SAAF SUTHRA HAMARA AANGAN HAI ................HASAN

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Tan   Langoti , na   Ghar ,  na   Ration   hai ,
Kitna   uttam   yeh   Lok   Shaasan   hai

Kaam   ke   waastay   Samay   hai   kahaaN ,
Roz   Anshann   hai , roz   Bhaashan   hai

Girvee   saari   ZameeN   hai   DehqaaN   ki ,
Aur  ,  Sar   par   khada   Mahajan   hai

Sundari   baithi   Kesh   bikhraaye  ,
Roop   ka   maano   barsay   Saawan   hai

Eik   hai   usska   Zaahir - o - Baatin ,
Tujh   se   Sachcha   to   tera   Darpan   hai

Rekha   Lachhman   ne   kheench   dee   hai , magar
Bun  ke   Darvesh   aaya   Raavan   hai

Beti   Nirdhan   ki   ho  rahi   hai   Bidaa ,
Kaan   Jhumkay   na   haath   Kangan   hai

Bhaai   ke   Haath   Bahna  kee  Raakhi  ,
Pyaar  ka   kitna   pyaara   Bandhan   hai

Sajni   se   ghantoN   Phone   per   Baatein   ,
Kitna   vyaakul   Bidesi   Saajan   hai

Koi   Deewar   apne   beech   naheeN  ,
Saaf  -  Suthra   hamara    Aangan   hai

Jaan   se   pyaari   tuu   hai  Bharat   Maa  ,
Tujh ko   arpann   yeh   mera   Tan - Man   hai

Janmay   Shaitaan   hain   yahaaN   bhi   magar
Dharti   mere   Watan   ki   Paawan   hai

Baantna   pyaar   Laksh   hai   mera  ,
Pyaar   meiN   marna   mera   Jeewan   hai

kiss liye   baithhe   ho   udaas , 'Hasan'
Hum ko   batlao   kaisi   Uljhan   hai
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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2012, 07:14:04 AM »
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 Applause Applause :clap:lajwaab peshkash hai hasan saheb lafz naheen hain jo taareef kar saken albattaa shuruaat ke sheron par aapkee shaan men marhoom Adam godwee saheb kaa ek sher haazir hai. kaaju bhare plate men whyskee gilaas men.
                        utraa hai raam raj vidhaayak niwaas men.
hazaaron daadqubool karen.
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«Reply #2 on: January 20, 2012, 07:47:08 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 20, 2012, 07:05:25 AM

Tan   Langoti , na   Ghar ,  na   Ration   hai ,
Kitna   uttam   yeh   Lok   Shaasan   hai

Kaam   ke   waastay   Samay   hai   kahaaN ,
Roz   Anshann   hai , roz   Bhaashan   hai

Girvee   saari   ZameeN   hai   DehqaaN   ki ,
Aur  ,  Sar   par   khada   Mahajan   hai

Sundari   baithi   Kesh   bikhraaye  ,
Roop   ka   maano   barsay   Saawan   hai

Eik   hai   usska   Zaahir - o - Baatin ,
Tujh   se   Sachcha   to   tera   Darpan   hai

Rekha   Lachhman   ne   kheench   dee   hai , magar
Bun  ke   Darvesh   aaya   Raavan   hai

Beti   Nirdhan   ki   ho  rahi   hai   Bidaa ,
Kaan   Jhumkay   na   haath   Kangan   hai

Bhaai   ke   Haath   Bahna  kee  Raakhi  ,
Pyaar  ka   kitna   pyaara   Bandhan   hai

Sajni   se   ghantoN   Phone   per   Baatein   ,
Kitna   vyaakul   Bidesi   Saajan   hai

Koi   Deewar   apne   beech   naheeN  ,
Saaf  -  Suthra   hamara    Aangan   hai

Jaan   se   pyaari   tuu   hai  Bharat   Maa  ,
Tujh ko   arpann   yeh   mera   Tan - Man   hai

Janmay   Shaitaan   hain   yahaaN   bhi   magar
Dharti   mere   Watan   ki   Paawan   hai

Baantna   pyaar   Laksh   hai   mera  ,
Pyaar   meiN   marna   mera   Jeewan   hai

kiss liye   baithhe   ho   udaas , 'Hasan'
Hum ko   batlao   kaisi   Uljhan   hai


Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Saheb!!!

