RAHZANON KO AB MAUQA RAHNUMA NAHEEN DETE......HASAN

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Pesha - war   luteroN   ko  ,  aasra   naheeN   dete ,
RahzanoN   ko   abb   mauqa  ,  Rahnuma   naheeN   dete

Dil  ki  jo  siyahi  hai , labb  pe  aa  hi  jaati  hai ,
Saaf   dil  se   munsif  bhi ,  faisla   naheeN   dete
 
Sabr - o - shukr  se   saari  umr   kaat   letay   haiN ,
Waalidain   bachchoN   ko  ,  bad'dua   naheeN    dete

Rishta  ek   mohabbat   ka , yeh  bhi   Khatm  kar  daala ,
Log   abb   BuzurgoN    ka ,  Fa'tiha    naheeN    dete

Baat   unnki - meri  ,  aa'ee  ga'ee   to    ho    jaatee ,
Chund   apne  hee   mukhlis ,  garr   hawaa   naheeN   dete

Chadhta   darya   bun   jaao , paana   hai   agar   Manzil ,
Khudd   se   raah   ke   patthar ,  raasta   naheeN   dete

Duur   ho   rahee   hai  ,  Tahzeeb   KhandaanoN   say ,
Thodi  bachchoN   ko  Urdu , KyuuN   sikha  naheeN  dete

Tajruba  , 'Hasan'  hum  ko ,  ishq   ka   puraana   hai ,
Hum   magar   bina   maangay  ,  Mashwira   naheeN   dete
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«Reply #1 on: November 10, 2011, 07:56:36 AM »
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bahut khub ...siddiqui sahab ...ek ek lafz pe daad kabul karen ..masa allah kya khub peshkash hai
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 10, 2011, 07:35:13 AM
Pesha - war   luteroN   ko  ,  aasra   naheeN   dete ,
RahzanoN   ko   abb   mauqa  ,  Rahnuma   naheeN   dete

Dil  ki  jo  siyahi  hai , labb  pe  aa  hi  jaati  hai ,
Saaf   dil  se   munsif  bhi ,  faisla   naheeN   dete
 
Sabr - o - shukr  se   saari  umr   kaat   letay   haiN ,
Waalidain   bachchoN   ko  ,  bad'dua   naheeN    dete

Rishta  ek   mohabbat   ka , yeh  bhi   Khatm  kar  daala ,
Log   abb   BuzurgoN    ka ,  Fa'tiha    naheeN    dete

Baat   unnki - meri  ,  aa'ee  ga'ee   to    ho    jaatee ,
Chund   apne  hee   mukhlis ,  garr   hawaa   naheeN   dete

Chadhta   darya   bun   jaao , paana   hai   agar   Manzil ,
Khudd   se   raah   ke   patthar ,  raasta   naheeN   dete

Duur   ho   rahee   hai  ,  Tahzeeb   KhandaanoN   say ,
Thodi  bachchoN   ko  Urdu , KyuuN   sikha  naheeN  dete

Tajruba  , 'Hasan'  hum  ko ,  ishq   ka   puraana   hai ,
Hum   magar   bina   maangay  ,  Mashwira   naheeN   dete
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«Reply #2 on: November 10, 2011, 12:03:25 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:waah waah hasan bhai kyaa daad doon
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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2011, 02:34:25 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 10, 2011, 07:35:13 AM
Pesha - war   luteroN   ko  ,  aasra   naheeN   dete ,
RahzanoN   ko   abb   mauqa  ,  Rahnuma   naheeN   dete

Dil  ki  jo  siyahi  hai , labb  pe  aa  hi  jaati  hai ,
Saaf   dil  se   munsif  bhi ,  faisla   naheeN   dete
 
Sabr - o - shukr  se   saari  umr   kaat   letay   haiN ,
Waalidain   bachchoN   ko  ,  bad'dua   naheeN    dete

Rishta  ek   mohabbat   ka , yeh  bhi   Khatm  kar  daala ,
Log   abb   BuzurgoN    ka ,  Fa'tiha    naheeN    dete

