Saari Raat Teri Yaad Mein Dhalti Rahi....Shihab

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    Is  Qadar   Ehsason  Ki  Shamma  Jhalti  Rahi
   Ki Saari  Raat  Teri  Yaad Mein  ,  Dhalti  Rahi.
 
   Rat Bhar Behta Raha Soch Ke Sagar  Mein Tu
   Aur Koi Hasrat  Si Jaise  Dil  Mein , Palti Rahi.
 
   Is Qadar Thak Si Gayi  Aankhein Intizar Men
   Ki  Kabhi  Band  Hui , Aur Kabhi  Khulti Rahi.

   Mana Tere Aane  Ka Wada Nahi Tha, Phir Q?
   Aahat Aahat Pe Ye Dhadkane, Machalti Rahi.

   Ye Kaisi Raah Pe Lake Khada Kar Diya Tune
   Ki Sath Uljhan Thi,Aur Uljhan Hi Chalti Rahi.


                  ~Shihab~
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2010, 03:01:20 AM »
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     Is  Qadar  Ehsason Ki Shamma Jhalti  Rahi
   Ki Saari  Raat Teri  Yaad Mein,  Dhalti  Rahi.
 
   Rat Bhar Behta Raha Soch Ke Sagar Men Tu
   Aur Koi Hasrat  Si Jaise Dil Mein, Palti Rahi.

   Is Qadar Thak Si Gayi Aankhen Intizar Men
   Ki  Kabhi  Band Hui, Aur Kabhi  Khulti Rahi.

   Mana Tere Aane Ka  Wada Nahi Tha Phir Q?
   Aahat Aahat Pe Ye Dhadkane Machalti Rahi.

   Ye Kaisi Raah Pe Lake Khada Kar Diya Tune
   Ki Sath Uljhan Thi Aur Uljhan Hi Chalti Rahi.


                  ~Shihab~


Very Impressive .... very touching......Shihab Ji ! nice creation....tahe dil se daad hazir hai...yunhi likhe raheN... Khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2010, 06:22:08 AM »
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   Bahut pyara likha hai Shihab ji. Intezaar ko bahut khoobsurti se bayaan kiya hai. icon_thumleft
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2010, 10:41:18 AM »
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waah kya baat hai Shihab ji... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne... bahut hi umda ... hamesha ki tarha sabse alag...aur bahut hi pyara... !!!
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2010, 03:39:03 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2010, 06:38:57 PM »
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inhi uljhanon me khokar main
raat bhar jaagti soti rahi

kuch tum keh gaye kuch ankaha raha
main uss ankahe ko hi kyun bar bar sunti rahi

kuch to keh rahi thi teri wo madhosh nazrein
jo meri dhadkan bhi tere dil k sath dhadakti rahi....
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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2010, 11:16:53 AM »
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Dil Se Nikli Har Cheez Dusre Ke dil Ko Chuti Hai..

Bahut Hi pyaare Jazbaat!!!!

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Mere Bhai.. icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2010, 12:13:30 PM »
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Waah Mere Bhai Waah, Superb Mind Blowing Bohat Achche Likha Hai Tumne,.

Pardhke Bohat Achcha Laga Yunhi Likhte Rehna yaar, Hume Inspiration Milegi,.

May Allah Bless You
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2010, 12:09:52 PM »
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haan ji shihab ji me waiting for ur reply
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2010, 08:19:30 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob shihab ji..raat k sannate mein gunjati dil ki iss tadap ko apne bakhubi lafzo mein utara hai...good job my frnd.. icon_thumleft icon_thumleft
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«Reply #10 on: July 14, 2010, 06:20:34 PM »
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bahoot khoob shihab sahb,ek behtreen taqleeq bazm ko ata ki hai aap ne ..har shair umda aur purlutf laga..daad qubool karein janab ..
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«Reply #11 on: July 16, 2010, 05:40:55 AM »
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bahoot khoob likha shihab bro....puri ghazal makhmal ki tarah lagi padhne me (amazing flow) aur mahsoos karne me dil me chudhi..wah bhai wah daad kabool karen
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«Reply #12 on: July 16, 2010, 11:24:23 AM »
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    Is  Qadar  Ehsason Ki Shamma Jhalti  Rahi
   Ki Saari  Raat Teri  Yaad Mein,  Dhalti  Rahi.
 
   Rat Bhar Behta Raha Soch Ke Sagar Men Tu
   Aur Koi Hasrat  Si Jaise Dil Mein, Palti Rahi.

   Is Qadar Thak Si Gayi Aankhen Intizar Men
   Ki  Kabhi  Band Hui, Aur Kabhi  Khulti Rahi.

   Mana Tere Aane Ka  Wada Nahi Tha Phir Q?
   Aahat Aahat Pe Ye Dhadkane Machalti Rahi.

   Ye Kaisi Raah Pe Lake Khada Kar Diya Tune
   Ki Sath Uljhan Thi Aur Uljhan Hi Chalti Rahi.


                  ~Shihab~


wah sihab ji bade dino bad aapko padhne ka avsar prapta hua he ~~ bahut hi uttam pravishti ki he apne~~

ham yad me unki dhalte rahe tanhai me yunhi dhalte rahe
na subah thi na shama thi meri zindagi me roshni karne ko
ek raat ayi mohabat me pighalne lagi or pighalti rahi~~
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«Reply #13 on: September 13, 2010, 02:42:00 AM »
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     Is  Qadar  Ehsason Ki Shamma Jhalti  Rahi
   Ki Saari  Raat Teri  Yaad Mein,  Dhalti  Rahi.
 
   Rat Bhar Behta Raha Soch Ke Sagar Men Tu
   Aur Koi Hasrat  Si Jaise Dil Mein, Palti Rahi.

   Is Qadar Thak Si Gayi Aankhen Intizar Men
   Ki  Kabhi  Band Hui, Aur Kabhi  Khulti Rahi.

   Mana Tere Aane Ka  Wada Nahi Tha Phir Q?
   Aahat Aahat Pe Ye Dhadkane Machalti Rahi.

   Ye Kaisi Raah Pe Lake Khada Kar Diya Tune
   Ki Sath Uljhan Thi Aur Uljhan Hi Chalti Rahi.


                  ~Shihab~


sweet n simple
bahut hi khoobsurat peshkash hai bhai
sachme maza aa gaya padke bahut achey.

ALLAH Pak tujhey khush rakhe ameen
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«Reply #14 on: September 14, 2010, 07:51:37 AM »
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shihab sahab daad hazir he~

jalti rahi shama par zindagi na ban saki
subah aayi kai raat bad par sham na dhal saki
ek boond roshni ke peeche me bhagta raha
roshni mili par mere paas na reh saki~
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