*~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*:Miscellaneous Shayri

Roja

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Aa gayee hu lautkar fir gaov Ramjaani Chacha,
Aao chu lu mai tumhare paav Ramjaani Chacha..

Dhoop ke paude ugakar log apne bhaag mein,
Chahte hai gulmuher ki chav Ramjaani Chacha

Yeh batakte panchi mujhse poochte hai, kya kahu?,
Kyu kate bergad ke bhude paav Ramjaani Chacha

Dard ka lekar diya ab waqt ko mat dhoondiye,
Ramte jogi ne kiya kab taav Ramjaani Chacha

Jiske aanchal ki kabhi saugand khate they sabhi,
Kyu hai us Radha ke bhari paav Ramjaani Chacha

Aap kehte hai kisi ke pass bhi machis na thi,
Jal gaya fir kaise apna gaav Ramjaani Chacha?


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pandit

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Re: *~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*

«Reply #1 on: February 25, 2009, 03:58:54 AM »

kaafi dard hai issme...

waah roja jee..


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Roja

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Re: *~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*

«Reply #2 on: February 25, 2009, 04:13:42 AM »

Quote from: pandit on February 25, 2009, 03:58:54 AM

kaafi dard hai issme...

waah roja jee..

Is kavita mein sachchayi bhi kafi hai Pandit ji.
Thanks for your appreciation.


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pandit

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Re: *~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*

«Reply #3 on: February 25, 2009, 05:38:44 AM »

Quote from: Roja on February 25, 2009, 04:13:42 AM

Is kavita mein sachchayi bhi kafi hai Pandit ji.
Thanks for your appreciation.

Roja jee..
mujhe tazzub hai....aap har field k poems likh leti hain...
Kammaal hai...


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: *~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*

«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2009, 10:24:30 AM »

Bohat khoob Roja just brilliant work


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chitralsony

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Re: *~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*

«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2009, 10:28:19 AM »

really nice roja ji bhot omda likha hay app nay aur bhot feel kr kay likha hay ,GOD bless u


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Roja

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Re: *~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*

«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2009, 05:03:10 PM »

thanks Pandit ji, Sajid ji, and chitral.
Thank you very much..


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jasbirsingh

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Re: *~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*

«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2009, 05:09:55 PM »

WAH WAH ROJA, BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAP NEY, VERY NICE

JASBIR SINGH


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Pooja

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Re: *~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*

«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2009, 05:16:17 PM »

bahoot khoob Roja!!! Good creation


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smardia

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Re: *~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*

«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2009, 05:29:55 PM »

Gaon ka bahut sahi sachot chitran....kiya hai aapne ROJAJI...."Dhoop ka paudha "...badi achhi upma di hai.... Clapping Smiley

Quote from: Roja on February 25, 2009, 03:32:54 AM


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Roja

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Re: *~*Ramjaani Chacha*~*

«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2009, 04:42:39 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on February 25, 2009, 05:09:55 PM

WAH WAH ROJA, BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAP NEY, VERY NICE

JASBIR SINGH

Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 05:16:17 PM

bahoot khoob Roja!!! Good creation

Quote from: @kaash on February 25, 2009, 05:22:36 PM

very nice Roja ji.... Applause

har ashaar alag tha aur ek alag dard lie.. Clapping Smiley

bahut hi acha likha aapne...

Quote from: smardia on February 25, 2009, 05:29:55 PM

Gaon ka bahut sahi sachot chitran....kiya hai aapne ROJAJI...."Dhoop ka paudha "...badi achhi upma di hai....:clapping:n

Thank you very much dear friends. Yu hi saat dete rehna.


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