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by theyash on April 06, 2012, 06:19:54 PM
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mohabbat me jaan dedena ye to mohabbat nahi...

ke mohabbat me koi jaan deta hi nahi...

haar jata hai jab koi zindgi se yaha...

to uske paas koi doosra rasta rahta nahi...

ke buzdilo ne bana li hai reet yaha...

jaan dedenge hum magar mohabbat nibhayege nahi...
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2012, 02:31:09 AM »
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Wow aapke jajbat daad diye jane ke kabil h.
Hmarei daaaaad kabooool kijiye.....
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2012, 02:33:26 AM »
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bilkul sahi aur bahut hi umda   Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2012, 05:06:12 AM »
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mohabbat me jaan dedena ye to mohabbat nahi...

ke mohabbat me koi jaan deta hi nahi...

haar jata hai jab koi zindgi se yaha...

to uske paas koi doosra rasta rahta nahi...

ke buzdilo ne bana li hai reet yaha...

jaan dedenge hum magar mohabbat nibhayege nahi...

Very nice! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2012, 08:44:22 AM »
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acha hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2012, 09:12:11 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2012, 09:58:51 AM »
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sukriya sainiji...
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2012, 09:59:39 AM »
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sukriya usha ji & sarfira ji...
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2012, 10:00:49 AM »
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सुन्दर अति सुन्दर
mohabbat me jaan dedena ye to mohabbat nahi...

ke mohabbat me koi jaan deta hi nahi...

haar jata hai jab koi zindgi se yaha...

to uske paas koi doosra rasta rahta nahi...

ke buzdilo ne bana li hai reet yaha...

jaan dedenge hum magar mohabbat nibhayege nahi...
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2012, 10:01:15 AM »
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sukriya parwana ji & soudagarji...
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theyash
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«Reply #10 on: April 07, 2012, 10:02:03 AM »
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sukriya amitji...
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2012, 06:49:21 PM »
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mohabbat me jaan dedena ye to mohabbat nahi...

ke mohabbat me koi jaan deta hi nahi...

haar jata hai jab koi zindgi se yaha...

to uske paas koi doosra rasta rahta nahi...

ke buzdilo ne bana li hai reet yaha...

jaan dedenge hum magar mohabbat nibhayege nahi...


yash ji ye reet to nahin hai. haan buzdil hi zindagi haarte hai.
bahaadur zindagi se pyaar karte hai, khud se pyaar karte hain, rishte se pyaar karte hain aur pyaar se pyaar karte hain.
aap ke qata ki aakri line baat ko clear nahin karti hai. per kalaam acha hai.
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«Reply #12 on: April 15, 2012, 04:22:14 AM »
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sukhri shebaji but bujdilo ne to ise hi reet bana rakha hai...
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