Umda peshkash..Kya Kehne Saheb

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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2012, 12:04:11 PM »
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hasan saheb... lajawab... bemishal... kya kahun?? bas...
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2012, 12:47:20 PM »
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bahot khoob Hasan ji--
har sher ek darpan hai jo jhakjorta hai--

!
beti nirdhan ki ho rahi hai bidaa
kaan jhumke na haath kangan hai
!
mere dil me yeh sher hamesha ke lie ghar kar gaya

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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2012, 06:11:45 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 20, 2012, 07:05:25 AM

Tan   Langoti , na   Ghar ,  na   Ration   hai ,
Kitna   uttam   yeh   Lok   Shaasan   hai Applause

Kaam   ke   waastay   Samay   hai   kahaaN ,
Roz   Anshann   hai , roz   Bhaashan   hai Applause bahut khoob

Girvee   saari   ZameeN   hai   DehqaaN   ki ,
Aur  ,  Sar   par   khada   Mahajan   hai Applause

Sundari   baithi   Kesh   bikhraaye  ,
Roop   ka   maano   barsay   Saawan   hai Applause

Eik   hai   usska   Zaahir - o - Baatin ,
Tujh   se   Sachcha   to   tera   Darpan   hai Applause Vaaah

Rekha   Lachhman   ne   kheench   dee   hai , magar
Bun  ke   Darvesh   aaya   Raavan   hai  Applause kya baat hai

Beti   Nirdhan   ki   ho  rahi   hai   Bidaa ,
Kaan   Jhumkay   na   haath   Kangan   hai  Applause ek sacchaai

Bhaai   ke   Haath   Bahna  kee  Raakhi  ,
Pyaar  ka   kitna   pyaara   Bandhan   hai Applause Applause

Sajni   se   ghantoN   Phone   per   Baatein   ,
Kitna   vyaakul   Bidesi   Saajan   hai Applause vaaaah, virah ki vyathaa

Koi   Deewar   apne   beech   naheeN  ,
Saaf  -  Suthra   hamara    Aangan   hai : clap: DAAD DAAD

Jaan   se   pyaari   tuu   hai  Bharat   Maa  ,
Tujh ko   arpann   yeh   mera   Tan - Man   hai Applause

Janmay   Shaitaan   hain   yahaaN   bhi   magar
Dharti   mere   Watan   ki   Paawan   hai Applause Applause

Baantna   pyaar   Laksh   hai   mera  ,
Pyaar   meiN   marna   mera   Jeewan   hai Applause bahut khoob

kiss liye   baithhe   ho   udaas , 'Hasan'
Hum ko   batlao   kaisi   Uljhan   hai Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob Hasan Sir
aisa laga jaise holi kheli hai apne.. ab to kareeb bhi aa rahi hai..har tarah ke rang bikhre pade hai..
Bahut khoob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2012, 09:17:11 PM »
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Hasan bhai aadaab
Achchi kavita pesh karne per dili mubarakbaad qubool fermayeiN
 
Hindi shabdoN meiN Likkhi kavita bhi
Aap ki sattayta ke  kaaran hai
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2012, 07:09:05 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 20, 2012, 07:05:25 AM

Tan   Langoti , na   Ghar ,  na   Ration   hai ,
Kitna   uttam   yeh   Lok   Shaasan   hai

Kaam   ke   waastay   Samay   hai   kahaaN ,
Roz   Anshann   hai , roz   Bhaashan   hai

Girvee   saari   ZameeN   hai   DehqaaN   ki ,
Aur  ,  Sar   par   khada   Mahajan   hai

Sundari   baithi   Kesh   bikhraaye  ,
Roop   ka   maano   barsay   Saawan   hai

Eik   hai   usska   Zaahir - o - Baatin ,
Tujh   se   Sachcha   to   tera   Darpan   hai

Rekha   Lachhman   ne   kheench   dee   hai , magar
Bun  ke   Darvesh   aaya   Raavan   hai

Beti   Nirdhan   ki   ho  rahi   hai   Bidaa ,
Kaan   Jhumkay   na   haath   Kangan   hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bhaai   ke   Haath   Bahna  kee  Raakhi  ,
Pyaar  ka   kitna   pyaara   Bandhan   hai

Sajni   se   ghantoN   Phone   per   Baatein   ,
Kitna   vyaakul   Bidesi   Saajan   hai

Koi   Deewar   apne   beech   naheeN  ,
Saaf  -  Suthra   hamara    Aangan   hai

Jaan   se   pyaari   tuu   hai  Bharat   Maa  ,
Tujh ko   arpann   yeh   mera   Tan - Man   hai

Janmay   Shaitaan   hain   yahaaN   bhi   magar
Dharti   mere   Watan   ki   Paawan   hai

Baantna   pyaar   Laksh   hai   mera  ,
Pyaar   meiN   marna   mera   Jeewan   hai

kiss liye   baithhe   ho   udaas , 'Hasan'
Hum ko   batlao   kaisi   Uljhan   hai


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«Reply #8 on: January 21, 2012, 08:30:41 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2012, 08:33:46 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 20, 2012, 07:05:25 AM

Tan   Langoti , na   Ghar ,  na   Ration   hai ,
Kitna   uttam   yeh   Lok   Shaasan   hai

Kaam   ke   waastay   Samay   hai   kahaaN ,
Roz   Anshann   hai , roz   Bhaashan   hai

Girvee   saari   ZameeN   hai   DehqaaN   ki ,
Aur  ,  Sar   par   khada   Mahajan   hai

Sundari   baithi   Kesh   bikhraaye  ,
Roop   ka   maano   barsay   Saawan   hai

Eik   hai   usska   Zaahir - o - Baatin ,
Tujh   se   Sachcha   to   tera   Darpan   hai

