reh-geer (NM)

by vb on November 10, 2010, 03:08:12 PM
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«Reply #1 on: November 10, 2010, 03:55:10 PM »
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bahut bahut hairat angez andaaz mein pesh kiye gaye yeh ehsaas, chaunka dete hain pal bhar ke liye,
yeh khazana jazbaaton ka kahan raha dafan, sochtay hain tu dang reh jaatay hain pal bhar ke liye
kosish kartay hain is martaba bhi na tareef honay paaye, koi jhalak na dikhnay paaye kisi surat,
khud say daga kar jaatay hain magar, in lafzon ke nazar ho jaatay hain jab ehsaas pal bhar ke liye

ooper likhi lines ko hargiz aik shayari ke roop na parha jaaye...but kuch aiey parhiye, ke din-b-din aapki shayari yun nikhar ke saamnay aa rahi hay ke tareef ho gayi...
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«Reply #2 on: November 10, 2010, 04:04:10 PM »
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buhat shukriya anonymoususer jee! ... ye khazaanay yahin reh jaanay hain... yahin dafan hain.. jub jub beetay lamhon ki kasak angraai liya karay... yahaan charaaghaan kartay rahiyay ga...
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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2010, 06:11:49 PM »
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waaaah vb ji. kamaal ki nazm kahi hai aapne. kya kucchh nahin keh daala aur kitne dilkash bayaan mein aur woh bhi ek mukhtasir andaaz mein.

kya dardnaak combination kiya hai romanticism, mysticism, irony aur pathos ka.

daad qabool karein har misre ki har lavz ki ....

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«Reply #4 on: November 11, 2010, 04:58:52 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob vb ji`
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zarra jee! buhat shukriya aap ka...
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«Reply #9 on: November 11, 2010, 03:19:32 PM »
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Vb Ji shukriya aapka ki aapne humeye padhne ka mouka diya.......
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hum tu apnay geeton ka baazaar laga kar bethay hain
aatay jaatay duniya waalay jo chaahen so haazir hay
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«Reply #12 on: November 11, 2010, 03:48:09 PM »
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Tarannum me saje ye jazbaat tmhare
bade dilkash lagte h mujhe  ye ehsaas tmhare
na jane kaise likh jati hun inhe padhkar main b
jo uthte hain inhe padhkar dil me tufaan hamare
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«Reply #13 on: November 11, 2010, 04:38:49 PM »
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Nice creation VBji.........

Tere maasoom chehre pe ye sammohit karti muskaan
Katll karney ka tera ye naya andaaz laga pehchaana


Quote from: vb on November 10, 2010, 03:08:12 PM

Teri maasoom nigaahon ki fasoon-kaar hansi   
Dil k khoon karnay ka ik aur bahaana jaanaa
Laakh samjhaya k is baar hay lehjay main tarap
Dil ne is baar magar mera kaha na maanaa

Jaanta hoon meray geeton ki udaasi k iwaz   
Teri veeran nigaahon main chamak ku aai
Ake reh-geer ne insaaniyat say sharmaa kar
Doobtay shakhs ko, tinkay ki jhalak dikhlai


fasoon-kaar = jaadu kar denay wali, seher angez
iwaz = in return
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«Reply #14 on: November 11, 2010, 04:50:35 PM »
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Ay rah-geer train k safar me ess nagme ki khushboo kaise aayee
Teri yaad mai doobte mere dil ki aawaaj kaise tujhe dee sunaayee

Gujregi tu mere bahut kareeb se,kaisi ye bebassi ki ghadee aayee
Mil na sakungee tujhse mein aaj soch-soch kay aa rahi hai rulayee





Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on November 11, 2010, 03:48:09 PM
Tarannum me saje ye jazbaat tmhare
bade dilkash lagte h mujhe  ye ehsaas tmhare
na jane kaise likh jati hun inhe padhkar main b
jo uthte hain inhe padhkar dil me tufaan hamare
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