raaten meri ganwaar hui

by bekarar on May 31, 2011, 06:58:46 PM
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seekha-saakha bhool gaya sab "asliyat jab sawaar hui,
din tha mera adabi-shahri, raaten meri ganwaar hui,

dil ki rah gai dil me mere, bol na foote adharon se,
auni-sunai, suna di tujhko, baaten meri udhaar hui,

har baar tere sawarne me, khaami si lagti thi mujhko,
kyun aaj subah bheege pal me teri bindiya hi singaar hui,

tu nahi to ghar bhi hai bojhil, duniya bhar tanhaai hai,
saath tere ghar ki sarhad, ab mere liye sansaar hui


सीखा-साखा भूल गया सब, असलियत जब सवार हुई,
दिन था मेरा अदबी-शहरी, रातें मेरी गँवार हुई,

दिल की रह गई दिल मे मेरे, बोल ना फूटे अधरों से,
सुनी-सुनाई सुना दी तुझको, बातें मेरी उधार हुई,

हर बार तेरे सवरने मे, खामी सी लगती थी मुझको,
क्यूँ आज सुबह भीगे तन पर, तेरी बिंदिया ही सिंगार हुई,

तू नही तो घर भी है बोझिल और दुनियाभर तन्हाई है
साथ तेरे घर की सरहद, अब मेरे लिए संसार हुई,
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2011, 07:09:07 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2011, 09:03:08 PM »
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nice sher
Quote from: bekarar on May 31, 2011, 06:58:46 PM




हर बार तेरे सवरने मे, खामी सी लगती थी मुझको,
क्यूँ आज सुबह भीगे तन पर, तेरी बिंदिया ही सिंगार हुई,
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2011, 05:17:35 AM »
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wah bahut khub bekararji... khub.....

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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..Aapki Lekhni Ki Hum kya Tareef Kare..Aapki Lekhni Humesha Ki tarah lajawab Hai..Mujhe Khaas Taur Par yeh A'shaar bahut pasand aaya..

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"Tu Nahi Hai To Ghar Bhi Hai Bojhil,Duniya Bhar Tanhai Hai
Saath Tere Ghar Ki sarhad, Ab Mere Liye Sansaar Hui"
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manoj ji bahoot bahoot shukriya..pasand farmane ka  Usual Smile
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Quote from: manjum on June 01, 2011, 05:17:35 AM
wah bahut khub bekararji... khub.....

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bahoot shukriya manjum ji......
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2011, 11:09:22 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 01, 2011, 08:02:49 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..Aapki Lekhni Ki Hum kya Tareef Kare..Aapki Lekhni Humesha Ki tarah lajawab Hai..Mujhe Khaas Taur Par yeh A'shaar bahut pasand aaya..

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"Tu Nahi Hai To Ghar Bhi Hai Bojhil,Duniya Bhar Tanhai Hai
Saath Tere Ghar Ki sarhad, Ab Mere Liye Sansaar Hui"

teri har daad sar aankhon par mere bhai  Usual Smile
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bht bht khoob bekarar ji.....
sply last one...
simply superb...
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«Reply #11 on: June 01, 2011, 12:00:58 PM »
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Bekharaar Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah kia kahne janab aapke... waah waah waah
Behad achche ashaar kahe hai janab.. bus dil se daad
aur waah nikal rahi hai Usual Smile          


Quote from: bekarar on May 31, 2011, 06:58:46 PM
seekha-saakha bhool gaya sab "asliyat jab sawaar hui,
din tha mera adabi-shahri, raaten meri ganwaar hui,

Kia kahne janab waah behad gehri kahi hai daad daad daad Usual Smile          

dil ki rah gai dil me mere, bol na foote adharon se,
Suni-sunai, suna di tujhko, baaten meri udhaar hui,

Kia kahne bahut khub Usual Smile Behad achcha sher kaha hai daad Usual Smile          

har baar tere sawarne me, khaami si lagti thi mujhko,
kyun aaj subah bheege pal me teri bindiya hi singaar hui,

Waah janab waah behad khoob kia umdaa sher kaha hai waah dil bagh bagh ho gaya Usual Smile bahut khoob bahut umdaa daad daad daad Usual Smile          

tu nahi to ghar bhi hai bojhil, duniya bhar tanhaai hai,
saath tere ghar ki sarhad, ab mere liye sansaar hui

Bahut khoob daad Usual Smile        



Bekharaar Sahaab behad achche ashaar kahe hai aapne... par muqtasar si kavish ko aur bada dete to mazaa aa jata Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kjiye...
Likhate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on June 01, 2011, 11:49:06 AM
bht bht khoob bekarar ji.....
sply last one...
simply superb...
Bahoot bahoot dhanywaad M_E_I ji
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Bekharaar Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah kia kahne janab aapke... waah waah waah
Behad achche ashaar kahe hai janab.. bus dil se daad
aur waah nikal rahi hai Usual Smile           


Bekharaar Sahaab behad achche ashaar kahe hai aapne... par muqtasar si kavish ko aur bada dete to mazaa aa jata Usual Smile

Humari daad O mubarakbad kabul kjiye...
Likhate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         


Parwaaz sahab aapki daad pakar hi ghazal mukamal hoti hai ..bahoot shukriya aapne samay diya   Usual Smile
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