rang sab aas-paas hote haiN............Mamta bajpai

by mamta bajpai on April 19, 2011, 02:40:48 PM
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Dhoop me or surkh hote haiN
hum gulaaboN se khaas hote haiN

din hawaaoN ke par pe aate haiN
raat maazee kee baat hote haiN

toot kar shaakh se judaa hee rahe
patte ye badnaseeb hote haiN

khul ke aataa naheeN koi mousam
aap jab bhee udaas hote haiN

khil utthe dil me jab koi gunchaa
rang sab aas-paas hote haiN

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2011, 03:56:17 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2011, 04:23:46 PM »
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maate pranaam……
aasirwaad se mawaziye fir ek baar.…
aapki iss nagme ki ek ek sher lajawaab hai…
bht bht jad khtbsurat kalaam…
kuch sikhati hui kalaam hai…
acha laga bht acha…
aapko meri bht si duayen sada khus rahen…
gham aapse dur rahe hamesha…
bs muje aapke asirwad ki jarurat hai…thodi si apni mamta mujhpar bhi nyochawar karte rahiyega hamesa apna samajh ke Usual SmileUsual Smile…
mann khus hota hai mera apse asirwaad leke…
khus rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2011, 03:58:21 AM »
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wah bahut khub mamtaji......
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2011, 05:47:59 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai     Mamta bajpai ji.....

dikhta nahi koi mousum ka rang jab aap udaas hote hain
khushi hoti hai jab dil mein "rang sab aas-paas hote hain"
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Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2011, 10:24:37 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on April 19, 2011, 02:40:48 PM
Dhoop me or surkh hote haiN
hum gulaaboN se khaas hote haiN

din hawaaoN ke par pe aate haiN
raat maazee kee baat hote haiN

toot kar shaakh se judaa hee rahe
patte ye badnaseeb hote haiN

khul ke aataa naheeN koi mousam
aap jab bhee udaas hote haiN

khil utthe dil me jab koi gunchaa
rang sab aas-paas hote haiN

Mamta Bajpai

BAHUT KHOOB MAMTA JI
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2011, 03:26:44 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob mamtaji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2011, 04:17:54 AM »
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TaaliyoN ke liye bahut bahut shukriya Suresh jee!
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2011, 04:18:31 AM »
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Shukriyaa Rishi!
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2011, 04:24:45 AM »
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Subhash ! tumhaaraa reply hume hameshaa tumhe aasheerwaad dene ko prerit kartaa hai...humare aasheerwaad or duaaoN kee kisee ko is qadar zaroorat hai to woh tum ho....aur mere aaseerwaad se tumhaare mann kee kali prasphutit hoti hai to mere liye bade soubhaagya kee baat hai.....khush raho...humaaraa aasheerwaad or duaayeN tumhaare saath haiN.....
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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2011, 04:26:12 AM »
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Dher saa shukriyaa Manju jee!
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Shukriyaa Cara jee! aap ne jis tarah humare kalaam ko izzat bakhshee woh bhee qaabil e taareef hai....behad shukriyaa...
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Shukriyaa Rahim jee!
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