Rat hoti hai

by nandbahu on May 19, 2012, 12:02:03 PM
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Suraj dhalta hai
andhera hota hai
tare nikalte hain
aur rat hoti hai
darvaje bund hote hain
khirkiyan bund hoti hain
sharir simat tey hain
aur rat hoti hai
chand nikalta hai
uski sheetal chandni mein
do premiyon ka milan hota hai
aur rat hoti hai
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2012, 12:10:58 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on May 19, 2012, 12:02:03 PM
Suraj dhalta hai
andhera hota hai
tare nikalte hain
aur rat hoti hai
darvaje band hote hain
khirkiyan band hoti hain
sharir simat te hain
aur rat hoti hai
chand nikalta hai
uski sheetal chandni mein
do premiyon ka milan hota hai
aur rat hoti hai

CHECK YOUR SPELLING. NICE BLENDING
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2012, 02:05:07 PM »
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Thanx for comments,I have not found any spelling mistake 
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2012, 02:32:46 PM »
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nice acha likha hai magar main marhoom ji ki baat se sehmat hun speling mistake to hai
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2012, 03:47:44 PM »
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