Raat...

by brokenbyluv on December 21, 2010, 03:40:16 PM
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Jab jab ye raat aati hai,
terri yad aur tanhai sath lati hai,

bahut kehti hu ise yu na tarsaya kar mujhe,
per har dafa tujhse milan ki pyas jagati hai,

kabhi mehsus hota hai merre sirhane pe terra aks,
kabhi karwat lete hue tujhe chhu lene ki hasrat bekrari badhati hai,

bite palo ki baate yad kar mujhe jane kya hone lagta hai,
bechain ho jati hu aur terri har baat mujhe behekati hai,

ye kaisa waqt hai ye kaisi tadap hai,
ek unsuljha ehsas har dafa ye raat lekar aati hai,

peher guzarta rehta hai main tujhe sochti rehti hu,
pata nhi chalta jane kab haseen raat subah mein badal jati hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2010, 04:58:57 PM »
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Usual SmileUsual SmileUsual Smile
mst h ji mst
! aye raat zara sa tham ja aaj
         mehboob ki yaad aayee hai !
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«Reply #2 on: December 21, 2010, 05:21:24 PM »
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Shukriya nirala ji...
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ruku
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2010, 01:04:35 PM »
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accha likha hai ji  Applause Applause
keep it up
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2010, 01:05:40 PM »
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Quote from: ruku on December 22, 2010, 01:04:35 PM
accha likha hai ji  Applause Applause
keep it up


Thnx dear...tumne padh liya merri mehnat safal ho gyi...love8
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2010, 01:19:49 PM »
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amajing wording brknlv ji.....bht khubsurat tarike se dil ki tadap ka chitran kya he apne........sach kahu ye kisi ke dil ka haal he jise wo shabd nahi e payi / paya.....i know that person........usko bhi ye bht pasand ayega ......bht khub ji bht khub
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2010, 01:25:40 PM »
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                raat
 kaali andheri darawani si
                raat
tanhaiyon me akele doobati hui
                raat
kaali naagin si fufkarti dasti hui
                raat
mehboob ki yaado ko laati hai
                raat
zigar me laga kar aag bahot tadpati hai
                raat
askon me kabi aansu to kabihoto pr muskuraht sajaati hai
                raat
suhaane khaab dikhati hai
                raat
ujalo ke shor me bhul chuke jo
wo saare zazbaat jagaati hai
raat raat raat raat raat raat
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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2010, 01:33:54 PM »
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Shukriya matrix ji waise tou aksar merre alfaz kasak ji ki feelings se match hote hai aur aksar unke alfazo mein main apna dard bhi dekhti hu..khushi hui ki koi aur bhi hai jo merri kavita se kisi tarah relate hota/hoti hai..shukriya ji...take care...
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2010, 01:35:01 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on December 22, 2010, 01:25:40 PM
                raat
 kaali andheri darawani si
                raat
tanhaiyon me akele doobati hui
                raat
kaali naagin si fufkarti dasti hui
                raat
mehboob ki yaado ko laati hai
                raat
zigar me laga kar aag bahot tadpati hai
                raat
askon me kabi aansu to kabihoto pr muskuraht sajaati hai
                raat
suhaane khaab dikhati hai
                raat
ujalo ke shor me bhul chuke jo
wo saare zazbaat jagaati hai
raat raat raat raat raat raat

Bahut khoob nirala ji...
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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2010, 05:13:18 PM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on December 21, 2010, 03:40:16 PM


Jab jab ye raat aati hai,
terri yad aur tanhai sath lati hai,

bahut kehti hu ise yu na tarsaya kar mujhe,
per har dafa tujhse milan ki pyas jagati hai,

kabhi mehsus hota hai merre sirhane pe terra aks,
kabhi karwat lete hue tujhe chhu lene ki hasrat bekrari badhati hai,

bite palo ki baate yad kar mujhe jane kya hone lagta hai,
bechain ho jati hu aur terri har baat mujhe behekati hai,

ye kaisa waqt hai ye kaisi tadap hai,
ek unsuljha ehsas har dafa ye raat lekar aati hai,

peher guzarta rehta hai main tujhe sochti rehti hu,
pata nhi chalta jane kab haseen raat subah mein badal jati hai.........


Bahut khoob Geet Ji
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #10 on: December 23, 2010, 10:14:38 AM »
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Bahut Khub Geet JI Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: December 24, 2010, 11:55:00 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya rajesh ji n rishi ji...
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«Reply #12 on: December 25, 2010, 04:16:28 PM »
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Shukriya shihab ji..
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