RISHTAA..(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on April 21, 2009, 12:24:26 PM
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                 HO KABHI SHIQWAA MUJH SEY,
                 TO BATAA DENAA.KHAMOSH.!
                 MAIN RISHTON MAIN KABHI
                "KHAAMIAN" RAKHTAA NAHIN..!!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2009, 12:27:35 PM »
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Nice linesKhamosh_aawaaz ji, Apka Yoindia main sawagat hai!!

apki line parr kar jo lines man mai aai likhne ja rahi hu...

khamia kab kaha se aa jaati hai darwaja khatkhatate
na kar guman!! khuda pe iska koi zor chalta nahi...
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2009, 12:56:55 PM »
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Nice linesKhamosh_aawaaz ji, Apka Yoindia main sawagat hai!!

apki line parr kar jo lines man mai aai likhne ja rahi hu...

khamia kab kaha se aa jaati hai darwaja khatkhatate
na kar guman!! khuda pe iska koi zor chalta nahi...

BAHAUT KHOOB AND THANX.................PUJA
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«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2009, 01:19:21 PM »
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                 HO KABHI SHIQWAA MUJH SEY,
                 TO BATAA DENAA..!
                 MAIN RISHTON MAIN KABHI "KHAAMIAN" RAKHTAA NAHIN..!!!

Kam lafzon main kitni badi baat keh di aapne Khamosh Ji, bohot khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2009, 01:19:55 PM »
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Nice linesKhamosh_aawaaz ji, Apka Yoindia main sawagat hai!!

apki line parr kar jo lines man mai aai likhne ja rahi hu...

khamia kab kaha se aa jaati hai darwaja khatkhatate
na kar guman!! khuda pe iska koi zor chalta nahi...

Nice reply Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2009, 05:19:41 PM »
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Wah bohat khoob K_A... and beautiful addition by Pooja..

Na jhaak mere andar tu hoker badgumaa.N

Main andar se kuch aur baher se kuch aur dikhta nahi....
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«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2009, 05:24:37 PM »
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Khaamiyaan Bhale Tum Zara Nikal Bhi Lo To Koi Baat Nahi,.
Khoobiyaan Bohat Si Banaa Rakhi Hai Maine, Rishte Jordne Ke Liye,.

_______________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2009, 04:54:32 AM »
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Nice linesKhamosh_aawaaz ji, Apka Yoindia main sawagat hai!!

apki line parr kar jo lines man mai aai likhne ja rahi hu...

khamia kab kaha se aa jaati hai darwaja khatkhatate
na kar guman!! khuda pe iska koi zor chalta nahi...










BAHUT KOOB KAHAA AAPNEY....SHKRIAA........PUJA SAHIBA
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2009, 04:55:45 AM »
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Khaamiyaan Bhale Tum Zara Nikal Bhi Lo To Koi Baat Nahi,.
Khoobiyaan Bohat Si Banaa Rakhi Hai Maine, Rishte Jordne Ke Liye,.






















ZABARDAST....JN.........CHAA GAYE AAP....THANX

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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2009, 04:57:35 AM »
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Thanks KA ji, Celmira, Sajid!!

Nice lines Lil bro
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2009, 04:58:20 AM »
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Wah bohat khoob K_A... and beautiful addition by Pooja..

Na jhaak mere andar tu hoker badgumaa.N

Main andar se kuch aur baher se kuch aur dikhta nahi....






AISI GHUSAAKHI MAIN NAHIN KAROON GAA..!!! NICE LINES GHAYAL SB

  AAP KAA TO JAWAB NAHIN .....SHUKRIA
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«Reply #11 on: April 22, 2009, 05:00:04 AM »
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Kam lafzon main kitni badi baat keh di aapne Khamosh Ji, bohot khoob.































SHUKRIA....DR SAHIBA
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2009, 05:02:31 AM »
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Rishto ke bandhan
bandhan mai bandhe Rishte
Riste hai lahu
lahu se sinchte Rishte

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«Reply #13 on: April 22, 2009, 05:12:14 AM »
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Bahut Khoob K.A,Gehri Baat Kahin Hai Aapne..
Bahut Ache Pooja..
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«Reply #14 on: April 22, 2009, 05:14:06 AM »
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Thanks Khwaish ji
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