Rekha   Lachhman   ne   kheench   dee   hai , magar
Bun  ke   Darvesh   aaya   Raavan   hai

Beti   Nirdhan   ki   ho  rahi   hai   Bidaa ,
Kaan   Jhumkay   na   haath   Kangan   hai

Bhaai   ke   Haath   Bahna  kee  Raakhi  ,
Pyaar  ka   kitna   pyaara   Bandhan   hai

Sajni   se   ghantoN   Phone   per   Baatein   ,
Kitna   vyaakul   Bidesi   Saajan   hai

Koi   Deewar   apne   beech   naheeN  ,
Saaf  -  Suthra   hamara    Aangan   hai

Jaan   se   pyaari   tuu   hai  Bharat   Maa  ,
Tujh ko   arpann   yeh   mera   Tan - Man   hai

Janmay   Shaitaan   hain   yahaaN   bhi   magar
Dharti   mere   Watan   ki   Paawan   hai

Baantna   pyaar   Laksh   hai   mera  ,
Pyaar   meiN   marna   mera   Jeewan   hai

kiss liye   baithhe   ho   udaas , 'Hasan'
Hum ko   batlao   kaisi   Uljhan   hai



waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janab kavita pe bhi mahaarat hai. maan gaye ustaad. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 21, 2012, 09:56:21 AM »
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Applause Applause :clap:lajwaab peshkash hai hasan saheb lafz naheen hain jo taareef kar saken albattaa shuruaat ke sheron par aapkee shaan men marhoom Adam godwee saheb kaa ek sher haazir hai. kaaju bhare plate men whyskee gilaas men.
                        utraa hai raam raj vidhaayak niwaas men.
hazaaron daadqubool karen.
Saini saheb bahut mamnoon hoon aap ki hausla afzai aur mouzoo ki munasibat se Adam saheb ka khubsurat tanzia sher quote karne ke liye.Yaqeen hai ki aap ka saath isi khubsurat andaz mein milta rahega. Duago , Hasan
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«Reply #11 on: January 21, 2012, 10:11:36 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 20, 2012, 07:05:25 AM

Tan   Langoti , na   Ghar ,  na   Ration   hai ,
Kitna   uttam   yeh   Lok   Shaasan   hai

Kaam   ke   waastay   Samay   hai   kahaaN ,
Roz   Anshann   hai , roz   Bhaashan   hai

Girvee   saari   ZameeN   hai   DehqaaN   ki ,
Aur  ,  Sar   par   khada   Mahajan   hai

Sundari   baithi   Kesh   bikhraaye  ,
Roop   ka   maano   barsay   Saawan   hai

Eik   hai   usska   Zaahir - o - Baatin ,
Tujh   se   Sachcha   to   tera   Darpan   hai

Rekha   Lachhman   ne   kheench   dee   hai , magar
Bun  ke   Darvesh   aaya   Raavan   hai

Beti   Nirdhan   ki   ho  rahi   hai   Bidaa ,
Kaan   Jhumkay   na   haath   Kangan   hai

Bhaai   ke   Haath   Bahna  kee  Raakhi  ,
Pyaar  ka   kitna   pyaara   Bandhan   hai

Sajni   se   ghantoN   Phone   per   Baatein   ,
Kitna   vyaakul   Bidesi   Saajan   hai

Koi   Deewar   apne   beech   naheeN  ,
Saaf  -  Suthra   hamara    Aangan   hai

Jaan   se   pyaari   tuu   hai  Bharat   Maa  ,
Tujh ko   arpann   yeh   mera   Tan - Man   hai

Janmay   Shaitaan   hain   yahaaN   bhi   magar
Dharti   mere   Watan   ki   Paawan   hai

Baantna   pyaar   Laksh   hai   mera  ,
Pyaar   meiN   marna   mera   Jeewan   hai

kiss liye   baithhe   ho   udaas , 'Hasan'
Hum ko   batlao   kaisi   Uljhan   hai



koi diwaar apne beech nahin...kya khoob kahaa hai.bahut pyara aur gahra kalaam hai ji.
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«Reply #12 on: January 21, 2012, 12:23:40 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Saheb!!!

Umda peshkash..Kya Kehne Saheb

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Khwaish saheb , Bahut shukriya aur bahut duaaein , Hasan
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«Reply #13 on: January 21, 2012, 05:35:21 PM »
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hasan saheb... lajawab... bemishal... kya kahun?? bas...
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mann ji .  bahut bahut shukriya . khush rahiye . Duago, Hasan
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«Reply #14 on: January 21, 2012, 06:55:20 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on January 20, 2012, 12:47:20 PM
bahot khoob Hasan ji--
har sher ek darpan hai jo jhakjorta hai--

!
beti nirdhan ki ho rahi hai bidaa
kaan jhumke na haath kangan hai
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mere dil me yeh sher hamesha ke lie ghar kar gaya

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Sarfira ji. Bahut khushi ho rahi hai
ki meri nacheez koshish aap ko pasand aaayi.
Hausla afzai ke liye tahedil se shukriya.Duago,Hasan
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