Baat   unnki - meri  ,  aa'ee  ga'ee   to    ho    jaatee ,
Chund   apne  hee   mukhlis ,  garr   hawaa   naheeN   dete

Chadhta   darya   bun   jaao , paana   hai   agar   Manzil ,
Khudd   se   raah   ke   patthar ,  raasta   naheeN   dete

Duur   ho   rahee   hai  ,  Tahzeeb   KhandaanoN   say ,
Thodi  bachchoN   ko  Urdu , KyuuN   sikha  naheeN  dete

Tajruba  , 'Hasan'  hum  ko ,  ishq   ka   puraana   hai ,
Hum   magar   bina   maangay  ,  Mashwira   naheeN   dete


wah wah wah--
lajawaab ghazal Hasan sahab
dil khus kar dia aapki iss ghazal ne

dher saari daad aur mubarakvaad aapki ghazal aur aur aapko

muskurate rahie
khus rahie
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«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2011, 04:55:30 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 10, 2011, 07:35:13 AM
Pesha - war   luteroN   ko  ,  aasra   naheeN   dete ,
RahzanoN   ko   abb   mauqa  ,  Rahnuma   naheeN   dete

Dil  ki  jo  siyahi  hai , labb  pe  aa  hi  jaati  hai ,
Saaf   dil  se   munsif  bhi ,  faisla   naheeN   dete
 
Sabr - o - shukr  se   saari  umr   kaat   letay   haiN ,
Waalidain   bachchoN   ko  ,  bad'dua   naheeN    dete

Rishta  ek   mohabbat   ka , yeh  bhi   Khatm  kar  daala ,
Log   abb   BuzurgoN    ka ,  Fa'tiha    naheeN    dete

Baat   unnki - meri  ,  aa'ee  ga'ee   to    ho    jaatee ,
Chund   apne  hee   mukhlis ,  garr   hawaa   naheeN   dete

Chadhta   darya   bun   jaao , paana   hai   agar   Manzil ,
Khudd   se   raah   ke   patthar ,  raasta   naheeN   dete

Duur   ho   rahee   hai  ,  Tahzeeb   KhandaanoN   say ,
Thodi  bachchoN   ko  Urdu , KyuuN   sikha  naheeN  dete

Tajruba  , 'Hasan'  hum  ko ,  ishq   ka   puraana   hai ,
Hum   magar   bina   maangay  ,  Mashwira   naheeN   dete


Bahut khoob Hasan Bhai
Kya maqta kaha hai...DAAD DAAD DAAD........
Sabhi ashaar laajavab hai  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2011, 07:19:28 PM »
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Merheba, Merheba, Kya Khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: November 11, 2011, 01:22:43 PM »
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Pesha - war   luteroN   ko  ,  aasra   naheeN   dete ,
RahzanoN   ko   abb   mauqa  ,  Rahnuma   naheeN   dete

Dil  ki  jo  siyahi  hai , labb  pe  aa  hi  jaati  hai ,
Saaf   dil  se   munsif  bhi ,  faisla   naheeN   dete
 
Sabr - o - shukr  se   saari  umr   kaat   letay   haiN ,
Waalidain   bachchoN   ko  ,  bad'dua   naheeN    dete

Rishta  ek   mohabbat   ka , yeh  bhi   Khatm  kar  daala ,
Log   abb   BuzurgoN    ka ,  Fa'tiha    naheeN    dete

Baat   unnki - meri  ,  aa'ee  ga'ee   to    ho    jaatee ,
Chund   apne  hee   mukhlis ,  garr   hawaa   naheeN   dete

Chadhta   darya   bun   jaao , paana   hai   agar   Manzil ,
Khudd   se   raah   ke   patthar ,  raasta   naheeN   dete

Duur   ho   rahee   hai  ,  Tahzeeb   KhandaanoN   say ,
Thodi  bachchoN   ko  Urdu , KyuuN   sikha  naheeN  dete

