~Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai~ by Rahim

by dead heart on September 15, 2010, 11:08:17 AM
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Hum bheegi palkon ke sang bhi muskuraye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..

Bewaffaon ki mehfil main unhi ke saath jhilmilaye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..

Dil na choone wale gaanon ko bhi gungunaye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..

Bei-maani shor kay beech bhi hum nazmein likh paye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..

Kehne ko toh teri umr hi kya hai ‘Khamosh’,
Phir duniya ko kafi kareeb se dekh paye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..

Diya hai zindagi jab bhi thokar mujhe yaaron,
Aise zakhmon se hi hum sab kuch seekh paye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 11:17:46 AM »
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bahut khooooooob ji Rahim ji.
kamaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal ka likha hai.
bahut sach hai. sab ke saath hota hai,
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Hum bheegi palkon ke sang bhi muskuraye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..

Bewaffaon ki mehfil main unhi ke saath jhilmilaye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..

Dil na choone wale gaanon ko bhi gungunaye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..

Bei-maani shor kay beech bhi hum nazmein likh paye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..

Kehne ko toh teri umr hi kya hai ‘Khamosh’,
Phir duniya ko kafi kareeb se dekh paye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..

Diya hai zindagi jab bhi thokar mujhe yaaron,
Aise zakhmon se hi hum sab kuch seekh paye hai,
Raah-e-zindagi main aise bhi moke aye hai..


~Rahim~
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 11:23:33 AM »
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Shukriya Suresh jee.! Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye sada..!
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 11:24:02 AM »
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awesome creation rahim ji....
sahi kaha suresh ji ne sabhi ke sath hota he.... Clapping Smiley  Applause
 Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause



Takdir ko sath liye chalte he ham,
rona bahot he fir bhi haste he ham,
zakham dikhane se kabhi nahi mitte,
usse DIL me rakh kar masti se jeete he ham....
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 11:25:24 AM »
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Devangi jee shukriya..

Aur ek seekh dene wali chaar lines likhi hai apne..Kay ghum ho zindagi, muskurake jeeyo.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 11:26:52 AM »
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wah ji wah...khoobsurat....atisundar..

dil se daad kubool farmaiye sahab~
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2010, 11:27:43 AM »
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sukriya rahim ji....

Devangi jee shukriya..

Aur ek seekh dene wali chaar lines likhi hai apne..Kay ghum ho zindagi, muskurake jeeyo.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 11:30:24 AM »
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Shukriya Abhi jee..!
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2010, 11:41:56 AM »
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apka bhi shukriya jii
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 11:45:08 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooob Bhai rahim!!!

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: September 15, 2010, 11:46:51 AM »
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Shukriya Khwaish Dost.!
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2010, 01:13:33 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai Rahim bhai...!!!

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«Reply #12 on: September 15, 2010, 02:39:51 PM »
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Bohat Bohat khoob Rahim Bhai........
beautiful creation by ur side........
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«Reply #13 on: September 15, 2010, 06:53:50 PM »
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Rahim sahab Aadaab!

Janab waqai aapki umar kuch jyada nahi hai per aapke khayaaloN ki fikra badi gehri jaa rahi hai... achchi kalaam kahi hai daad kabool kijiye....

Likhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye.......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile          


Jaane kyuN maiN khud se adaawat karta huN
Zindagi har waqt tujhse shikaayat karta huN
         

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«Reply #14 on: September 15, 2010, 07:32:39 PM »
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Shukriya Kapil Dost, Parwaaz jee aur Kashish di..! Teh dil se shukriya.!

Parwaaz jee, apse jan'na hai kay adawat ka mayne kya hai? hum itne ache nahin hai urdu main..Dusri line toh kafi kuch samaj ayi aur achi lagi.!
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