM »
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Very nice Alone...wonderful ! Usual Smile

btw, its a beautiful avtar, can you decrease the size ?
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«Reply #3 on: March 30, 2007, 12:20:01 PM »
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nice work AB ji.......yu hi likhte rahiyega.........




shukriya ji.... i forget ur name. can u pls tell me wat is ur name...

thanx once again
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2007, 12:27:18 PM »
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Very nice Alone...wonderful ! Usual Smile

btw, its a beautiful avtar, can you decrease the size ?



Shukriya Talat ji.....

yaar ye Avtar ka size to apne aap hi chota ho gaya hai... ab to theek lag raha hoga shayad...?? i think so..



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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2007, 02:22:08 PM »
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its beautifull ...Alone Bad ji...

I just love these lines..

Har raah kee manzil hoti hai kehtae hain sabhi
Na jaane kitno ko manzil tak pahoochati hain raahen
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«Reply #6 on: March 30, 2007, 03:03:50 PM »
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well.......

manzil ki jise na talaash hai main woh deewana raahi hun
 apne karam se to pata nahi per naam ka beshak 'fahi'' hun.


....................@fahi@.........................
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«Reply #7 on: March 30, 2007, 06:16:22 PM »
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wow...bohat hi acha likha hai alone bad...describing the life...loved it.keep writing.
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2007, 08:11:25 PM »
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Alone..now its fine Usual Smile

Nice lines Fahi !

Hum raah main bhatakte hain, manzil ka nishaan dhoondte,
Kya kabhi kisi manzil ne raahon main dhoonda hai humko !!
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«Reply #9 on: March 31, 2007, 12:04:22 PM »
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accha sawal hai..........

kuch aisi bhi ban jaati hai tabaahi ki wajah kabhi kabhi
rukh modti hai manzile badal karke jagah kabhi kabhi
na kadam koi ,na nishaa.n koi,na koi karvaan milta hai
deti hai khud raahen yahan raahi ko daga kabhi kabhi


............................@fahi@............................
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«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2007, 12:21:11 PM »
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wow...bohat hi acha likha hai alone bad...describing the life...loved it.keep writing.






shukriya Niddhi ji.... i will try my level best.......


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«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2008, 07:14:17 PM »
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Ek dujae sae sabki juda hoti hain raahen
Kabhi-kabhi zindagi sae bhi khafa hoti hain raahen

Har raah kee manzil hoti hai kehtae hain sabhi
Na jaane kitno ko manzil tak pahoochati hain raahen

Chaltae rehna karam hai musafir ka yaaroon
Kya pata usae kahan le jaati hain raahen

Safar zindagi ka khatam hona hai ek din
Manziloon ki chaah main suni reh jaati hain raahen


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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Alone!!!!

jeevan ke sung badalti rahti hai yah raahein
kabhi apni to kabhi ajnabi ban jaati hai yah raahein
MAnjil ki talash mai, manjil ban jaati hai yah raahein
aor kabhi nirasha ki ek tasveer ban jaati hai yah raahein....
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