Tajruba  , 'Hasan'  hum  ko ,  ishq   ka   puraana   hai ,
Hum   magar   bina   maangay  ,  Mashwira   naheeN   dete



bahut khoob siddiqui sahab
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«Reply #7 on: November 11, 2011, 01:23:01 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 10, 2011, 07:35:13 AM
Pesha - war   luteroN   ko  ,  aasra   naheeN   dete ,
RahzanoN   ko   abb   mauqa  ,  Rahnuma   naheeN   dete

Dil  ki  jo  siyahi  hai , labb  pe  aa  hi  jaati  hai ,
Saaf   dil  se   munsif  bhi ,  faisla   naheeN   dete
 
Sabr - o - shukr  se   saari  umr   kaat   letay   haiN ,
Waalidain   bachchoN   ko  ,  bad'dua   naheeN    dete

Rishta  ek   mohabbat   ka , yeh  bhi   Khatm  kar  daala ,
Log   abb   BuzurgoN    ka ,  Fa'tiha    naheeN    dete

Baat   unnki - meri  ,  aa'ee  ga'ee   to    ho    jaatee ,
Chund   apne  hee   mukhlis ,  garr   hawaa   naheeN   dete

Chadhta   darya   bun   jaao , paana   hai   agar   Manzil ,
Khudd   se   raah   ke   patthar ,  raasta   naheeN   dete

Duur   ho   rahee   hai  ,  Tahzeeb   KhandaanoN   say ,
Thodi  bachchoN   ko  Urdu , KyuuN   sikha  naheeN  dete

Tajruba  , 'Hasan'  hum  ko ,  ishq   ka   puraana   hai ,
Hum   magar   bina   maangay  ,  Mashwira   naheeN   dete




Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Hasan Ji..

Umda Peshkash..Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab!!!!

Kya Kehne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: November 11, 2011, 07:15:18 PM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab badi der kar di aapne aisi umdaa gazal ko nawaaz ne
meiN kahiN hum padhne se rah naa jate.. bahut khoob janab
shayad aisi kalaam ka intezaar humara zaheN kar raha tha..

behad khoob aur umdaa ashaaroN se nawaaza hai janab, aik aik
ashaar waqai hazaaroN laakhoN daad ka mushtahiq hai.. Usual Smile

humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa aur khub khayaaloN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye.
Khush O aabaad rahiye,
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile   


Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 10, 2011, 07:35:13 AM
Pesha - war   luteroN   ko  ,  aasra   naheeN   dete ,
RahzanoN   ko   abb   mauqa  ,  Rahnuma   naheeN   dete

Matle par bus itna kaheNge janab dono misro par
dili daad hazir hai .. baki kahna hum jaise kam akhal ke bus ki
baat nahi.. Usual Smile   

Dil  ki  jo  siyahi  hai , labb  pe  aa  hi  jaati  hai ,
Saaf   dil  se   munsif  bhi ,  faisla   naheeN   dete
 
Waah waah waah janab kia kahne waah.. bahut umdaa
aik taki si nazar aayi is sher meiN jo kafi umdaa lagi hume bahut
khoob janab daad behad khoob, waqai shayar hai aap jo itni khoob
baat ko aasaani se kah gaye janab daad Usual Smile   

Sabr - o - shukr  se   saari  umr   kaat   letay   haiN ,
Waalidain   bachchoN   ko  ,  bad'dua   naheeN    dete

Masha Allaah janab .. hazaaroN lakhoN carodoN daad
is umdaa khayaal par behad khoob aur achcha sher padha hai daad.. Usual Smile   

Rishta  ek   mohabbat   ka , yeh  bhi   Khatm  kar  daala ,
Log   abb   BuzurgoN    ka ,  Fa'tiha    naheeN    dete

