Rang mausam ke .....Premdeep

by premdeep on May 28, 2014, 07:37:03 PM
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Nasha hun mein ,mein hi sharaab hun
Thoda hun accha, thoda  kharaab hun

Har rang mausam ke dekhe hain mene
Kaanton ki chubhan mein khilta gulaab hun

Kuch to hai mujhme yun hi nahi jalte wo
Na mein diya hun, na  aaftaab hun

Khwaabon ki dunya ko hakikat na mil payi
Dariya tha kabhi ab ek sailaab hun

Zakhm apne kab talak chupata ye dil
khaali panno ki khuli ek kitaab hun

Wo sochte hain ki door hain mujhse
Unka hi saaya tha, unka nakaab hun
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2014, 07:42:40 PM »
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Nasha hun mein ,mein hi sharaab hun
Thoda hun accha, thoda  kharaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Har rang mausam ke dekhe hain mene
Kaanton ki chubhan mein khilta gulaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kuch to hai mujhme yun hi nahi jalte wo
Na mein diya hun, na  aaftaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khwaabon ki dunya ko hakikat na mili
Dariya tha kabhi ab ek sailaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Zakhm apne kab tak chupata ye dil
khaali panno ki khuli ek kitaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wo sochte hain ki door hain mujhse
Unka hi saaya tha, unka nakaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

lajawaab peshkash premdeep ji RAU performance............Excellent !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2014, 08:05:04 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah bohut umda peshlash waahhhhh dhero daaaaaaaaaaaaaaddddd
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2014, 08:26:42 PM »
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laajawaab!!
bahut khoob!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2014, 08:33:27 PM »
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bahut nayaab hain aapke jazbaat...
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2014, 08:56:47 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on May 28, 2014, 07:37:03 PM
Nasha hun mein ,mein hi sharaab hun
Thoda hun accha, thoda  kharaab hun
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:poore kharaab ho kyon ki tum sharaab ho!
Har rang mausam ke dekhe hain mene
Kaanton ki chubhan mein khilta gulaab hun
  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kuch to hai mujhme yun hi nahi jalte wo
Na mein diya hun, na  aaftaab hun
tum parwaane ho main shamaa hoon  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Khwaabon ki dunya ko hakikat na mili
Dariya tha kabhi ab ek sailaab hun
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Zakhm apne kab tak chupata ye dil
khaali panno ki khuli ek kitaab hun
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wo sochte hain ki door hain mujhse
Unka hi saaya tha, unka nakaab hun
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wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2014, 09:04:34 PM »
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वाह....बहुत खूब......
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2014, 09:19:49 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on May 28, 2014, 07:37:03 PM
Nasha hun mein ,mein hi sharaab hun
Thoda hun accha, thoda  kharaab hun

Har rang mausam ke dekhe hain mene
Kaanton ki chubhan mein khilta gulaab hun

Kuch to hai mujhme yun hi nahi jalte wo
Na mein diya hun, na  aaftaab hun

Khwaabon ki dunya ko hakikat na mil payi
Dariya tha kabhi ab ek sailaab hun

Zakhm apne kab tak chupata ye dil
khaali panno ki khuli ek kitaab hun

Wo sochte hain ki door hain mujhse
Unka hi saaya tha, unka nakaab hun


Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2014, 11:46:28 PM »
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kyaa baat kyaa baat
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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2014, 01:43:30 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 28, 2014, 07:42:40 PM

Nasha hun mein ,mein hi sharaab hun
Thoda hun accha, thoda  kharaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Har rang mausam ke dekhe hain mene
Kaanton ki chubhan mein khilta gulaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kuch to hai mujhme yun hi nahi jalte wo
Na mein diya hun, na  aaftaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khwaabon ki dunya ko hakikat na mili
Dariya tha kabhi ab ek sailaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Zakhm apne kab tak chupata ye dil
khaali panno ki khuli ek kitaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wo sochte hain ki door hain mujhse
Unka hi saaya tha, unka nakaab hun
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

lajawaab peshkash premdeep ji RAU performance............Excellent !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank u soo much saruji
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2014, 01:47:00 PM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on May 28, 2014, 08:05:04 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah bohut umda peshlash waahhhhh dhero daaaaaaaaaaaaaaddddd
sukriya jeet ji
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2014, 02:58:54 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 28, 2014, 08:56:47 PM

wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
thanks a lot sheba ji for beautiful comments
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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2014, 03:15:56 PM »
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Quote from: NakulG on May 28, 2014, 08:26:42 PM
laajawaab!!
bahut khoob!!

shukriya nakul ji
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«Reply #13 on: May 29, 2014, 03:39:40 PM »
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Quote from: deepraghav on May 28, 2014, 08:33:27 PM
bahut nayaab hain aapke jazbaat...
THANKS A LOT DEEPJI
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«Reply #14 on: May 29, 2014, 03:40:49 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on May 28, 2014, 09:04:34 PM
वाह....बहुत खूब......
SUKRIYA AMIT JI
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