RISHTAA..(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on April 21, 2009, 12:24:26 PM
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #15 on: April 22, 2009, 05:34:58 AM »
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Bahut Khoob K.A,Gehri Baat Kahin Hai Aapne..
Bahut Ache Pooja..
Applause Applause Applause


 THANX
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #16 on: April 22, 2009, 06:16:52 AM »
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AISI GHUSAAKHI MAIN NAHIN KAROON GAA..!!! NICE LINES GHAYAL SB

  AAP KAA TO JAWAB NAHIN .....SHUKRIA

Bohat sukhriyaan K_A....and very beautifully said Pooja  Clapping Smiley
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #17 on: April 22, 2009, 07:02:56 AM »
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Nice lines KA
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #18 on: April 22, 2009, 07:33:28 AM »
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bohat khoob K_A ji....
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«Reply #19 on: April 22, 2009, 09:04:13 AM »
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Bahaut gheri baat kehdi K.A jee...Nice additions Pooja jee, Azeem bhaijan aur Sajid saheb... Applause
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«Reply #20 on: April 22, 2009, 09:07:21 AM »
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                 HO KABHI SHIQWAA MUJH SEY,
                 TO BATAA DENAA..!
                 MAIN RISHTON MAIN KABHI "KHAAMIAN" RAKHTAA NAHIN..!!!

Rishte nibhane par bhi logon ne khamian dhundli tujmain Rahim,
Duniya walon ko shayad sache ashiqon ki zarurat nahin hai...
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«Reply #21 on: April 22, 2009, 09:10:32 AM »
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Rishte nibhane par bhi logon ne khamian dhundli tujmain Rahim,
Duniya walon ko shayad sache ashiqon ki zarurat nahin hai...


dh.................sahi kahaa
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #22 on: April 22, 2009, 10:43:29 AM »
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Wah bohat khoob K_A... and beautiful addition by Pooja..

Na jhaak mere andar tu hoker badgumaa.N

Main andar se kuch aur baher se kuch aur dikhta nahi....

Ghayal Ji aapka sher bada pasand aaya, Waah. Applause
SARVESH RASTOGI
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #23 on: June 08, 2009, 10:04:57 AM »
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bohat khoob K_A ji....


THANX
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #24 on: June 08, 2009, 10:05:39 AM »
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Bahaut gheri baat kehdi K.A jee...Nice additions Pooja jee, Azeem bhaijan aur Sajid saheb... Applause

SHUKRIYA...RAHIM SB
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #25 on: June 28, 2009, 01:06:34 PM »
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Nice lines KA


THANX RH
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #26 on: July 01, 2009, 08:31:45 AM »
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Rishto ke bandhan
bandhan mai bandhe Rishte
Riste hai lahu
lahu se sinchte Rishte




BAHUT KHOOB POOJA JI
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Roja
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«Reply #27 on: July 01, 2009, 08:42:48 AM »
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Rishte nibhane par bhi logon ne khamian dhundli tujmain Rahim,
Duniya walon ko shayad sache ashiqon ki zarurat nahin hai...

Bahut sahi aur accha likha hai aapne Rahim.  Usual Smile
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Roja
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«Reply #28 on: July 01, 2009, 08:45:57 AM »
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Nice linesKhamosh_aawaaz ji, Apka Yoindia main sawagat hai!!

apki line parr kar jo lines man mai aai likhne ja rahi hu...

khamia kab kaha se aa jaati hai darwaja khatkhatate
na kar guman!! khuda pe iska koi zor chalta nahi...

Pooja di bahut accha likha hai aapne.(Aapko padkar bahut din ho gaya hai di..  sad7)
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«Reply #29 on: July 01, 2009, 08:55:06 AM »
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 Wah wah bahut khoob Khamosh ji,kamaal ka likha aapne Applause Applause Applause.
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