Lillaah Toubaa janab.. Allaah muaf farmaaye hume aur
un sabko jo aise ho gaye hai hum log.. Kia kaheN janab aapke zarf
ke bare meiN.. AllaaH ne aapko behad khoob aur umdaa hafizaa diya
hai ke yeH bhi humari sunnat O faraiz meiN shamil hai jo aapne aise
umdaa sher se sab ki nazar meiN laha .. Allaah aapke zarf ko aur
bhi uNcha maqaam ataa kare.. bahut umdaa sher padha hai janab..
Hasil e gazal meiN agar is sher ka shumar kareN to dusre sheroN ko
kamtari ka muqaam mileNga par waqai behad khoob aur umdaa sher ..
kaha hai daad daad daad .. Usual Smile   

Baat   unnki - meri  ,  aa'ee  ga'ee   to    ho    jaatee ,
Chund   apne  hee   mukhlis ,  garr   hawaa   naheeN   dete

Achcha hai janab daad.. ulaa meiN kuch tabdile
khayaal ki zarurat mehsus ho rahi hai hume.. Usual Smile   

Chadhta   darya   bun   jaao , paana   hai   agar   Manzil ,
Khudd   se   raah   ke   patthar ,  raasta   naheeN   dete

Behad sahiN farmaya janab aur behad asardar baat
kahi hai.. daad janab Usual Smile   

Duur   ho   rahee   hai  ,  Tahzeeb   KhandaanoN   say ,
Thodi  bachchoN   ko  Urdu , KyuuN   sikha  naheeN  dete

Kia kahne janab Masha Allaah behad khoob daad...   

Tajruba  , 'Hasan'  hum  ko ,  ishq   ka   puraana   hai ,
Hum   magar   bina   maangay  ,  Mashwira   naheeN   dete

Waah waah waah kia kahne janab Maqta to behad tajurbekar kaha hai aapne.. waqai dil jeet liya daad.. Usual Smile

par janab bebas ishq ki madat bhi kar diya kijiye kabhi kabhi.. Usual Smile   


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«Reply #9 on: November 12, 2011, 04:11:18 AM »
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on November 10, 2011, 07:56:36 AM
bahut khub ...siddiqui sahab ...ek ek lafz pe daad kabul karen ..masa allah kya khub peshkash hai

sunildehgawani ji, Shukriya , aap  ne  ghazal  padhi  aur  hausla  afzai  ki. Khush  rahiye . Hasan
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«Reply #10 on: November 12, 2011, 04:51:06 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Hasan Ji Umda Peshkash
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: November 12, 2011, 06:37:23 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 10, 2011, 12:03:25 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:waah waah hasan bhai kyaa daad doon

Saini  saheb, aapki  purkhuloos  daad  ke  liye  tah e dil  se   mamnoon  hoon . khush  rahiye . Hasan
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«Reply #12 on: November 12, 2011, 11:24:50 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on November 10, 2011, 02:34:25 PM
wah wah wah--
lajawaab ghazal Hasan sahab
dil khus kar dia aapki iss ghazal ne

dher saari daad aur mubarakvaad aapki ghazal aur aur aapko

muskurate rahie
khus rahie
Usual Smile

sarfira  ji. Aap  ne  ghazal  padhi  aur  apni  nek  khwaahishat se  nawaza . bahut  shukrguzar  hoon. khush  rahiye. Duago , Hasan
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«Reply #13 on: November 12, 2011, 01:05:37 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 10, 2011, 04:55:30 PM
Bahut khoob Hasan Bhai
Kya maqta kaha hai...DAAD DAAD DAAD........
Sabhi ashaar laajavab hai  Applause Applause Applause


mkv  ji , ghazal  padhe  aur  hausla  afzai  ke  liye  bahut  bahut  shukriya . apne  khoobsurat  kalam  se  nawazte  rahiye . Hasan
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«Reply #14 on: November 13, 2011, 02:32:35 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on November 10, 2011, 07:19:28 PM
Merheba, Merheba, Kya Khoob.

Iftakhar  Ahmad  sahab , Hausla  Afzai  ke  liye  bahut  bahut shukriya . Duago , Hasan
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